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Reviews for We Can Work It Out

By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From QuicksilverEyes on May 05, 2009
    WOW, I absolutely LOVE this story! But I totally want to rip out my hair at Draco's cowardice and Hermione's cluelessness, lol. And Ron better not think he can weasel his way back into Hermione's heart and abandon his family... though that might be the push Draco needs to man up and confess his feelings. I also like the quirky office mum and dad thing and the crazy co-worker characters.

    You are an absolutely wonderful writer, though I haven't read much because I'm not really into non-con. Please write more stories like this!
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  • From mlui on January 22, 2009
    I've just been catching up on all my AFF HP fanfics and I loved the last several chapters! Please update soon and just curious, are you going to update After Midnight or is that on hiatus?
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  • From haleynoel on December 16, 2008
    great as always as for the veela i love your dark ones where he obviously loves her but is really dominant my fave!
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  • From dragongirl on November 12, 2008
    This story is very sweet, but please make Draco a little bit more corage to talk to Hermione, they are in love and they have to tell each other, of course my best suggestion for the end should be way pass all there kids are in school.. LOL I love Dramione Lourdes
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  • From gabby1234 on November 06, 2008
    this was totally freaking awesome! I love this story and i cannot wait for more! Why is this story so awesome please say they have an open heart to heart lovey dovey talk soon!
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  • From sugypunk on October 31, 2008
    Wow! This story is great! I read the whole thing (up until ch. 11) in one night, and anxiously await the next update! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
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  • From Bellavixen on October 30, 2008
    Love the story!
    Can't wait to see where it goes.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 29, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From LadyNyx02 on October 28, 2008
    Cute! =] I'm glad Blaise turned out to be a good friend after all. ^^ I love the whole idea about the Mum and Dad thing haha It's so amusing to see the entire department interacting. Great job. Update soon!
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  • From Ceruse on October 28, 2008
    Veela fics are my favorite. Dark and angsty are always the best, I can't imagine anything having enough influence on draco that would causes him to become fluffy. Anyway, I absolutely adore this story and am a big fan of your others. Please keep going.

    Suggestions for dark veela fic.
    - unhappy and feisty hermione - its always strange to think of stubborn hermione simply rolling over on her back because of a man
    - physical transformation - in many veela fics, draco is exposed, but has very little effect on his body, I think the best stories are when draco has to accept another being into his psyche and is physically changed because of it - one example of this is the wonderful story called Malfoy's Mate
    - Believable teacher intervention
    - Life/blood bonds
    - Ministry intervention - for example, making it illegal to kill a veela, and regulating the mating of such creatures
    - However, you are the wonderful author and i trust you to write an excellent story using whatever elements you like.
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  • From kazfeist on October 27, 2008
    Loved the update. I don't think anyone's paired Blaise with Luna in a realistic sort of way. I liked the other interests you gave them both. :D
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  • From TerryMoon on October 26, 2008
    Are you really going to hook up Blaise and Luna? Because I'd love to see how that goes as I think they'd be an adorable and very odd-in-a-cute way couple.^^
    I liked how Draco told Hermione to be exclusive. He did seem like a teenager insecure and all.
    Oh! I wonder what will happen when Ron comes into the picture...! That is bound to be pretty interesting too.
    Very good chapter!

    PS: I love Hermione and Draco's team work!
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  • From nonentity on October 26, 2008
    I like seeing the assorted Department people very much; Christine's fussing is adorable. It's nice to see their friends reactions to the whole thing. The Blaise and Luna thing is different, but plausible the way you present it. Not that he's madly in love and indulgent, but that she has valid publications and he's truly interested in her work.

    I like Hermione's answer to Harry's comment about Ron and Lavender's happiness. Although you would think a new baby girl would be a pretty big distraction. I'm curious about whether Ron is going to become a subplot (i.e. freaking out and hitting on Hermione) or just a side note.
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  • From bananasforyou on October 26, 2008
    ohhh luna and blaise? nice. loved the chap!
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  • From heather360 on October 26, 2008
    AWWW. Luna and Blaise. @ love this story. Draco the coward and Hermione the great, always a great combo in my book. Now for the Veela story, I think dark obsessive draco with a hint of unrealized love. *hugs* BGD
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