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Reviews for Upside Down

By : Kooldragon400
  • From RyGirl824 on October 04, 2008
    but, I'm totally sticking around for the new story, the little teaser snippit was good. I'm glad Mione has a champion in SOMEONE, at least!
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  • From RyGirl824 on October 04, 2008
    Why wasn't Draco in the epi? I didn't see any mention of him what so ever....All the other couples were present, but I didn't see anything about Draco, or Narcissa.. Did I miss something? At the end of the last chapter, Draco had ben with Mione at Ruby and Rons wedding, and Narcissa had been present, she'd helped with the bride...So I'm confused...
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  • From Dracona63 on October 04, 2008
    Woot! This is definitely going on my "Recommended Reading" list with full details! I've been reading this for almost a week now when I have had time and I LOVE IT!!!
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  • From smmz79 on October 04, 2008
    ohhh so now i am interested in your next story... hmmmm it looks good.... oh and i love this epilogue esp the part where hermione told her child that aries was a fibber.... ha ha that was funny.... oh and harry with his kids ahhh a single dad i bet he would be a great father... great job.. i love this story and i know i will pick it up and read it again in the future!!!!!!! great job!!!!!
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  • From distinctlyME on October 02, 2008
    And they live happily ever after.

    LOVE IT!!!!

    *sigh* oh now I'm all mushy inside. I'm going to go on this romantic binge now thanks to this chapter.
    romance me? my fiance is bad with romance. He's only ever gotten it right once(and that wasn't even the proposal)

    *love sigh* Through that whole chapter, in my head I was singing the song. "Oh what a wonderful world."
    AND this other song I just heard and totally love and I suggest you listen to. Marry Me-Amanda Marshall. I think I'm going to walk down the aisle to it. Tell me what you think!!!

    I'm so excited that you've started a new story. Of course I'll read it. I really need to get onto finishing my stories. *sigh* I have SUCH writers block and no time.
    Whats the next story about? You should totally give a little preview at the end of your author's note in the epilogue. Only to please me obviously. ahahahaa.

    I adore love. I adore being in love, reading about being in love, seeing love. I adore this ending.

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  • From blackrose2606 on October 02, 2008
    I'm so sad that this story is ending. It's one of my favorites.
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  • From Baybeetricia on October 01, 2008
    I LOVED IT....

    I liked the opening few paragraphs...

    I always say the best way to start is with a good sex scene....but like this one..lol

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  • From blondpierogi on October 01, 2008
    awwww awesome chapter.. I love it!!!
    I am sad that its over..It was a wonderful story!!!

    The reason I asked where you live is b/c i was thinking that there are staffing agencies all over the states. Some like Ajilon (i work for them), Office team, atrium. If you have office even minimal experience they can find you a temporary assignmnet in an office/ corporate and those usually lead to getting the job permenatly. They also pay wel, They start at around $10/ hr.. so no Minimum wage. You should give it a try, it never hurts and hopefully you can get a great job! good luck with the new job!
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  • From Citten on October 01, 2008
    okay their is now not enough time to say it all i dont know if i could write that long anywho. but loved the story it was different then most and i defenantly love ruby--american all the way baby! :) (cause i am one too! but you gotta love the british!:) espiecally the voice!) but i will tell you i loved the way you have wound down the story and not just one chapter or just an epiclog but did it gradually with a few chapter and allowed us to enjoy the ending it makes it so much easier!!! so thanks for that! will be waiting for the epiclog. :) i will be watch for you new story too!!!! with much anticapiation! and i will also look up your other stories--i might have read one once too i will have to look. until the end then until next story! :)
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  • From RyGirl824 on October 01, 2008
    Oh, and, congrats on the job! :)
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  • From RyGirl824 on October 01, 2008
    Oooh I just love waking up to updates!!

    This was a SUPER chapter! I love love loved that Hermione and Draco finally got married, and now are having a baby! So sweet. And 'Cissa, having a girl, yay! :) and Ron and Ruby, married, yay! It was nice!
    Can't wait for the epi, but I'm sad that its ending!
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  • From ANON - Potterentourage on October 01, 2008
    Awww, another great chapter, and you can be sure i'm sticking around for anything else you write! Congratulations on the new job!
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  • From smmz79 on October 01, 2008
    omg omg really great chap... i have a tear in my eye that was soooo touching... ruby really deserved it and ih my she really is the reason for hermiones happiness and she definitely opened her up to a new world.... great job as always
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  • From RyGirl824 on September 30, 2008
    Oh, I do like this chapter MUCH better!
    I'm a bit squeamish, so I didn't particularly care for the old version, but this was much nicer, and I think it still got the point across. Rita was a nasty person, but nobody deserves that sort of death that you'd penned in the first version. Thanks for changing it!

    And yay, new chappy!!!
    :D
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  • From AndreaLorraine on September 30, 2008
    I do like this better. Much cleverer. What would be funny is if mentally, child-Rita 'grew up' a second time and turns out a decent person - but maybe that's too warm and fuzzy for you. But if it ever came out that Bella & Roddy were partially responsible for the attack that caused her to regress, everyone would believe they'd done the world a favor (if they don't already, hehe).

    I didn't mean to give you such a lashing but my feelings are very strong on the matters the previous version of the chapter stirred up. I'm sure that came across. I just knew that you had something more creative in you and that it wasn't your intention to create an uncomfortable moral contradiction. Glad you didn't take it too personally.

    In the future, it might be tremendously helpful to have someone you can run your chapters by before posting. I'd offer to do it, but I'm extremely busy with school and 2 jobs and my own stories that I don't think I could add another thing to the pile. I know the rush of momentum you get when you finish a new chapter; you want to put it up right away so everyone can read it. Sometimes, though, it's best to let it sit for a little while so you can go back and look at it with an objective eye. What you thought was brilliant at 2 am may not be 12 hours later, and similarly what you're not entirely satisfied with at first may turn out to be great once you've had a few hours away from the computer.

    And don't feel like you have to rush to satisfy readers. They would rather have a quality chapter that takes a little longer to complete than a hastily written one that doesn't fully represent your abilities. Trust me, I know - I have pushed the patience of my readers to an extreme at times. The point is you can't rush a great story.

    :)

    And I commend you for trying something new and listening to my strange music. Like I said it isn't for everyone, but I'm the sort of person that just can't abide cookie cutter music (though I will confess that I do listen to the occasional showtune...usually Phantom of the Opera because it's brilliant).
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