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Reviews for Unity

By : doyoueverwonder
  • From lilashannah on January 27, 2009
    Love the story so far but if it's a story about school unity you might want to add some of the other houses.What do Harry and Ron think about what is going on? I always love it when Draco and Hermione get together.Can't wait to see what prank they pull next.
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on January 17, 2009
    RE: chapters five and six

    I think that it is very cool that Draco and Hermione are working together against the jerks in Slytherin house. It is great that the painting in the Slytherin commonroom is spying for them (DM & HrG), and that the first years are behind Hermione for treating them right. I thought that it was so cool how well Hermione's repelling charm worked to protect her and at the same time attack other by giving them what they try to use on her--brilliant!

    ~*~*~
    *SQUEE*
    OMG--how absolutely delicious, extremely hot/sexy as hell, Hermione and Draco's coming together in a sexual frenzy--I LOVE IT!
    ;~D

    Very well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From kazfeist on January 05, 2009
    There's a pretty good plot here, particularly with the unique twist of the re-Sorting. I am not sure that Slytherin House wouldn't realize Hermione's abilities earlier, though. They would do so, I think, even out of self-preservation. I mean, this is set after the war, in which she was a major player, right? I look forward to seeing how you develop the rest of the story. :D
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on June 25, 2008
    Please, Please, Please, UPDATE soon!!!
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on May 26, 2008
    Oh I cant wait to see slytherins reaction
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    RE: chapter three

    Too freaking funny--dear gods, I love how both Draco and Snape complemented her and are in effect befriending her. I especially love how Snape won the bet as to when she would get her new housemates back. Brilliant!

    Please update soon!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    Re: chapter one

    ::cackling uproariously:: Too freaking cool Hermione being sorted into Slytherin!

    I love this story!
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  • From BritishQT13 on May 11, 2008
    INGENIOUS!!!! absolutely ingenious...I bloody love it! please continue...
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  • From Camryn31 on May 10, 2008
    aaaah yaaay yaaaaay
    a funny snape, a nice draco a slytherin-y hermione
    yaaay *applauds*
    cmon, next chapter, pleaase!! :D
    i love it
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 09, 2008
    a good update. i think you forgot to mention what house pansy was sorted into...did she stay in slytherin? other than that, i am still interested in seeing where this story goes....
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  • From comeoutandplay44 on May 06, 2008
    So far it's pretty good. You def. write more so people can understand what your plot is and ect. I think you should leave harry and ron out of slytherin so they can be super protective of hermoine... of course i don't know where your story is going so it's hard to tell where they should be.
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  • From Camryn31 on May 06, 2008
    hahahaaa sooo cool!!! but draco should stay in slytherin or this wouldnt work, right?!?
    i like how you described the ron/hermione backround, coz i really really dont think they should be a couple. hes okay as a friend, i guess... but hes a total nutcase... how did jk rowling get the idea he would be suitable for our hermione, the brains of the trio?!?!? sry, im rambling...
    anyway, great start, i like where this is going
    update sooooon cant wait!!! (haha and harrys reaction... oohohoho)
    NICE
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  • From butterfly22503 on May 06, 2008
    I really hope you continue, this seems like a wonderful story!
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on May 06, 2008
    Hermione in Slytherin....I can kinda see it.
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  • From skydancer on May 06, 2008
    I'm sooooo glad someone picked up on the "sorted to soon" Dumbledorism. This looks like its going to be a fun ride!
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