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Reviews for Unlocked

By : IsobelBlack
  • From kitsuko999 on July 08, 2009
    This is really great writing and 'what could have been' scenes from the 6th and 7th book. And the smut is very descriptive and hot. Lovely hotness indeed. I do hope you'll consider adding another chapter or two when you have the chance to write some more on this story. And I love the way you portray Draco. It's not like in every story with Draco being bottom that people can make him not so weak looking and easily hurt. For as a human its common to be sensitive and depressed from losses for we feel emotions, but that is no excuse for Draco to be a sodden mess. However, I really like this Draco you are portraying in your story, for he's fragile, yes, but he's a fighter and I like that. Looking forward to reading more of your material.

    ~SasuNaru723~

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  • From thrnbrooke on December 01, 2008
    Oh my!!! Soooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From callistianstar on November 25, 2008
    Oh my! This is fantastic! I love how you changed the scene there, very believeable, and with the state Draco and Snape were in back then, very possible. I'm a bit worried over the way Lucius died, and hope that Voldemort doesn't have the power to kill whoever has the Dark Mark [including Draco]. This is beautifully written. I look forward to how Draco's involvement changes the story, and to Harry and Draco's budding relationship. Wonderful job.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 22, 2008
    it was fucking awesome!
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  • From Calrissian18 on May 06, 2008
    Breath-taking. The imagery alone... wow, speechless. I got so caught up that when it ended I was left completely bereft. Beautifully, masterfully done, much like your other. I loved the dialogue between Ron, Hermione, and Harry, it was very canon and I can picture it clearly even though you gave no descriptions as to how the characters were delivering those lines. Brilliant! My former statement holds true, I look forward to more from you.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 06, 2008
    O.o That was soooo interesting...and the smut was excellent! MORE!
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  • From bananasforyou on May 06, 2008
    i loved it more please!!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 06, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From sonykit on May 06, 2008
    hi! i so love vulnerable!draco fics. it allows us to see a side of draco that was not really explored in canon. harry taking him along to the horcrux hunt was a nice touch, expecially since they did not go as an established couple. it adds to the realism of the story. i honestly did not know whether to laugh or not in the locker scene. it was a surprise, a pleasant one. ;)
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