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Reviews for Upside Down

By : Kooldragon400
  • From LadyBlueEyes on July 03, 2008
    Ok, first I have to apologize for not reading and reviewing sooner. You've got a another wonderful story here. (You may recall that i adored your story You Raise Me Up) I love Ruby, she is an honest, in your face, straight forawrd, kind of girl! Her sarcasm is funny as hell! I am happy that you have included Bella again in your story, you write a wonderful Bellatrix! I see Snape has made an appearance, not a large one, though i laughed when Bella called him 'Snape-a-doodle'. That was great =)! I like that you did not rush Draco and Hermoine and I enjoy the conflict between Draco and Lucius. Draco is learning to stand up for himself and Lucius is realizing that all he once believed in is nothing more that dust. Narcissa is pregnant? LOL, how will Draco react to the news of a new sibling? Rudolphus and Bella? I could see it. Especially as there really is very little information on their relationship. Great job!! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!


    Happy Writing!!!

    LadyBlueEyes
    xoxoxo
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  • From RyGirl824 on July 02, 2008
    I'm so proud of Bella, and how she druf Roddy down the stairs.. I really like how you're portraying her in this story! Can't wait for more!

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  • From ANON - allie on July 02, 2008
    please update soon.
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  • From smmz79 on July 02, 2008
    wow that has to be interesting waking up to see your dead wife and you are in the enemies lair..... i like how you have roddy and bellas relationship a litle uneasy at first but you can see why they are together... i thought it was hysterical when bella had to yell at him and drag him downstairs that was good and very funny i already see a little of his personality showing threw and i like it... he makes a nice companion to his nutso wife... oh and ruby is funny as ever i love her when she interacts with each one of your characters... she is very unique... and the nickname for ron and harry very fitting...
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  • From mlui on July 02, 2008
    Very nice chapter!
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  • From distinctlyME on July 02, 2008
    Your right I really did like that chapter. I thought it was great. I'm glad you did. It made me feel awfully special. I mean it just wouldn't be Lucius Malfoy without the little bit of pureblood attitude would it? haha.
    I also like how Narcissa stood up but at the same time didn't make her husband feel cornered. Smart witch, that woman.

    As for the next chapter. I love Bella and Roddy, don't change a thing about what you do with them. No suggestions there.

    I would have liked to see All the Malfoys in the kitchen though and seen Rodolphus' reaction to it all being true. I'm sure it sputtering would have been amusing.

    I just knew he lead that rebellion for her. And Bella is right, it's very romantic, in a sick and twisted sort of way *Love-Sigh*

    I kind of also would have liked Hermioe to be there with Ruby, it would have been nice to see little Miss intermediate healer Hermione Granger, gush over Roddy's health. Could have been a bit amusing.

    I really like it. My suggestions are nothing really, because you definitely don't need them.

    Keep up the good work my darling. I can't wait to see how much this progresses.
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  • From mlui on June 30, 2008
    Ch 16 - Go Draco and Hermione! Ron and Hermione aren't suited for each other, definitely. Lucius needs to wake up and smell the roses...although, I guess old habits are hard to break. Great chapter and please update again soon!

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  • From WriterChick1990 on June 29, 2008
    absolutley love this dont think it could get any better but more than likely it will
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  • From RyGirl824 on June 29, 2008
    YESSS!!!! That was simply amazing! I LOVED the scenes where Hermione was telling Ron and Lucius off, that was incredible! Go 'Mione!!! And the fight scene was pretty great too, I'm glad Draco was able to knock some sense into his dad. Rotten rich people, anyways! Haha, Can't wait for more, I think this is my new favorite story! I really like the American aspect Ruby brings to it, its a new twist that works very well, especially the way you are writing it!
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  • From smmz79 on June 29, 2008
    omg some things never change wow lucius was going to hit hermione and after everything that he has done or her... he deserved everything that she said to him.... oh my i wonder what hermione is going to say to draco after this well i saw stick to their guns they need to stay together they are a perfect fit... and the love scene in the beginning was reat obviously a contrast from ron hermione had the big o and draco did not at all... great chap i loved that hermione told ron off he deserved it he needed and i am glad that she told him how he really made her feel, i think that with draco she will never have to feel that... and i just love ruby 'better than springer' that is for sure.,....
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  • From leValkyrie on June 29, 2008
    yay draco punched the shit out of lucius...it is so refreshing to read that...i did luv the tongue action and hermione is a very lucky girl...and yay hermione for standing up for her self...im glad that she told ron off even though she did go a little overboard by saying all that in front of his mother but hey whatever works
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  • From ANON - A,maya on June 28, 2008
    Your so mean '_' put the chapter up fast can't wait!!!
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  • From mlui on June 26, 2008
    Ch 15 - What bad experience did Draco have? Nice chapter and please update again soon! =)
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  • From smmz79 on June 26, 2008
    what a great chap and so full of goodies... i am glad that bella is going to give it a go with her hubby she deserves happiness, and that was a great part in the chap when she was reflecting very good... and it allowed us just one more glimpse into what bella is really like... rons comment int eh beginning about the house being a death eater half way house was funny.. i do like that you have him in the negative light i am not really a fan of his when hermione and draco are together.... oh and you tease leave us hanging now i am going to be sitting here anxiously waiting... oh well it will be worth it
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  • From distinctlyME on June 26, 2008
    Okay so I really love what you've done with Roldophus. I think it was brilliant. I also think that Bella's new attitude is great. She still has her edge but we get to see her soft side. It's nice to know she has one.

    I want to hear more from Lucius and Narcissa. especially on this whole Hermione/Draco matter. I think I would have had something go on there when Draco first came out with it. Because although Lucius owes her, I would have liked him to freak out a tiny bit before being put in his place by Ruby. Hermione, Narcissa, and Draco. It would be nice to see his uncomfortable side around Hermione. He may have betrayed the Dark Lord, but he's still Lucius Malfoy.

    Also I want to hear more from Hermione and Draco and not just their kissing. These two are a power couple. And as great as their sexual relationship shall interest me throughout this story, you've made their relationship all about it. You need to show them united without their tongues down each others throats. I also want to see Hermione put Ron in his place. The Hermione we know would never sit back and let Ron pull what he does. She would be upset but she would stand up. Also it would have been good for her to go to that meeting. Show a united front between her new beau.

    So yes. Don't stop your Roddy and Bella story, it's fabulous. And I ask for a bit more from Draco and Hermione as well as Lucius and NArcissa.
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