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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on January 16, 2009
    ho ho hoooo looks like all lucius had to hear was that hermione was open sexually and he seems even more interested... and that would have been hot to read her and severus in a chair with draco walking in i like it....
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  • From smmz79 on January 16, 2009
    wow their relationship is going to be interesting for a while and you can see the tension a little
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  • From smmz79 on January 16, 2009
    hmm so first impression lucius was attracted to her without knowing who she was.... poor lucius but it is good to see he has some of his personality still in tact
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  • From smmz79 on January 16, 2009
    wow now this looks interesting i wonder why severus is mad her??? hmmm that should be interesting....
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  • From dynonugget on December 07, 2008
    Congratulations! This chapter has won runner-up in "Best Het" in the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal! Please feel free to come collect your banner at http:// community dot livejournal dot com / smutastic award/24552 dot html and post with your story. Congratulations again!
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  • From TriniMinx on November 23, 2008
    Not bad and I'm going to read 2 and 3, but still. The Hermione in THIS series annoys me to no end...
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  • From TriniMinx on November 23, 2008
    Hmm, okay. I just read up to chapter 6. And while I always LOVE Lucius in your stories...this Hermione...she's annoying. I want to slap her. She's the type of girl I would take my stiletto and whack upside the head.
    You know I love you and I love your stories, but seriously...what were you thinking?

    I hope this story's Hermione "improves" on me!
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  • From on October 12, 2008
    What a fun erotic read. I'm glad that there is more, with Severus and Lucius to the rescue. So many great moments, though one of my favourite visuals is when Hermione was terrified by the eel. I could just picture her climbing up Lucius in a panic. Brilliant opening to the triology. Thanks!
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  • From CoCoM on August 04, 2008
    Oh. My. Word. Yet again, you have amazed me. This is a freaking awesome fic! I was just....blown away, really. I am thanking the heavens above that there are still TWO installments left for me to read, well, consume really is probably a better word. The naughty bits were sooooo nice! You have such a talent for these things. I astounding, really. High class smut is what you offer your readers and I will keep on coming back for more everytime! :-P
    With each challenge our two lovers had to meet I was giggling more and more (you would never guess I am a 26-year-old woman rather than a like fifteen year old girl, would you?). And I am a bit cross without myself for not reviewing every, or most every, chapter as I prefer to do but I was reading at work again. Not good, I realize but how am I am supposed to help it?! I can't, simple as that.
    I am completely fascinated by this Hermione and Lucius and definitely with the Snape element as well. I am looking forward to reading the second part which I believe you said would feature him strongly. AND was there perhaps mention of a three-some *goes into cardiac arrest from fangirl palpitations*....Oh my. LOL
    FANTASTIC job!
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  • From CoCoM on August 04, 2008
    OMG! I was laughing so loud reading this chapter. It was fab. The thought of Hermione and Severus going at it while Draco looked on AND Hermione staring at him until they finished, as well as Severus saying she should invite him to join....well, my mouth was hanging open. I am so pleased to read about this fiesty, independant Hermione. I despise when she is portrayed as weak, overly naive,etc. But not here. I love it, simple as that!
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  • From CoCoM on August 04, 2008
    Hehe, loving the UST (even if they are unaware that is what it is yet). And really glad that Lucius gets to clean up and get back to being the suave wizard we all love (and lust after)!
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  • From CoCoM on August 04, 2008
    Ooooh, This is a great start! Cannot wait for the appearance of our favourite DeathEater! Also, interested to see why exactly Severus is cross with Hermione.
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  • From Yocum1219 on June 21, 2008
    Wow!!! That was amazing. I haven't actually read this chapter, I'm going straight over to the sequel, so it would be moot to do so! :-)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on May 29, 2008
    Miii, I really liked this story! Hm... yes... I liked the smut.. I'm such a naughty little girl... Ah, well. It's not just the smut, I think you are very good with writing dialog, and all I need to like a story is a good dialog. The rest I think you can figure out yourself... But you do that too! But I can see that you have written quite many fics, so I guess you have quite a lot of experience... which it good. Very good... becuase that gives me much more to read! MAHAHA.
    Ah, well, I hope you will post Nimue's Island when it's ready and done ^^ I'm looking forward to read it! And I hope there will be some Hermione/Severus/Lucius action.. nammy nammy in the tummy (or some other bodypart... oh, well).
    Take care!
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  • From calaminehorn on May 19, 2008
    Yes! Two hot, dark, possessive wizards on one island together with the object of their affections... this new fic is going to be delicious, I can tell.

    I love your writing, by the way. While waiting for you to start posting I read your others. Extremely talented and quick to update... I'm in heaven.

    Post it quick before I become mad with anticipation!
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