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Reviews for Girl Talk

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From carha on March 11, 2009
    Honey, you will always have this reader, no matter what you write! You are one of, if not THE, best writers on this site. That was a great chapter, and very hot. You may not write slash often, but you still don't disappoint whatever you write! Looking forward to your updates always!
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  • From ANON - kmk on March 11, 2009
    wow..... just wow.....nice threesome...god the images that are in my mind lol... great job!!! it was very yummy to read
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  • From ANON - imagineaworld on March 11, 2009
    wow...
    nope, haven't lost me as a reader!!!
    really good
    more soon please
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 11, 2009
    This was a wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more. I think it will be great to have a triad with Lucius/Hermione/Severus.
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  • From HarryPotterFan on March 11, 2009
    That chapter was hot. I think it would be a great chapter if you did HG/LM/SS.
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  • From on March 11, 2009
    Lose your readers??? NEVER!!! I'm still reeling here... I thought it was a fabulous chapter, in case you couldn't tell!
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  • From Pumkin on March 11, 2009
    i think it turned out well. no need to worry. i can understand how you managed not to get any work done. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2009
    If you were to create a triad relationship, Severus and Lucius do not necessarily have to interact (sexually) with each other outside of Hermione, which relieves your slash fear. I have seen triad relationships in fics and they have worked out fine. I am in full faith that, based on your quality of writing, that you would be able to effectively write a triad between the three (that would be really hot ^^). (In Adventurous Hearts Part 2: Nimue's Island, you hinted to things very well).

    Hope this review helped! Keep up the good work.
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  • From Cliobella on March 11, 2009
    Guh! Gurgle! Blinking slowly and gasping for air here. I would love to say something eloquent, but my brain has melted out my ears. I
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  • From ginnyginny on March 11, 2009
    this was really good, a slant from where you normally, go, and i'm not that into slash, but i think it was tastefully done. one of the lines reminds me of a fave triad between lm/ss/hg called... death eater double team. it's on this website somewhere. glad to see you pick this one up again. brilliant as always.
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  • From ANON - Carol on March 11, 2009
    The scene between Snape, Lucius and Hermione was HOTTTTT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Walls on March 11, 2009
    I dont think you went to far with the Snape fantacy. The whole story is about Hermione finding her sexuality and Lucius helping her. I think another senario would be another woman ----- Hermione and Lucious go out for dinner one nite with busisness associates and the wife subtly hits on Hermione -- just enough to get her intrested ---- and well your the writer
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  • From mageemi on March 11, 2009
    OMG! That was HOT, HOT, HOT!!!! Please don't stop here, HG/SS/LM are my fave threesome and you are one of my fave writers so what a wonderful combination. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - scarlet quill on March 11, 2009
    Well you certainly havent lost my readership! I remain loyal, I must admit id thought this fic had been adbandoned for wilder persuits! I'm glad to see it hasnt been forgotten! Definately an idea with the LMSSHG to be investigated, please give it a shot! I cant help wondering what Severus' take on this whole relationship would be lol. Looking forward to your next update, hope it wont be to long! :D
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  • From Larrabee on March 11, 2009
    I can totally see that scenario. Though I don't expect that Lucius and Severus would have had a relationship without a woman being involved.

    But you are the writer... one of my favorites and I can't wait for more updates on this and all of your stories.

    All the best,
    Elaine
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