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Reviews for Wizard's Porn

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  • From Elphaba on October 23, 2008
    Oh Hell! Lucius is in trouble!
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  • From Elphaba on October 23, 2008
    I liked the chapter with Ly eating the dandelion! Such a typical kid thing! And yay on the job!
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  • From Elphaba on October 23, 2008
    Oh I am not worried about Sev in this chapter (11) I know you will have Mione whip (pardon the pun) something up for him!
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  • From Elphaba on October 23, 2008
    I loved that chapter! I like Cissa And Remmy together!
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  • From voraciousreader on October 23, 2008
    Technical problems are a pain the backside, aren't they? We'll wait for the chapters, like good readers should. Your stuff is always worth waiting for!
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on October 22, 2008
    First of all I was glad to see the story back. But, uh, it seemed so sudden an ending. Why didn't you show the courtship or Lucius's developing relationship with Hermione's son for that matter? It feels rushed and something you threw away to be done with. To say you're finished is one thing to say you have finished it well is another. Given the caliber of writer you are, I expected more than this half assed attempt. Sorry if this sounds harsh, but I was really disappointed. Please give more consideration into developing this story more and I hope to read more of your stories in the future.
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  • From jessirose85 on October 22, 2008
    aww!! what a sweet ending
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  • From llyoung on October 22, 2008
    Ah wonderful ending. So glad that Severus isn't in pain anymore and that his oboe works. Loved Lysander, the octopus and the rings.
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  • From Elphaba on October 22, 2008
    Wow, I think I am sweaty from that one!
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  • From Elphaba on October 22, 2008
    That was very interesting. Didn't see it coming!
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  • From Elphaba on October 22, 2008
    that was interesting!
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  • From Elphaba on October 22, 2008
    Oh this chapter made me tear up! Wonderful story so far! Great job!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 22, 2008
    This was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From Tenar10r on October 22, 2008
    Very nice; glad you had a chance to finish this :)
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  • From ANON - Madamiena on September 12, 2008
    Hey, just came upon your story and read it right through in one hit. I'm very glad that I found it when I did - I have no self discipline and hate having to wait for updates! It was great that so much of it was already posted.

    I've enjoyed it and will definitely check back for the last bits.

    I just wanted to say that I am always full of admiration for writers who don't let their dyslexia get in the way of what they want to do - I went to uni with a girl who was quite severely dyslexic and she is now a published author - that's what betas are for, anyway. You have a good sense of style and flow and you're clear on where you want to go. Your characters are believable and well-defined.

    Anyone who chooses to gripe about the odd lapse in what is basically a made-for-fun creation seriously needs to get a life. Though I noticed some errors here and there, it took very little effort to ignore them - they certainly weren't important enough to seriously disrupt the flow.

    So, I'm looking forward to the next bit...

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