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Reviews for Upside Down

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  • From ANON - NITESFOOL on September 02, 2008
    FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK, FUCK YEAH!!!! THIS WEEKEND WAS GREAT
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 31, 2008
    Aww I hope Bella and Rodolphus make it through the battle with Voldie.

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  • From RyGirl824 on August 31, 2008
    Aww, that was so sweet!


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  • From distinctlyME on August 31, 2008
    hmmm. okay let's go shall we? lol I know you adore my reviews!! admit it!! ;)

    1. All the emotions in this chapter were perfect. If the battle is coming up in the next chapter, this was a needed emotional transition chapter, and I thought it was great. We saw Narcissa's worries last chapter and this leaves the others. We know how Ruby feel b/c of her date with Ron. Harry, well it's just obvious so the decision not to include his feelings works well. All in all I really liked what you did here.

    2. If Roddy makes he give up that baby or he dies, I don't think i'll forgive you all too quickly. Same goes for that list I gave you of people not allowed to die. lol p.s. the last bit when he confesses that to Bella was sweet. My heart swelled.

    3. I absolutely love the idea of the final battle being in parts. I honestly think it's a great way to get everyone into the final battle. I would totally start it out with Ruby and Ron, move to Luius(I highly doubt Narcissa will be fighting, but a scene with her along at the house might be good), then I would move on to some of the death eaters, then Roddy and Bella, THEN Dumbledore and say like ooo ooo GREYBACK!!! hahaha Dumbledore would totally kick that creepers ass! Then it would be Snape, maybe fighting Dolohov or some other creepy and skilled death eater and then Hermione and Draco. Then obviously Harry and Voldemort.

    Maybe pair it like this: Ruby and Ron and Lucius(Narcissa) in part 1
    Roddy, Bella, Dumbledore, and Snape in part 2
    Hermione and Draco should get their own chapter(it is a Dramione)
    And then Voldy dies.

    Thats what I would do if you wanted to split the final battle up. It just covers everyone, maybe with some randoms like tonks and shacklebolt and sirius thrown in you know? Just a siggestion.

    Eagerly awaiting the next installment. LETS GO ORDER LETS GO!!!!
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  • From ANON - That1OverThere on August 31, 2008
    Ok i mst say i luv u. Nt in a gay sense, bt more in th 'u seem lyk such n awesom grl' wy. I luv ur ritin style & humor. It mks me feel gud 2 no i'm nt th only nawty Christian grl readin ths stuff. Bt hey, i'm 18, why shld i feel bd, its legal now rite? & i must say, I feel 4 u in th no sex dpt. Only i wasnt sch a gud grl & did it (crude wy of putting it huh?), bt thn realised th error of my wys & totlly wish i hd waited 4 th rite guy :(
    I wld rite mre bt am usin my fone & itll only giv me a few lttrs :(
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 28, 2008
    Awww, I'm so happy for Ron. :)
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  • From ANON - nitesfool on August 28, 2008
    Alright.... it's 12.13 pm and I
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  • From ANON - nitesfool on August 27, 2008
    OK>>> life has beat me down and made me it's BITCH... but i wanted to let u know that i didn't forget about u... when i wake up in the morning i promise to bless u with some of my juices!
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  • From blondpierogi on August 26, 2008
    hey!!! awesome chapter!!! great job!
    OOh i love the ending of hermiones nd rons convo. Awesome!! ooh and vampire fang potion for the nausea, bloody inventive..cannot wait to read more!!
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  • From smmz79 on August 26, 2008
    aaahhh poor narcissa... lucius is sooo sweet in this great job.... ohhh and the talk give it to him hermione.... great chap!!!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 26, 2008
    Aww so Hermione's given Ronald her blessing to date Ruby, sweet.

    Loved the last line LOL, what girl doesnt wanna date Draco Malfoy? I'd be the first in line (Obviously under a disguise, lest my lord find me, and you wouldnt want that.) Hehe.

    Cant wait for the second half of the chapter!


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  • From distinctlyME on August 26, 2008
    God the poor woman, and than you. That dosage was all I needed. I really like to see Lucius' soft side. It mixes well with the ones he loves. I was always disheartened by the Lucius in the books. He was too much "kill kill kill" it was really inhuman, and the only person who should be that inhuman is Voldemort. Creepy snake man, with his creepy "all muggles and half-bloods are must die" mantra even though he's a bloody half blood himself. Stupid hypocritical snake like bastard who needs to rot slowly in the ground.........*takes a deep breath* I'm good. I swear.

    As for the Ron thing, it was sweet, but not detrimental...I don't think. But then again I don't know what happens in Part 2.But still...a little more Drama!! c'mon woman! hehehe. Uhm so what do you mean crucial moment? DOES HE DIE? DOES SHE DIE?! OMG you can't kill them. I mean kill a minor character, like like like Tonks...or or or someone else. I order you not to kill off the following people;

    Draco, Hermione, Lucius, Narcissa, Bella, Roddy, Ruby, Harry, Ron, Sirius, Dumbledore, or Snape.

    mmmkay? Great.

    Eagerly awaiting the next installment! Yay Part 2.
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  • From ANON - char_marcus on August 26, 2008
    another great chapter, can't wait for the final few :)
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on August 25, 2008
    I really do like the Ruby/Ron interaction, at first I was like...She isn't....Oh shizer! She is! LOL

    I really do love the way you write Bella, I think there are so many unpeeled layers when it comes to the Black sisters. Bella being my favourite of the lot. Andromeda is a close second...Don't really like Cissa....Have never really liked her...But I love Lucius LOL maybe that has something to do with it....

    Well, I'm really looking forward to the Final Battle, and hoping Draco and Mione end up happy and safe together.

    *Gets down on hands and knees and pray* Dear God (DragonFyre) Please protect my Draco, and Luci, even Rodolphus...But most of all protect Bella, because I adore her...and want to see Rodolphus' reaction to her pregnancy. Protect Ruby and Mione, and Harry. Amen.

    LMAO! Just had to do it!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From smmz79 on August 24, 2008
    what a great chap.... bella knocked up she is going to be a ball of fun when she goes through the mood swings i wonder who will get hexed first... ahhh draco how sweet in your own way... good luck turning hermione into a spoiled purebloods wife that should be entertaining to
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