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Reviews for Upside Down

By : Kooldragon400
  • From ANON - char_marcus on August 12, 2008
    ahhh i'm glad ruby is safe back home and cuddling up to ron so soon eh, loved the end of the last chapter hehe
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  • From ANON - char_marcus on August 12, 2008
    oh well i was only guessing lol and dont worry i'll keep on reading :)
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 11, 2008
    Oh yay! Yay yay yay! Loved the lemons!
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  • From leValkyrie on August 10, 2008
    wouldnt a few of us love to wake draco up like that if we got the chance...im so glad that Ruby is back and she trusts Ron enuff to fall asleep next to them are there going to be any romantic developments between them because that would be interesting!
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  • From distinctlyME on August 10, 2008
    awwwww are Ruby and Ron going to fall for one another? Oh I'd love it. She'd be perfect for his fiery temper, she'd give just as good as she got. Not to mention his sweet goofy nature would be great for her emotionally.

    I think my favorite part was the bathroom scene. I loved that it was Draco who held her and carried her, who had thrown his cloak about her. Draco is usually gruff and you rarely ever see a soft side to him. He's sarcastic and selfish, and so when he is selfless and hs selflessness is written well, it makes for an amazing scene in your story. Same with Snape. I've always loved Severus. In the books, the movies and in certain fan fics.

    I think you're doing fabulously with this story. It was a great transition chapter you just wrote. I always find those the hardest. You can't put too much information and events in them or else its just another dramatic chapter. They need to informative without being over the top. I must say you accomplished that very successfully.

    I eagerly await your next installment.
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  • From smmz79 on August 10, 2008
    wow i can not believe that they finally got ruby out... and good job ron... he is the one who pissed her off and accidentally hit her that one time and now he is the one comforting her or at least helping her... and woohoo hermione way to wake up draco...
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  • From PotterEntourage on August 10, 2008
    Yea Ruby & Ron!!!! WHOOOOHOOOO! He can help heal her, I know he can! Nice Lemon, very nice, and even though I'm Dramione 4-Ever, I'll take Ron, in the boxer shorts, with the chocolate ice cream (mmmm....ice cream)in the middle of the night please! No Seriously, please? *cow eyes*
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  • From ANON - sana on August 10, 2008
    Wonderful story!! You certainly have a great amount of ingenuity and you're a talented author...The part of the ritual chant that you used was from Macbeth, and it was the part that said "Eye of newt, and toe of frog, Wool of bat, and tongue of dog, Adder
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  • From OliversBludger on August 09, 2008
    This is great so far (I'm only at the point where Hermione introduces them to the Order) but I'm a little confused as to what Sirius is. You didn't explain that in this chapter, and I think it would have helped. Other than that, I LOVE Bellatrix watching Spongebob! Ruby is okay, and I really like how you've portrayed the Malfoys and Bellatrix. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From RyGirl824 on August 09, 2008
    Eye of newt, and toe of frog,
    Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,
    Adder's fork, and blind-worm's sting,
    Lizard's leg, and owlet's wing,
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  • From ANON - Eliza Jane on August 09, 2008
    Oooh, I've got brownie points knowledge!!!

    It's from Something Wicked This Way comes, and the quote is

    Eye of newt, and toe of frog,
    Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,
    Adder's fork, and blind-worm's sting,
    Lizard's leg, and owlet's wing



    By the way, excellent writing. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From katiemay on August 08, 2008
    Fillet of a fenny snake,
    In the cauldron boil and bake;
    Eye of newt, and toe of frog,
    Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,
    Adder
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  • From katiemay on August 08, 2008
    This is the well-known incantation of the Three Witches in Shakespeare's Macbeth, 1605
    my favorite one :) nice story ive been reading all along just dont review often
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  • From blondpierogi on August 08, 2008
    wow what a great chapter.. i am soo happy that Ruby was saved.. i hate reading about torture especailly children.. its sick and wrong...
    but you needed to add this to the story to make it soo awesome...
    cannot wait to read more!!!
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  • From leValkyrie on August 08, 2008
    excellent update im so glad that ruby is finally home!! the fact that she has a guardian angel to help her through was excellent! i cant wait to read what you have planned for the next chapter.
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