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Reviews for Upside Down

By : Kooldragon400
  • From mlui on July 21, 2008
    Nope, not a good idea to crack wise remarks...alas, she does have ROTTEN luck. They missed Hermione and Draco just as they left... what rotten luck. I really feel sorry for her. Great chapter and please update soon! =)
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  • From distinctlyME on July 21, 2008
    omg. wow.

    I think you did a wonderful job on this. I know I usually have comment,s what could be added, detracted, or what i just prefer cuz I'm such a picky little one. I also know you say you like the criticism, knowing what you could fix and work upon. But honestly darling, no need to change a thing about this chapter. I think you did a perfect perfect job of describing Voldemort, having Ruby still be Ruby, I think you made a wonderful interlude into breaking Ruby's spirit. I'm really impressed wit this story but more so this chapter.

    I really hope you can find some work. Being broke is not fun, I feel your pain on that aspect. and I work. *sigh* lol.

    I was hoping you might take a look at my fic. I'd love to hear some of your con crit. It's called Come Together.

    I also have a Lucius/Hermione fic called appetite for destruction. if your interested.

    I know I know. I'm selling. But I can't help it. Feel special, you're the only person I've sold too. Probably because your your the only person I want opinions from. haha


    Update soon. Good Luck on your job search.
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  • From leValkyrie on July 21, 2008
    that's kind of jacked up...hermione and draco are fucking and having fun while poor ruby is being tortured...thats soo messed up...great update and i can't wait to see how hermione reacts when she finds out that Ruby has been taken...
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  • From daylightdancer on July 14, 2008
    Oooooooooooooooh! This story is fun to read, im glad I stumbled upon this! I love stories that are written like this, funny, death eaters betraying voldy woooooooo, fun fun. I hope Ruby gets to kick some voldy butt.
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 13, 2008
    I knew it. I effing knew it! Tom was Voldy, I knew it!! Now what?! That is not a nice spot to stop this chappy!! You have have have to update soon! Please don't make us wait long to see how Ruby fares!
    Her lines at the end were awesome, though, very "Ruby"-esque. Very in character.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 13, 2008
    Roddy and Bella were hot! its about time he stepped up to the plate in the bedroom...lol. Oh Ruby...whatever have you gotten yourself into now? I can't imagine how frantic poor hermione will be when she finds out just who has her cousin. And there was no Draco/Hermione in this chapter =( LOL, i expect to see some in the next one... =) until then Happy Writing!!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From ANON - ucdevil on July 13, 2008
    omg!
    Way to go Ruby!
    AHAHAHAHA darling please update!!!

    I just love Ruby's attitude.
    Why is Voldy doing messing with underage girls???

    I hope you clear the air!
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  • From ANON - Amaya on July 13, 2008
    oh yes i guessed right!! i loved Ruby's reaction it was so like her. Bella's scene was hot. :)
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  • From mlui on July 13, 2008
    I'm curious, didn't Hermone describe how Voldemort looked like? I think alarm bells should have gone off with the Death Eater robes, but then again, she's too enamoured with Tom to notice, I guess. I hope she left the note (that came along with the flowers) so Hermione can track her down or have a sense of where she was...
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  • From ANON - allie on July 13, 2008
    lol. she couldnt have said it better. update soon
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  • From smmz79 on July 13, 2008
    what another great chap and omg what a fantastic love scene between roddy and bella..... lucius is just like a girl he has to meddle in everything but of course this was for the greater good... :) i think roddy really showed bella what was up esp in his death eater garb oh my at the end he had me wanting to say that i was his... bella finally got her dominating husband thats good for her... poor ruby i knew it when the waiter came up and she noticed his clothing what was happening also by the way that he greeted them... i absolutely loved her reaction way to go ruby do not give him the satisfaction.. he wanted her to scream but she did not and she even threw some sarcasm in there... so i wonder what is going to happen now i look forward to your update... i am sorry you did not get many reviews last chap but it was a great chap all in all i loved it...
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  • From ANON - distinctlyME on July 13, 2008
    LMFAO!. Okay here we go my darling.

    1. Im not sure I liked Bella turning around to find Roddy in full death eater garb. But whatever gets them off. I guess it just creeps me out. But I see the need for it. And the allure for them.

    2. I LOVED that sex scene between them. It was hot in that domineering kind of way. I never ever want to be caned, but dear lord I do love a man who can dominate in the bedroom, and let you know he's in charge. HOT!!

    3. Wow. That was sudden. I really expected her abduction to take a few more chapters. I also did not expect it to be so blase(there is supposed to be an accent over that 'e' but for the life of me I can't figure out how. *sigh*) I think I would have had it a bit more theatrical. Granted, I loved the simplicity of it. But still, I hate that Ruby was so gullible and duped so easily. It makes me feel bad. If it were at least theatrical and intricate, who could blame the girl.

    4. The ending was priceless. Her reaction so simple and definitely the character Ruby we have known throughout this story. I also like the fact that Ruby showed no fear. Because why should she? She has not grown up in England. She has not endured the evil that is Lord Voldemort. She has no reason to fear him for she has not realized fully, or grown up with knowing fully what the man(creature?) is capable of.

    5. As much as I liked both parts in the chapter, with my two cents thrown in here and there. I don't think you should have put them in the same chapter. It took too much away from both. You should have made this chapter about Roddy and Bella, and the next about Ruby and Tom/Voldemort. Even if they were short. It would have just been so much more powerful for them both. Just for further chapters, please don't string it together like that. Especially when it's a crucial moment in one or two of the characters lives. I liked it, but they both took away something from the other for me.

    Can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on July 12, 2008
    Death Eater Garb + Mask, Leather Gloves, "I want you to dominate me"....Whoooooooooooo *thud* Girlllll, that was delicious! I mean super delicious! Go Roddy Go! Poor Ruby, who will save her *cough, Ron, cough*?
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  • From mlui on July 10, 2008
    Ch. 20 - Wow! Great chapter, although I'm slightly worried about Ruby. Please update again soon!
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 10, 2008
    Oooh! It's about time!!! Yay! Gooo 'Mione and Draco! Woo hoooo! (so, obviously, I really liked this chapter! You were right! :D )


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