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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From carha on May 12, 2008
    That was a fun chapter. Definately looking forward to your next update
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  • From ANON - angeleye68 on May 12, 2008
    absolutely wonderful!! So many forget that sharing food between two people can be a very erotic experience it you set it right. Well done!! I must say I would be more than happy to share chocolate covered strawberries with Lucius as well as other chocolate covered, umm, things! As always, you do not fail to hit your mark! Chapter 13 is by far one of my favorites of all your chapters in all of your stories. Yumm!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 12, 2008
    this was a brilliant chapter doll! :D
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 12, 2008
    oh that was hot!!! i'll share my desserts with lucius any day and i don't need Morganna to force me too it! lol, i am ready for the next serving!
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  • From on May 12, 2008
    This was a good one. I like how they are doing things without a promt. Good progression of the story.
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  • From Utopia on May 12, 2008
    The last exam of phase two is done! And it went better than I thought it would!

    Vanity, thine name is Lucius.

    Can I recommend the Ultimate Guide to Fellatio by Violet Blue. It's a cracking book that is quite frankly brilliant!

    Asparagus isn't a particularly nice... um... flavour. It's of the same like as garlic. It doesn't taste nice.

    Chocolate. Chocolate and Lucius in the SAME sentence? *whimpers*

    She's not submissive, but she likes it rough and feral, rather than sweet and gentle. Ron never stood a chance.

    I say this time and time again, if the potion/ritual/thingy that turned him back into something resembling human couldn't manage a nose - what chance would a penis have!

    Nice oral scenes, verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice indeed.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 12, 2008
    NOOOO!!! You can't just stop there!!! More story ASAP please!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, yeah, I'm enjoying it very much, just in case you can't tell. Your writing is very descriptive and easy to read, addictive almost, like Monsieur Malfoy...
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  • From luvlivsmile on May 11, 2008
    Awesome chapters! I hope you are having a wonderful Mother's Day
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  • From ANON - Shetan on May 11, 2008
    This is one of my favourite fanfics the characters of Lucius and Hermione have been drawn wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - JMarie on May 11, 2008
    I love it! Thanks for the mother's day present! (I got 2 little girls, ages 2 & 4, and a boy on the way)
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  • From Utopia on May 11, 2008
    *Launches into Disney song* Arabian niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiights like Arabian daaaaaaaaaaaaaaays.

    I like Sev's parting message: spank arse, dress n go. lol. Sounds so him

    I have a copy of the Kama Sutra with some beautiful illustrations in it. I love the Arabian-style art. My local curry house has some fabric pictures that are covered in sequins on the walls, and they are beautiful!

    Option A or option B... would it matter? I wouldn't mind.

    Most blokes will gladly let their ladies wash their hair for them. Andy practically begs me to do his.

    Patchouli is a very 'Arabian' scent. its kinda rosey but earthy at the same time.


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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 11, 2008
    woo things are looking up for our favourite twosome! the lucious locks of lucius malfoy...mmm, i would be among many of those woman who chatterd and mooned over his beautiful hair LOL, happy mothers day SG! hope you have a great day....*sends lucius over to worship SG for the day*
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  • From Utopia on May 11, 2008
    Well, at least Lu has comfort in mind ;)

    I have a feeling that outside the temple they've been gone for half an hour or something? Time doesn't seem to be important there.

    Poor Lucius, he's all manners and polite, but Hermione tells it like it is. I like it.

    Hermione's following the rule Dumbledore gave her: Fear of the name only increases the fear of the thing itself. Mudblood is a word in the wizarding vocabulary, ok, it's not a very nice word - but it doesn't bother her anymore. Evidently, it does bother Lucius.

    I can see a semi-tanned Lucius (that complection can't be sun-friendly, but I can't see a lobster either) cuddling a tired baby Draco and humming as he watches the sunset. Its a really happy image.


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  • From ANON - Anguloce on May 11, 2008
    mmmm...yum. can't wait for more!
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  • From carha on May 11, 2008
    Woohoo a smutty chapter, or pretty close to it :)
    I was happy to see another chapter up today. Looking forward to your next update!
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