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Reviews for Adventurous Hearts: The Temple

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 08, 2008
    this was a great chapter SG, i love the idea of lucius in them sort of bathing shorts LOL, *shivers* imagine his long lean legs....*drools* hehehe! i cant wait for more of this amazing story! xx
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  • From eileenmilner on May 08, 2008
    I have had a wonderful day. I ate a lovely breakfast reading a new chapter of
    your story, I then went shopping, with my daughter.
    Arriving home I opened a new bottle of a superb white wine, and went onto
    the site, to find a brilliant new chapter.

    Thank you for a great start and end to my day.

    I really love your Lucius, Best wishes,
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  • From carha on May 08, 2008
    This is a great story. I cant wait to see what happens next and what Morgana has in store for our lovely couple. And a note to Utopia, that was a lovely poem you wrote. And it definately suits our miss Snape_Goddess very well. Cheers mate and please soon update!
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  • From SilentTremor on May 08, 2008
    i love it so far! PLEASE update soon. I can't wait to read more
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  • From dolphindreamer on May 08, 2008
    Highly amusing as always, I love this couple! I also rather enjoy the pictures the bathing suits made me laugh, Lucius thinks he can have skin galor showing yet Hermione's suit does not. Question, was Hermione's swim top kinda like a tube top? I think it would have trouble staying on... Anyways so glad you updated, super excited that you're writting again, your my favourite author on this site! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 08, 2008
    I am loving it so far. And I am in total agreement about the bathing suits that so many of the European men wear. Why on God's green earth they would want to wear that tiny thing is beyond me, but then I don't get the appeal of thongs either. Personally, I've only thought ones lover should be that intimate with ones person. LOL! Keep up the good work and please update faster if you can.
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  • From Utopia on May 08, 2008
    I just got in from my Molecular Genetics exam, and it went a heck of a lot better than I thought it would! Reading this is my break time.

    I hope Morganna doesn't go in for the furry side of sex!

    I wonder when last Lucius had his hair brushed by anyone other than his barber?

    Nice to see Hermione is proud of being female in a mans domain! Go girl!

    It's like the Rakiki thing in the Lion King when he whacks Simba over the head with his stick! lol!

    *cries* another two characters in another jenre I love are both heavily scarred, one has moved on and accepted it; the other is ashamed of something not his fault. Incidnelty they too are blonde and raven characters. Poor Sev and Lucius. Its a wonder that Voldie's bunch didn't mutiny!

    I really do like the Hermione/Snape dynamic. I have had more male friends than female ones, though sex was never a part of it; I understand where she's coming from.

    Awww... manners suck. What's wrong with skinny dipping? (Other than it tends to get you arrested once you hit puberty).

    I had a rather awful Borat image then. Thanks. *snort*

    I'm up here! lol! Looks like Lu had his eyes in her cleavage! lol!
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on May 08, 2008
    Yum!! This is a great story with wonderful characterisations, I'm glad Hermione has some spunk, so often in future stories she's this repressed, mousy woman. As for Lucius, that man is a gift from God, (Jason Issacs too!).

    Can't wait for more!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 07, 2008
    Chapter 8: Hermione is free and easy about sex, but Lucius is a bit more old school
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  • From LaBibliographe on May 07, 2008
    Chapter 7: I do love Lucius snoring for some reason. So cute. (Not so cute when hubby does it
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  • From Shalengreh on May 07, 2008
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!
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  • From Gertie on May 07, 2008
    I'm so excited to find out what happens next! This story is positively thrilling. Is the Remus story next? If so I think I'll owe you my soul. And P.S. I'm so with you on the boy shorts. Nothing makes me feel sexier, especially when they are brighly colored.
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  • From Utopia on May 07, 2008
    Send Lucius this way! I don't care what colour his balls are!!!

    Is it possible to have an inconspicuous wank??

    Wooo! Hermione the voyeur! Though, Its quite the sight to wake up to on a morning. An adonis incubus having a meeting with madam palm and her five daughters.

    What a brilliant description of female masturbation! I can't do it with my other half in the same building - never mind watching! You hit the nail on the head with that one!

    Phwar! I wanna snog Lucius toooooooooooooo!

    Ha ha! We'll have to disagree on that one, give me dentalfloss any day! Big knickers mean that time of the month.


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  • From on May 07, 2008
    I am ever so pleased that you have started a new story! This one is off to a great start!! I love the fact that you have more parts to tis already planned. I love how Hermione is so bold in this story. Too many times she is just an object for the male character. Great job on this. Neither of the characters seem to be one dimensional. Can't wait for another update!
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  • From goldentrio on May 07, 2008
    I love this new story. The banter between the two of the them is absolutely amazing to read. i can't wait to read more, it's already becoming so addictive.
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