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Reviews for Wizard's Porn

By : Utopia
  • From StarKneazle on May 31, 2008
    And again, two nice chapters!! I wanted to address the note you wrote in front of chapter 17. I think some readers of this expected nothing but smut. They thought the title would lend to that. So when a plot developed, and it's a very nice plot at that, they were like . . ."okay, as long as there's smut in the plot, whatever." When that didn't happen, it made them not like the story. So what did they do? They wrote a flame to you. Because that makes sense.

    Writers write because they have a story to tell, whether they are making their own characters, borrowing someone's characters, or repeating a story, they have something they want to communicate with an audience. I think your story is amazing. I have always been a fan of yours and anyone who has a problem with this story obviously doesn't realize two things: 1) Just because this is an 'adult' fanfic site, that doesn't just mean smut. 'Adult' can mean many things and 2) The author has a reason for doing what they are doing. No one liked it when Sirius died, but JKR had to do that to advance the story, right?

    I love this story. It's nice to read an adult flavored fiction were it isn't just smut smut smut. I love it. Keep writing the good write!!
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 30, 2008
    Screw the porn, I would PAY to see Severus Snape tying pink bows on little frilly wedding decorations. What a changed world it is when the two most powerful Death Eaters are either poufs in the making or crazy. I loved the chapter. I still want to know what's up with Haldor and Harry, and what Lucius' new reign of superiority will bring to the vampire front.

    Lucius' beginning scenes were a hoot by the way.
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  • From tambrathegreat on May 30, 2008
    Yep,still reading and still intrigued. Don't let people discourage you. I like your style of writing. It's succinct and descriptive without being overly 'purple.' Of course, we all can improve. I write fanfic on another site and I get loads of corrections. Accept them for what they are and go on. Anyway, back to the chapter: The Lysander scene in the beginning was just adorable. I can see Hermione being that type of mother-- she can't be too fussed about a little dirt, but would want the child to learn.

    I don't know what to make of Draco. Has he apologized to her for his involvement in the revel that got her pregnant? Or did I read that wrong? If he hasn't, does she know he was there? You've raised so many questions. I suppose I'll have to just keep reading. No complaint. Just write faster.
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  • From ANON - Jean on May 30, 2008
    An entertaining story. I'm not sure it could be placed in any one category as it is has drama, erotica, humor, romance. I see once you have Death Eater skills it is difficult to set them aside when they could come in handy. I do feel badly you have a dysfunctional Severus. He is my favorite HP character. I hope you will find it in your heart to cure him.
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  • From ANON - Sorcha on May 30, 2008
    Honey, having read your lengthy author's note, I just wanted to say that there are plenty of readers out there that love your story and I am one. I have throughly enjoyed each chapter and look forward to more, hope to see a little more of Draco too!! Also I was curious about the 4 marks (that Harry's got) from Haldor, were they inspired from Anita Blake? Also will we get anymore about Harry and Haldor?

    Anyway in short I love the story, keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - Bad_Kitty_Cat on May 30, 2008
    Oooooh ooooooh let me guess let me guess!!! Your inspiration was "don't you think she looks tired"...

    Can't wait to read more! Brilliant!

    Bad_Kitty_Cat
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  • From chickaboo on May 30, 2008
    *Snort* That was too funny. Great update! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Shetan on May 30, 2008
    Brilliant learning curve for Lucius, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Shetan on May 30, 2008
    I enjoyed this chapter very much, hilarious and meaningful, especially the meeting between Draco and Hermione. Please update soon.
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  • From luvhp on May 30, 2008
    shew, you are so quick, I find it hard to read while all these people keep bothering me about 'work' I REALLY need to get my own computer at home (hubby thinks the internet is evil, if he ONLY knew what I was reading, LOL)

    So, Lucuis has apologized, hmm, didn't he tell draco that's what he was going to do, Draco told him that wasn't enough, lol.

    Okay I have to go home and STUDY! I failed AGAIN!!! Stupid retarded questions make no sense and I've been doing this for over 10 yrs :(
    3rd time's a charm right?

    Loving your story, hopefully I'll be back next week to read more happy updates! (my punishment is no stories until I'v passed)
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  • From RavenElfwitch on May 30, 2008
    Doctor Who reference hurrah! MP for Flydale North hehee Anyway, wanted to say how much I'm loving this, I always enjoy looking out for your stories, along with Ms Figg, Snape Goddess and LaBib, you're one of the top authors that springs to mind when I look thru Potter fic. Carry on the great work hon and don't let the bastards beat you
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 30, 2008
    An awesome revenge by Hermione. Mess with his mind...that was great!! Keep up the brilliant work!!
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on May 30, 2008
    I really thought Hermione's revenge was a cop-out. It was stupid, honestly.
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  • From Clare1984 on May 30, 2008
    ok second review this time for chapter 18. That was good. It was so damn funny that Lucius' sarcastic wit just made him look even more loopy! poor Lucius!

    After that apology, it looks promising for things to maybe develop more between them. Besides, good things can happen at wedding receptions - lots of chances for dancing and closeness... and oh god I really am a soppy romantic!
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  • From Clare1984 on May 30, 2008
    I loved that chapter - nice and fluffy and I'm glad Hermione's name is finally getting cleared. I can't wait to see what she's got cooked up for Lucius. Knowing Hermione, it's gonna be good.

    I think you're an awesome writer so whoever that flame was from tell them to go fudge themselves! btw, fudge is a favourite substitute of mine when I can't swear round sensitive ears - I had a good chuckle at that one.
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