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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From chickaboo on May 16, 2008
    *Squeals* Oooooh I'm hooked on the new fic already!! PLEASE start posting it soon!!

    I LOVED this story more than I can even begin to describe. Seriously, one of my all time faves!
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  • From jessirose85 on May 16, 2008
    I love this preview..looks like there maybe some fighting over the affections of Miss Granger between these two..oh but hopefully they will be with her together...love this threesome...its my fav one...loved it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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  • From jessirose85 on May 15, 2008
    This was a great ending to this installment...please update with the new one soon xxxx
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  • From luvlivsmile on May 15, 2008
    Aww I really liked the last "goodbye" kiss Can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 15, 2008
    That was great! I like how you gave us highlights of the night. By giving us the moments that mattered you are able to give us a better story. Great job and please update soon.
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  • From carha on May 15, 2008
    Once again you keep us coming back for more and more. Great job. Looking forward to the ending, and dreading it at the same time.
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  • From Utopia on May 15, 2008
    Trust Hermione to be thinking about the welfare of the archaeological evidence! lol!

    I've got my kama sutra handy, and I'm ticking off as I read, lol.

    The mistresses were probably waiting for Narcissa to vanish from the equation and hoping that by obeying him they'd make themselves candidates for her replacement! Hermione doesn't give a rats arse about his money or name, she knows what brings pleasure and isn't afraid to go for it.

    I've said it before, and I'll say it again: I ADORE HOW YOU'VE DEVELOPED HERMIONE IN THIS FIC! I don't think I've EVER seen ANYTHING like it! I LOVE IT!

    I can imagine the scene of Hermione straddling Lucius, moving over him with abandon and with her hand over his mouth. It is a POWERFUL image and paints a very clear picture in my head! WOW. *bows to SG*

    I'm really not a fan of M/F anal, which makes me a HUGE hypocrite as I love my M/M slash. *I don't understand that*. You make it so beautiful, I could read it all day. *sigh*.

    He DIDN'T take the potion. *blink* What the feck would he be like if he HAD have taken it?! Lucius on Viagra must be TERRIFYING!

    53 is only a baby in the magical world, he could live to 200, I think??

    *sobs* Kissing goodbye. They aren't saying goodbye, but it is the end of this little sexual paradise where nobody has interrupted them. They have to face the big wide world now, and the big wide world has opinions. I really do feel sorry for them, reality isn't so private.

    They opened the temple, but have only excavated their emotions and passions - the team still has to get in there and CAREFULLY catalogue everything. Perhaps Morganna is sated enough to let them do it; let them clear the rubble and Death Eater mess away; let them open the temple to the (adult) public. Perhaps she'd appreciate more people entering her temple and being passionate?

    There'd be thousands of tourists come to the temple, a thousand kisses and quickies in hidden chambers would surely keep her content. It would probably help lots of wizarding couples too.

    Oh. I can't even give that a rating. It was simply AMAZING.


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  • From on May 15, 2008
    Great chapter! I love how Hermione was so shocked to learn that Lucius didn't take a potion!! Can't wait for more.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 15, 2008
    no magical viagra for lucius??? well, good show lucius!! i'm tired now...it was not easy keeping up with him! ha ha...more please???
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  • From Malfoysgirl on May 15, 2008
    Wow SG that chapter was extremely hot. I can't believe that this story is almost over, but I also can't wait for the next installment. I just love your writing SG, it's better than mine. Mine's good to of course, but you konw what I mean. Your a great writer. Please add more soon
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  • From carha on May 14, 2008
    SMUT!!! Yay! I love Morgana lol.
    Another great chapter from a total fabulous author. Please update soon
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  • From jessirose85 on May 14, 2008
    I see this is coming to an end..this part anyway...love you writing...its always mesmorising and exotic...great work xxxxx
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  • From Malfoysgirl on May 14, 2008
    Great updates SG! I really can't wait for more! Please add more soon
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  • From luvlivsmile on May 14, 2008
    YEAH!!! Finally I really felt bad for Lucius. Jail for 10 years then night after night of teasing.
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  • From Utopia on May 14, 2008
    I don't think Sev was cuddled as a child, and thus he doesn't know how to touch or cuddle as an adult. I'll cuddle him, if you want.

    He's the perfect gentleman, if you ignore the dark mark, previous crimes and a heck of a lot of dodgey politics. lol.

    Yeah, Sev likes to keep himself to himself, his only romantic attachment (Lilly) went up in smoke. He's a man who learns from his mistakes, thus he's not prepared to try again. (ps. I review as I read, so it might seem a bit choppy and fragmented).

    Ah ha! that's the Lucius we love and loathe. lol.

    Wheeeeeeee! You've just described my DREAM bedroom, but I want a really dark red, rather than blue. Maybe not the mirror, no, no mirror above the bed.

    No matter what you do you just can not replicate the snug, wet heat of a woman. eh? there are different types of wanking? Really?

    Well, at least Morganna isn't so much of a sadist to not let them be protected or without healing potion.

    Has Hermione EVER been seduced. I can't see Ron being able to do it (well, not without reading from that book he had in DH); and I don't think Sev ever needed to seduce her, and he probably wouldn't bother as seduction tends to be of a tactile nature.

    He's so fascinated with her hair! For someone with such unruly locks, this has to be a real plus for Hermione!

    Does Sev like being told what to do then? She's certainly making a lot of demands and giving orders. Is our Sevvie a smidge on the submissive side? Though, that bodes well for a 3some.

    Awww. CUDDLES! YAY!

    Oh... off the scale luv! 100/10


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