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By : Kooldragon400

From AndreaLorraine on September 07, 2008
It seems like everyone is getting their revenge. Loved Bella vomiting on her opponent and then killing him - hilarious. I hope she makes it through unscathed. Well, I hope everyone makes it through unscathed. I also loved Remus's disposal of Greyback and I do dearly hope that he is around to claim that reward.

Waiting for the next parts and trying not to bite my nails!
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From Baybeetricia on September 06, 2008
*Looks at Bellatrix* I don't understand it. Well, in complete honesty I do but, Bellatrix, did you forget your new found position? You are pregnant. PREGNANT DO YOU HEAR ME? Why in the hell are you in the front? I understand your strength and what not but there is a baby involved here....think rationally dammit!

-sigh-

*Looks at author* She's not going to listen to me is she?

Damn Bellatrix is tough....but I like it. :)

HOT DAMN!!!!!! Severus really had some serious balls....ACID????? Merlin, I thought this war was strictly gonna be a wand-to-want thing but Thank Merlin it isn't. I can't stand war stories with those (which is why i seldom read them. Yours just seem to be the exception)

I still can't get over it. Battery Acid......(H2SO4)...sorry it's a habit, Biology minor chemistry major here,....Severus YOUR ROCK!!!!

HOLY MOTHER OF MERLIN!!!!! WEREWOLF VS WEREWOLF......GREYBACK VS LUPIN......How can things get much better than this?

Can I possibily have the links for the pic for sulphuric acid? I'm not a gore fan but I love making things....and messing with things. I just wanted to see them so i could be extra precautions around them....lol

Anyway, I love how you updated so soon.

If only I could do that on my other stories....

Baybeetricia
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From distinctlyME on September 06, 2008
WOOOOHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! hehehehe

I know I know I'm a violent little one. BUT you have to admit...it's a battle, violence is key. Or maybe I'm just some deranged little freak who gets her kicks from reading about the bad guys face being smashed in!! haha
OMG Remus how I have always adored you!!! YAYYYYYYYYYY Remus!!! I was like holding in my whooping so my fiancee wouldn't come in and declare me insane. I had my fist to my mouth to shut it, and I was like red with excitement. I even bounced up and down in my seat!!! lmao. I couldn't help it, it was like awesome x 10!! YAYYY Remus again!! hahaha. Im very proud of that part. It was PERFECT!!!!

And oh I love Dumbledore, always so calm and Dumbledore-ish. I'd love to be like him you know...minus the whole "I have to keep secrets from everybody" thing we see in the books.

Oh Bella, what are you doing you crazy insane woman!!! You should be at home with Narcissa and Kyra. And Roddy, such a man, not realizing something is off with his wife!!! Oh please don't let anything happen to them!!! It would be sooo sad.

I like that order of occurrences btw!!! ;) lol.

LOVE IT!!!! Now I'm just waiting on Hermione and Draco!!!! There best be being a whole chapter on them missy!!! hahaha. Not that I'm pushing or anything *looks all shifty eyed and guilty*

Can't wait for the next installment. Truly fabulous.

p.s. Thank you for my violence fill.

p.p.s Ruby the poor girl will probably have a melt down. I'm pretty sure any one who can realize their full actions when the adrenaline died out, would have a melt down. BUT no one can blame the girl for what she did. It's Die or Kill in a battle, and that girl has been through too much to die!!!!
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From ANON - nitesfool on September 06, 2008
okk.... that'a what's up... i enjoyed ur insights into what the characters were thinkin....and it was interesting that serverus remembered the acid comment and prepared in advance for it. now as for the fight btween greybackk and lupin... u did a good job. i particularly liked the howl! til next time!
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From blondpierogi on September 06, 2008
aww brilliant chapter.
ooh you really go out when you write. the research you did is not something ppl want to see. Its really bad and i once had to see similar pictures and i have nightmares for weeks. eeeh i give u 2 thumbs up and tons of kudos.
you are the best and love your work!
cannot wait to read about how the battle ends.. i will anxiously wait. :-D
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From ANON - pickles87 on September 06, 2008
Thank you for all the wonderful recent updates.
Glad Ruby got her revenge as well as Lupin.
Will Bella fess up in the middle of battle to Roddy that she is with child.
I could see Roddy bringing down quite a few of his former brethern.
Also I don't think I've ever come across a story where one deatheater uses his mark against his brothers.
Since everyone is in a battledome could a marked one call the others to his side without their control. Like when Tom calls everyone to let them know its time to meet - is it possible for another to call everyone over without Voldy doing it.
I think I'll post that question on Potter place too.
Go ahead and use the idea if you like.
Waiting for more.
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From Baybeetricia on September 05, 2008
Well MY GOODNESS

This story has officially gone on my favorite stories list (on pc)

I have just spent the last 5 hours sitting at my pc reading the entire 37 chapters of this story.

-sighs-

Update soon plse...

I really want to see what happens....oh, and have my deepest sympathy (even though she might not want it) Ruby
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From ANON - Absence on September 05, 2008
I am a late comer to your stories, but I must say that they captured me so that I had to read it all in one sitting over the course of one bloody night. Damn you for being so good that I am compelled to stay up and satisfy my need to know what happens next! Alright, constructive criticism first. Don't be afraid to delight in detail. There are several moods I see in you when you write: descriptive, attentive and direct. The last battle is more direct and talks about the physicality of what is happening. Maybe go a bit deeper into what each person is intuitively thinking, their feelings, what is at stake and what they have to gain from the Order winning. Next, COMPLIMENTS! I have to leave a very long post in order to make up for not being able to review all your chapters- so here it goes. Get ready to be faltered. First, I love your Hermione. She is amazing. She's exactly what I love to see in fan fictions and not many authors can pull her off very well. Points for you. Second, your Draco is one bad ass motherfucker. He has the perfect blend of poise, elegance, aristocratic snobbery and at the same time is loving, passionate and completely adorable! The plot is great, I love the way your story moves. I feel like you take just enough time to make me feel comfortable with what's going on and then you move on at a relatable pace so I don't feel dragged along. You write very smoothly and elegantly. Next, and my favorite: Bellatrix + Rodolphus = slkdflskdfjsdfjamazingholyshilovethemsomuch! You must just laugh every time you write for that crazy witch! "Didn't I kill you?" I nearly died laughing. She's so fun and sporadic. I like that you didn't change her from what she was in the books to something completely different. You just gave her your own special twist. All in all this fiction is exactly my brand of heroin... so keep writing and I cant wait to see what happens next!!!
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From leValkyrie on September 04, 2008
how can ron makes jokes in tihe middle of a battle lol...i also liked ruby's killing of hawthorne...excellently written!
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From ANON - crazypsycho on September 04, 2008
I absolutely love your story!! I hope that you keep updating as fast as you can!!
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From LolaDiBlack on September 04, 2008
Hello!!! aaaaaaaaaaahhh this fic its awesome I love it and poor Ruby, I love her spunk and how easy you get to love her and well there are a lot of details

-Bella's turning
-her platonic affair with spongebob
-her submission to her husband
-and last but but not least flipp;ing the bird to voldemort with a very important statement "Fuck You"

-Ruby's plotting to get rid of Ron
-Harry love for the piano
-and a lot more

one of my favorites its the guardian part with the "Hold on Child of Magic" My gods, it brought me to tears
I love it and well update soon and good luck getting that job

take care
Love
Lola
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From distinctlyME on September 04, 2008
I Swear to the heavens woman that if Ron dies...oooohhhh *shakes fist* But that was a very nice last line just in case he does, I will have to give you credit for that!!

I was very teary-eyed through the Narcissa/Lucius moments. I think it was great.
Bella well she's a feisty little one, but a tad bit stupid...I mean if it hadn't been for Rodolphus's deflection of the curse, she could have been the first injured or killed......silly little witch, sometime she needs to know when silence is better. Silence towards your enemy is always stronger than words. I think at least.

Wow....Ruby stabbed him...she killed him....wow. For someone casting juvenile spells just wow. But if I were in that situation, I don't know if I wouldn't do the same. I always say I don't have it in me to kill, even if it meant saving my own life. But then i think, what if it meant saving others lives? and I wonder if I couldn't do it. I wonder if I was ever in a battle, heaven forbid, if I could do it.
I'm a little disappointed Ruby killed to be honest. The anger in her, it's just not something I want to see. :(

I think there could have been more angst, more description of death and loss, just maybe a little more powerful than say revengeful with a twist of comedy. I don't know. I would have liked it to be full of angst and desperation, kind of like Ruby's...uh....well when she was captured.

All in all though...you know I liked it. I always do :)
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From blondpierogi on September 04, 2008
oooh damn. I wrote a long review and it didnt post.. hmm i will try to remember what I wrote. Here it goes...

Brilliant Chapter!! Great job! Cannot wait to read more, stopping in the middle of battle that was evil. LOL

BTW I just graduated from a community college (well in New Jersey they call them "county colleges") with an Associate of Arts degree. I am broke too and I paid everything on my credit cards. Also b/c of the Army and my back problem, i DO NOT receive any financial aid or the G.I.bill. This week i start classes at a 4 year University and I have 2 more years to go. Now i have an aditional $20K in debt b/c of school loans. Its tough going to college, but hang in there. IT will be good in a long run.
Also its better to go to a community college b/c by the time you graduate or transfer then you will have money saved up for the expensive school. Yes the price of colleges/universitys in US have gone up by 8% this year.
An education is an education no matter where you attend. It will be good in the long run.
if you ever need to vent about how community/county colleges suck, you are all free to e-mail me at blondpierogi@netscape.net
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From ANON - That1OverThere on September 04, 2008
And when I use the dam thing it goes spako on me and types strange symbols everywhere!!!! ARGH

:D
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From ANON - That1OverThere on September 04, 2008
Me too.... I was an Australian size 16-18(US 12
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