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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - Anon on September 14, 2008
    I love this story. Great writing. I cant wait for more.
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  • From chickaboo on September 14, 2008
    Well call me a big puddle of goo. lol Fantastic update! Angry hate sex is SO some of the best kind. lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2008
    I READ YOU STORY AND LET ME TELL YOU WOOOOOOOOOOOW! I'M COMPLETELY IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE HOW YOU HAVE PORTRATITED LUCIUS SO FAR AND HOW HERMIONE IS ACTING. I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR CREATIVE WRITING. YOU MAKE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS SOUND SO ALIKE- SO HOW THEY ARE! GREAT JOB! AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. YOU MADE MY DAY. UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON!

    LADY SERPENTINA
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on September 13, 2008
    sorry Ive been gone so long, computer trouble. LOVED IT THOUGH
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  • From ANON - zareenyn on September 13, 2008
    I know you've indicated before that Snape really does it for you, but my word, you really have a way with Luscious Lucius. He is the perfect Alpha male that so many of us women fantasise about. Thanks for letting us peek into your vision of him. Another thing I appreciate that you've not done here is that you don't have him constantly referring to Hermione as Little One. I hate to say it, but that gets rather grating after a while.

    This fic is so much fun. Please keep going with it.
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 13, 2008
    Chapter 7: It feels like being around Lucius has finally worn through into Hermione
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  • From dynonugget on September 13, 2008
    Someone recced this over at The New Library on LiveJournal so here I am, and quite happy about it too! I love Lucius, and this is fun PWP to be sure! You're doing a delicious job, to be sure.
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  • From LVanna on September 13, 2008
    Some of the BEST Lumione smut I've read in recently. So good I had to go rec' it on The_New_Library over on LJ. If you want to get the 'I was rec'd' icon just email me and I'll give you the link to the comm. Well done and keep it going! :P
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  • From jddammann on September 12, 2008
    Oh, when ever anything ends in "nothing will ruin their happiness", I know we are in trouble! :-) Loving the story, not too much angst please. This is such a wonderful love story with all the lemons we all look forward to, thanks so much for sharing.
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  • From Heidi191976 on September 12, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From dannilawless on September 12, 2008
    Loved it!!!
    Some much for a series of one shots. I thing you have effectivly given plot!!
    Hope you and the kids are well!!

    Much love!
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  • From KellyJCR on September 12, 2008
    Reading this makes my computer smoke its so hot! I like that Lucius is more approachable in this and Hermione is not as standoffish. Inexperienced yes but, I like that she goes after what she wants. Well done!!!
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  • From Utopia on September 12, 2008
    You're having an updating frenzy! lol!

    When we're mad, we tend to forget that our significant other can't actually read minds - or actually know what has got up our noses! lol! Poor Lucius, Hermione mad isn't pretty.

    Lucius, shut up. He's digging himself one heck of a hole!

    THIS IS HILLARIOUS! ROFLMAO

    Domesticated and Lucius in the same sentence gives me an image of Hermione coming home to find him slaving over a few saucepans in nothing but a frilly apron! lol! Actually... that's a VERY nice image!

    Ruined it? Nah, buttons sew back on, Lucius.

    Whoa! Blimey! I think you have the award for best love-making scene in the DM/HG - and I think you've just got best explosive scene too! Blimey! You're on a roll at the moment, aren't you?!

    Awww, cuddles after too! I love how you can go from frenzy to cute in the blink of an eye and have it flow together completely!

    They're moving in! Yay!

    Oooh... another Sevvie fic! Yummy.
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  • From sweething10 on September 11, 2008
    Oh yes, I most certainly did enjoy. Damn, that fuckfight was hot! I love it when Hermione gives as good as she gets.
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  • From ANON - nonentity on September 11, 2008
    Very nice chapter. I think leaving out girl talk in this chapter was a good call on your part--you managed to keep it up for seven chapters, but it can be awkward to incorporate. Lucius's reaction to the quilt bedspread and to the temperature of Hermione's place rings true. You emphasize Lucius's Slytherinness nicely. She would probably be too skittish about a marriage proposal (and it's not clear if he's ready for that, except as a means of keeping her). I do wonder how he plans to continue breaking her down. An "accidental" pregnancy in the future?

    Love the Draco! Looking forward to seeing him in future chapters.
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