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By : Utopia
  • From gorgeousbowneyes on May 20, 2008
    @ chapter eight - Good ol' het sex. Gotta say, I didn't really think of Lucius and Hermione while reading that, there was a Italian man beneath a woman who had recently had a baby and it was really good in the sense that your writing portrayed them becoming their characters and really performing. I must say I couldn't reli put my finger on an Italian sounding accent so mostly it turned out Spanish in my mind.

    Well, I look forward to more updates, you have me hooked, and I must say that is a definite feat as I don't think I've been hooked to a het story in a very, very long time!!

    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on May 20, 2008
    @ chapter seven end - OK so maybe I did get a little more M/M action there hey? I suppose that will do me! :P I don't think this story could really have much more male/male action without becoming a slash story (unless it was a side pairing - oooooo Draco and Harry!!!!!!!!!!!! Coz like Harry's Hermione's friend and Lucius is Draco's father and you know they could make an appearance towards the end of the story when everyone knows who everyone is and Lucius and Hermione intend to live happily ever after - of course presuming that is where it is going, which might not be the case.)

    So yeah awesome work, going to go read chp8
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on May 20, 2008
    @ chapter seven -
    just read the AN (I haven't read chp7 yet but just thought I HAD to comment about this) and this part made me laugh so much "Not to mention the number of times I
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  • From chickaboo on May 20, 2008
    A SON?! Now there's a twist I wasn't expecting. That was....hot as usual. I can't wait for more, to find out more about what happened and all it entails...... I do believe that this chapter deserves another mmm-mmm good!!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 19, 2008
    *sighs* that was great. Your scenarios are very inventive and oh, Hermione (Juliet) has a son? Very interesting...I hope we get some more back story soon~~ Great job!
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  • From ssdawn on May 19, 2008
    Plain and simple, that was wonderful and very hot! I
    am loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens
    next for them. I can see them growing closer...but with her
    just having a baby...my curiosity is on overdrive. :)
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  • From Kooldragon400 on May 19, 2008
    Well, I have just read chapters 1-8 in one sitting, and I have a few comments:

    IT IS SOOOOO HAWT!!!! I think you're characters are wonderful, and I love the depth that you go to explain them, and their feelings.

    I can't wait to hear more about 'Juliet's' past, and even a little more of 'Max's' (I know who they are...I'm not completely retarded....although to hear my school-mates talk.....)

    Your story is wonderful! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Megan on May 19, 2008
    OMG...she had a baby??? Was the baby a result of rape? Great story btw.
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 19, 2008
    Wow...I was wondering WTF when he tasted Vanilla from her nipples, but the ol' noggin clicked when he said she was a new mother, LOVED the italian, *swoons* I want an italian man LOL, actually a French, Italian, Spanish.....*Goes off the track* LOL, Anyway applause for you Doll, I read some of your other fics last night and I have to say they were brilliant! Corset Laces was sweet! I'm a Lucius whore along with Draco...Oh and sometimes Tom Riddle LMAO, basically I'm a loyal Slytherin supporter PMSL. Sexually free for all snakes :P I cannot wait till Lucius and Hermione find out who one another really are...Bring on the heat!! Loving this story sweetcheeks and I cannot wait for more! *kisses*
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  • From ANON - mariteri on May 19, 2008
    Well, first things first, the name I have here and several other places is a combo of my first and middle names. My best friend found out that it was my mom's nightmare that other kids would start calling me "mariteri". She started calling me that and it's been stuck ever since. It took me a time to figure out how to spell it myself. A pain in the rear that I'm sure you understand.

    Next let me tell you, the story is a gem. I'm really enjoying it. Sure it has its little problems, but nothing that cannot be overcome or ignored let me assure you. The only thing that comes to mind to be honest, is that scene between Severus Snape and Lucius Malfoy. It's not the m/m scene that I have a problem with. It was done very well by the way. No, my problem was with all the different names Lucius called Snape during it. I really don't think Lucius Malfoy would start cooing at Snape like a peacock to a peahen like that. True, they were blowing off steam, but to call him all those different names? Between the bi-curious scene before this added to this and the fact that he was having sex constantly with another man as well as a woman, I have a feeling what you are setting up is an in the closet Lucius. I'm not saying that this is the case, but this is what it looks like so you might want to think over where exactly you want to go with this story. As for all those "dark" something or other and "inky" whatevers, you might want to look over that chapter and have Lucius call Snape something that doesn't sound so, well, like he's trying too hard to get into his pants.

    That's about it. Like I said, I am enjoying the story. Keep up the good work and you update soon.



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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on May 19, 2008
    LOL, The Sev/Lucius love was satisfying...I love a bit of slash lol. great chapter doll, but wish it was me that was playing in a sleeping bag with ol' Luci!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    RE: chapter six

    Well, that was interesting to see Lucius get his rocks off by being serviced by another man, and then see him learn the secrets to how it is done--very informative.

    Keep up the good work--can't wait to read futher updates!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    RE: chapter five

    I think that it is truly beautiful that Remus and Narcissa have found a kindred spirit and romantic love together.

    I'm happy that Lucius and Narcissa have decided to end their marriage amicably and remain friends to each other--very sweet.

    ::crying:: It is heartbreaking that poor Lucius has never had anyone love him, and that he doesn't think that he is able to cope with love--poor honey!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    Re: chapter four

    ::fanning face:: Oh my, call me a romantic, but Lucius kissing the back of Hermione's hand was very sexy indeed!

    Gods, I love this story!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 19, 2008
    *SQUEE* OMG--I absolutely love this story! I'm freaking out at how cool it is that Hermione is inadvertantly teaching Lucius how to make love again after 20+ years married to an ice-queen. Funny, yet erotic and sensual too--a very yummy read!

    Well done lady!
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