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Reviews for Upside Down

By : Kooldragon400
  • From distinctlyME on July 10, 2008
    Good Sweet Jesus Woman. That was a chapter to make all panties soaked and very male's member go stiff.

    Holy Hell.

    No Suggestions, no nothing. Who could make a suggestion on a fantabulous smut chapter. It's impossible.

    I am highly excited to uh be meeting this Mr. R(I forgot his pretend last name) next chapter. I wonder if he'll wear sunglasses so Hermione doesn't see his eyes.

    Oh and his reaction to Draco. Oh shit, now Draco's in danger. =( I never thought about that before.
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  • From ANON - Lady Kao on July 10, 2008
    I am enjoying this story a bit too much at times....you almost had me panting with that last chappy! I want a Draco of my very own!!! But then...who doesn't. I really like the way you are taking the story and especially with the ex death eaters (Bella most of all) I'm also intrigued as to how you are going to bring voldy in with the rest of the "cast". Can't wait for the next chappy!!!!!!

    Blessings,

    Lady Kao
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  • From smmz79 on July 10, 2008
    well tom is definitely smooth.... and what a fantastic sex scene with hermione and draco... and i second your little statement at the end of the chap... i would love that treatment as well.... yummooo
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  • From smmz79 on July 08, 2008
    wow what a chap... i thought for sure that voldie was going to take her... but it seems he may be trying to get her trust to get info or maybe to be allowed in to the order.... ok and poor hermione i am sure lucius just wanted to tie her to the couch... i noticed that 'tom' slipped at dinner.. he made the comment 'how slytherin of you..' then when she asked what house he was in he said he went to durmstrang(sp?) how would he know that her comment was 'slytherin' is he was not familiar with their code of conduct??? ok so great chap i caught on to the comment she made when hermione and draco were playing monopoly but i wonder what is going to happen that he needs to be careful about his actions?? anyway great chap
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    lucius should really get smacked upside his head lol
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 08, 2008
    Oh, good, I'm so glad Ruby is safe for now. Great chapter. I loved how Hermione yelled at Lucius, too funny. More, please! :)
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  • From distinctlyME on July 08, 2008
    hmmm. I like Hermione's protective side. It really shows the Hermione we have known through the books and loved. No need to remind you of S.P.E.W I'm sure.

    I liked Lucius with Hermione, and Draco staying silent not knowing what to do was very believable.

    It would have been nice though if when Narcissa held Hermione Lucius had have said something such as "Stop coddling the witch Narcissa, she's acting ridiculous" and then had Narcissa snap at him. A pregnant woman's hormones are not to be tested. hahaha

    But I liked it as it was. Very realistic. Stupid Stupid Stupid Ruby showing Tom to Hermione's flat. *shakes fist at the american*

    I hope to hear more from Harry, Roddy, Bella, and all the gang. hehehe

    Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From mlui on July 08, 2008
    Er, this Thomas character seems suspicious...I mean, who has RED eyes? The only person, if I can still can him human, is Voldemort. He sounds suspiciously like Tom Riddle and how she just lost track of time... Please update again soon!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 08, 2008
    Hermione always was a worrier, but this time i feel her instincts are correct....and lucius' two knuts aren't worth anything...lol look what he put his son through! I like that Narcissa is comforting Hermione "mothers" need to stick together...=) well, i don;t like this Tom bloke. not at all. and poor Ruby allshe really wants is someone to love her for herself! Can't wait for more!!

    Lady B
    xoxo
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on July 06, 2008
    Uh oh...What is my man up to now?
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  • From smmz79 on July 06, 2008
    OMG... ok first things first... lucius and narcissa watching tv that was great... him taking control of the remote while narcissa waited patiently so she could snatch the 'television wand'..... nice and i love bella she is sooo funny teaching him all of the things that she was amazed to learn... and roddy with the barking dog that was funny and lucius is a little bit of a prankster...
    I had a funny feeling that voldie was going to take ruby when he was in the throne room... poor hermione she is going to be devastated.. well at least they have a load of deatheaters that can help with recovering her...
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  • From distinctlyME on July 06, 2008
    Holy shit.

    Well you know what coming. LOVE the Roddy parts. Lucius is so juvenile it amuses me to no end. HE tries to be all big bad older Lucius, but he's just a little kid at heart. Even in the books. Such a sulker when things don't go his way.

    O....M....G....Tom Riddle did not just transform himself and capture the heart of our dearest American. Her heart seemed to be all a flutter for the red-eyed stranger. Devious little snake he is. As long as Ruby isn't seriously injured, or goes bad, I'm more than happy to see where this goes.

    Her comment on Draco with monopoly was interesting. Kind of scary though, since I've literally never lost a game in monopoly. I wonder what that says about me. I hope only that I'm ambitious.

    I like the small exchange with Draco and Hermione, brought another part into their relationship however brief. I would like to see more interaction between the Mafloys and Hermione, see how Lucius's childish pureblood snit evolves. Watch him come around. I want a little more Harry thrown in too. Ron can just bugger off.

    hahhahaha
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 06, 2008
    Ohhh ! Ruby! Please don't let Ruby get hurt! I want to be wrong, but this Tom guy has "bad news bears" written all over him! I've a sneaking suspicion he's Voldemort, or someone from the DE side... Please please let me be wrong, though!
    On a happier note, I thought that Lucius' little trick with the TV and Roddy was too funny! Something I'd do, haha. :)
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 06, 2008
    Roddy's reaction to the TV was great, and Lucius will always be Lucius whether he is on the light side or the dark side...he truly does enjoy messing with people's heads. I wonder if he will impart Narcissa's info about Bella being a closet submissive to Roddy?

    I love monopoly!! However i try to play like Draco and buy up whatever property i land on, yet i still manage to lose! Think Draco could come over and show me a few things ;-)

    And we have Ruby walking off with a Thomas Rohan? I don't have a good feeling about this! My gut instincts tell me she should have told Hermione first! I don't think i will like this Mr. Rohan who obviously knows Hermione but will not let her cousin go and tell her where she will be.

    Have you seen the movie Juno? Your sense of humor and style of writing reminds me of the character Juno in that movie...if you haven't seen it I highly recommend it, its brilliant!!!

    Great Update and I am soooo looking forward to more!

    Lady B
    xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2008
    this is pretty good so far, i hope you continue it..post more soon please.
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