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Reviews for Not a Happy Beginning

By : Ladyroo88
  • From ANON - DemonicFire on June 23, 2009
    i just love your story i hope you eventually update it
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  • From ValheruYaoi on February 10, 2009
    YAY, cool story,,, really starting to annoy me at how many are similar to this and all stop at this point!!! heir fo something, prophesy, let a co0uple people know and then they don't follow their own storyline. Hope you come back to finish it. Haven't seen anything like this finished yet so I'm going to just hope for the best :)
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  • From Ewe on November 20, 2008
    this is a good story please write more.

    ewe
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  • From starupinthesky on November 11, 2008
    This is really hard to read. It is very choppy and you use then a lot.
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  • From ladyedgecombe on October 31, 2008
    This is such a cool story. Do you plan to update soon? You can email me at yahoo with the same name.
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  • From ANON - fairywolf on September 22, 2008
    are you going to update any time soon i just read this again and i like it so i was wondering when you might be updating
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  • From ANON - Rae on August 30, 2008
    Very interesting story!
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  • From ANON - mpreg-freak on June 20, 2008
    man i love your story i hope you update soon, the pairing is so original to! (Atleast to my knowledge :D)
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  • From ANON - Meleeanna on June 02, 2008
    This could be a very good fic, the idea and plot if thought through properly and written well can create an interesting read. I'm just not seeing that at the moment. The actual writing and presentation of the characters is childish at best, don't get me wrong I'm not trying to be mean with this. Is this posibbly a first or near first fic? because it does have the air of 'I'm a new writer' to it.

    One big thing I find wrong with this is the way you have done Harry, Urber Harry is all right and fine with me if done right, what you've done is pile him with power and money in such a way that it seems you just want to have Harry this powerful and wealthy to make him the urber cool of the story. You also make Harry's personality and feelings towards his abuse a tad too happy and cheerful, it actually ruins the feel and makes him hateable.

    Other than that it is good and I like it.
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  • From Madhater on May 23, 2008
    wonderful story i love it i look forward to seeing what happens next. ^_^
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  • From Bonecollector on May 22, 2008
    Can't wait for the next chapter. will you please, please, please tell me when you get the next chapter up?
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  • From alma on May 21, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From dino1 on May 21, 2008
    So he has pictures of his ancestors. imagine the wealth of knowledge he has access to. After all who says the pictures in the wizarding word can't learn. Can't wait till Harry finds his soulmae!
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  • From kyuubifreak on May 21, 2008
    i love the story, i through u maybe give up on the story... what about draco?? still rival or become somewhat friend?
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  • From sanda on May 21, 2008
    good chapter
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