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From LaBibliographe on May 28, 2008
Chapter 12: You know, you said 12 was a short chapter,
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From ANON - Flowerchild on May 28, 2008
I really like this story. Hope Hermione injures Lucius badly for what he's done, no matter his reasons for doing it.
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From LaBibliographe on May 28, 2008
Chapter 11: Yum, blindfolded oral sex with Lucius licking. What an erotic image that is! It
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From LadyVoldemort87 on May 28, 2008
Oh my god! So Ly is a Lestrange? How inspired!!! I love that!! *giggles* What is Luci doing locking her in a guest room, has he gone mental? This is Hermione Granger he is dealing with! I thought he had a brain, but its plain to see the one that is in his trousers is ruling the roost LOL. Poor Hermione, Death Eaters are total bastards, and being locked up like that cruel, made me a little sniffley. This chapter was amazing Doll, I cant wait for more!
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From ANON - Nemesis on May 28, 2008
OH, NO, LUCIUS!!
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From LadyofClunn on May 28, 2008
The besotted idiot! One would think Lucius Malfoy would have enough resources to find out about who lives in that cottage. But no, he is so overeager, that he apparates all over the country and mucks up royally. *sigh* Since he was already suspecting what happened to Juliet, when she didn
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From carha on May 28, 2008
Wow, what a terrible ordeal she went through. At least we now know who the father is...
Poor Hermione. Stupid Lucius. I hope he gets smarter soon.
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From gorgeousbowneyes on May 28, 2008
@ chapter thirteen

holy shintucky mushrooms.

(I can't spell shintucky so excuse the spelling error)

But seriously, he should have realised that even just breaking into JULIET's house would be a crime. Breaking and entering, Lucius, HELLO!!!! No matter that she turned out to be Hermione Granger and best friend to Harry Potter who are both close to the Minister of Magic, breaking into a woman's home where she has a child and standing over her while she's in her bed is NOT a good idea. To then kidnap the both of them.... WHAT ON EARTH WAS HE THINKING!?!?!?!?!?!?! At the very least he should have realised that he just needed to calm her down and explain who he was and why he was there and that he couldn't stop thinking about her and that he meant her no harm. It was such a silly idea!! He obviously wasn't thinking AT ALL.

It's good to hear the story of what actually happened to Hermione Granger in one spot. You can kind of put two and two together before this chapter, but I wouldn't have guessed that they'd physically abused her as well. Seeing it told, especially by Severus, was really good for the story. He's someone who's not so close to Hermione Granger, and isn't blinded by rage of what happened, but can understand how horrific it would have been, and how inhumane it was. Plus, now that the story is progressing more into the Lucius/Hermione aspects, it's good to know her full background so we can align ourselves with what she would be going through. I really don't want to see how Harry reacts to the news of what Lucius has done, but at the same time I really want to see it. I'm expecting a huge blow-up on Harry's behalf. At the same time, I almost don't expect him to find out just yet. I'm thinking Lucius' best move would be to simply talk to Hermione and explain everything. If he displays how honestly sorry he is and that he never meant to hurt her and allows her to go and report him she wants, I think she'll understand. I don't think she would press charges on him. And then it would be up to her to tell Harry what had happened. And sure he would be furious but he'd have to listen to what SHE wanted. Of course that all depends on her forgiving him, which might not happen.

Oh and the other thing I wanted to recommend/request - some more scenes from the Theatre. After all, the story is titled Wizard's Porn. Perhaps Lucius can run from his problems momentarily by going back to his BDSM stage for a little and then coming back to deal with everything. Although I realise at the moment it would be hard to get them both back to the Theatre and working together obviously with where the story is at. Perhaps a flash back to one of the nights they performed together? Or perhaps it might have to wait until after this whole thing blows over and they're now together or something before they go back to the Theatre and permanently do the 'Vanilla Sex' stage.

OK well, that's enough musings from me! Keep it up, I'm loving the story and looking forward to more.
~gorgeousbowneyes
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From gorgeousbowneyes on May 28, 2008
@ chapter twelve

So Kingsley's a Slytherin at heart is he? That's kinda cool, I never stopped to think about what house he would have been in. Kingsley's a good man, he's been great to Hermione. It'll be good to have a trust fund for Lysander (I hope the spelling is right there) especially since Hermione probably couldn't afford to save for him, needing to concentrate on the here and now everyday costs. When she takes up the post of Deputy Minister however, it brings up the question to me of will she be on the pay roll, and presuming that she is it should be a fairly considerable amount. Her financial situation should ease up a bit, and if she continues with her work at the Theatre it would only add to it. Technically she would be able to afford to pay rent - and Kinglsey can ensure that being her boss and possibly managing how much she would get paid. Oh and I saw the mention of Harry's other half *raises eyebrows expectantly* and you did say just a tad more slash for me :P Seriously though, don't feel you need to include stuff just for my sakes ;) only if it will be beneficial to the story.

And the stuff with Ron! Loved it! Not that it's good for Hermione or anything, but seriously he really did push her too far, literally. How could he do such a thing? If the baby had been terminated because of that - it would have been a form of murder where I live. As it is abortion is considered a form of murder and therefore illegal in my state (QLD Australia - the laws on abortion aren't the same in NSW, so of course it would depend on laws in England as to whether he'd be committing murder.).

And Lucius probably has found the location of the cottage. So much for just Harry, Kingsley and Hermione knowing where it is. But I doubt he'd give out her whereabouts once he knows who she really is. Looking forward to seeing their confrontation. You said in an earlier chapter that their bodies were relatively the same so they should basically recognize each other on a basic level, presuming they get each other's clothes off, which is probably not on the cards for their very first meeting outside of the Theatre

And a plot bunny for a HP/DM!!!! I'm excited! Please do keep me updated for when you start posting it - my email is phoenix_fire_cat@yahoo.com if you feel the need to contact me via email, alternately you can place a review on any of my stories.

Now, I'm off to read the next chapter you have posted, but I thought I should share my thoughts on this chapter first.
~gorgeousbowneyes
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From ANON - linmo on May 28, 2008
For a story start with pure smut, it turned out to be very (bitterly) sweet. I would hope it is Droca rather than Lucuise but Draco is still very young in you story so Lucuise is perfect for her.
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From chickaboo on May 28, 2008
That was a great little filler chapter. So I've been wondering and wondering....we know Hermione was raped but that she chose to keep the baby (for which is applaud her btw...oh and stupid Ron, someone should transfigure him into a bug and trap him in a jar for a while....Rita Skeeter anyone? lol And yes I know she was an animagus). But will we ever find out who was the father? Or doesn't she know? And I can't wait to find out Lucius's reaction to finding out that his Juliet is Hermione. Anyway, great update and as always I can't wait for more!!
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From ANON - Shetan on May 28, 2008
Very enjoyable story, please update soon
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From on May 28, 2008
I like the plot so far. Each turn, more and more interesting. Well done. Thanks!
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From carha on May 27, 2008
That was a great chapter. I'm glad you found a way to get her the job. And I forgot to mention earlier that I absolutely love the name you chose for her son. Lysander definately suits her style. And thanks for explaining what happened with Ron. Stupid prick. So, Lucius found her huh? Can't wait to see where that leads! Great story. Please update again soon
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From shelagh on May 27, 2008
Great update!!! Babies really will eat anything. I once had my son in a stroller at the Misouri Botanical Garden he manages to get his little hands on a green leaf and put it in his mouth before I could stop him. He was fine apparently they had already foresaw that eventuality and had refrained from putting toxic plants near the path. WHEW!!!! Go Kingsley!!! He's a brave and wonderful friend.
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