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Reviews for Keep On Loving You

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  • From dominique1 on May 13, 2008
    i stll thinkthey should be mated because it justyuck to have have him wanting a child update soon please
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  • From sanda on May 13, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From h2elena on May 13, 2008
    short but good hopefully there will be more soon. I'd love to see harry/lucius as bonded veela mates they are so hot and there definitely not enough harry/lucius stories out there, keep up the good work. please email me when you update. helenaloud@gmail.com
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  • From alma on May 06, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From h2elena on May 06, 2008
    Ok um its a little rushed with the plot so many things seem to be going on at once. I do like that you have made lucius part elvish and i love harry with lucius. I look forwrd to reading more. Update soon. Nice job.
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  • From alma on May 06, 2008
    Good start, I hope Tom isn't up to no good.
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  • From Lucifoy on May 06, 2008
    i like it so far.. its kinda fast and you could add some details and a lil bit more description, but still.. i love it so very a lot much!! lol, keep it coming!
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  • From akume on May 06, 2008
    Awesome chapter two. Liked the whole Lucius being a spy, but not for 'ol Dumbledore. Until next time.
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  • From voldemortsgrl on May 06, 2008
    Interesting...more please...this is really good so far.
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  • From dominique1 on May 06, 2008
    you could make them soulmates and don't forget let harry become a older before you start sex but let luc realize that harry is his mate when he see them I'm not a writer but know a lot of good plots i read thousands of books and fanfic for funny
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  • From dominique1 on May 06, 2008
    okay i like what i ve read so far i hope that luc makes harry happy oh and tom needs to pat for being greed
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  • From Bonecollector on May 06, 2008
    Writing on paper always looks longer then when its typed. love this story can't wait to read more
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  • From Bonecollector on May 06, 2008
    Very good. this is a very good beginning
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  • From sanda on May 06, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From lazycrazykitten on May 06, 2008
    Yay! A meeting with Lucius is coming soon. Spy for the elves? That's a nice little twist.
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