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By : AshaVincent
  • From MotekElm on March 22, 2017

    Pros: lots of lemons

    Lots of romance

    Plot

    Technically complete

    Cons: plot with evil Harry is just getting started when it ends and the part 2 the author promised was never written

    Sometimes switches tenses back and forth

    Alt med, reiki, home birth BS

    Long winded


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  • From Trelweny on July 26, 2012
    Wonderful, fascinating story! I loved the whole finding each other in the muggle world bit, as well as their lives there. The passion was just so intense and although fast it was displayed quite believably.

    I'm not a fan of Harry being a bad guy... it's really hard after the canon books being from his perspective. Although he definitely had his 'git' moments it's rather hard to take his treatment of Hermione believably even though you wrote it quite well. I just had trouble getting past the canon on that one.

    Otherwise I loved just about everything in this. Minerva is spectacular. Perhaps in the sequel the Malfoys can get Luna and Neville on their side? I can see it working, and helping out immensely. Blaise and Blythe are awesome but in fighting or at least standing up to your evil!Harry the more supporters they have the better.

    Thanks for not having Ginny in on the evil too. What about the rest of the Weasleys? Arthur certainly seems to be his sweet self -at least from Draco's short tale of him.

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From Bajagirl on August 12, 2011
    Such a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks so much for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - dracogirl79 on June 30, 2011
    I have just finish re-reading this wonderful story for the 3rd time.
    I am really sorry to hear about your mother and understand you feel like it will not do you wrting any justice if you continue.. I just hope you can come to terms with it and get back to your writing. Please do not think me to be cold hearted but if writing is what makes you happy, then maybe it will help
    you. I have also read your other stories a few times over. I really hope you come back and write part two to this story soon. blessed be
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  • From Drea1256 on December 07, 2010
    Fabulous job. Loved it. I hope you still plan on a sequel cause I can't wait for it
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  • From ANON - Irene on November 12, 2010
    Ok, love this story have read like five times. So what I want to know is when is the sequel gonna be up?
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  • From ANON - Josie on November 09, 2010
    I love this story...I keep coming back to read it again and again ! :)
    Looking forward to the next part
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  • From ANON - heather on October 14, 2010
    love the story cant wait for the sequel
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  • From angelnomiko on August 15, 2010
    Can't wait to read the sequel, i realy enjoyed reading this fic ... please please post Going Home
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  • From chocolatekitten2 on July 21, 2010
    Love this story when are gonna post part 2.
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  • From ANON - Carol on July 01, 2010
    Can't wait to read the sequel, i realy enjoyed this fic.
    Hope you are fine,
    Best wishies
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  • From Cissi418 on May 22, 2010
    Truly enjoyed this story. What happened to Part 2?
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  • From ebonyeyez1 on September 03, 2009
    What an amazing tale. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From ANON - angelsbabystarr on August 31, 2009
    I really loved this story. i keep thinking, man how did they ever get anything done with all the sex they had lol. You are a good writer.
    I can not wait for part 2. Please keep me updated. sorry I really suck at writing reviews.
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  • From Eilisbelle on August 12, 2009
    good finisher!! That was *fabulous*!!
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