Click Here!

Reviews for Girl Talk

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Heidi191976 on June 02, 2008
    This was an incredible chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
    Report Review

  • From Extraho on June 02, 2008
    that was just the sweetest thing!!!!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From NutsAboutHarry on June 02, 2008
    Oh maaaaaan Lucius is human and he is capable of loving!....**Swoon**

    That was a sensational chapter and I hope the next one is just as good.

    Well done!
    Report Review

  • From curikitten on June 02, 2008
    I think the fifth and latest is probably the best installment of this little collection. You've taken a fairly vanilla type of smut that is often, frankly, boring to read and turned it into something I forced myself to slow down and enjoy. I've read needs-love/vulnerable!Lucius before, but I'm not sure that I've ever really believed it as much as I do here. Well done, indeed.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - angeleye68 on June 02, 2008
    While I enjoy all 5 chapters, chapter 5 is my favorite. A bad Lucius is erotic but a loving Lucius is incredible sexy and more than a huge turn-on! To put it mildly, he did right by her in this chapter. Love the last couple of lines of Lucius with his head on her chest, Hermione's hands in his hair and his feeling of being wrapped in her arms for comfort -- just lovely. Brava!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jean on June 01, 2008
    You did a great job showing Lucius's raw emotions. The entire chapter was very moving.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mariteri on June 01, 2008
    Sigh! It's stories like this that remind me why I had been addicted to romance novels. I loved it. It was sweet and tender without needing a diabetic warning. Keep up the good work and update when you can.
    Report Review

  • From chickaboo on June 01, 2008
    What a great update! That was SO SWEET! I loved it. It was just what I needed to read today. I can't wait for more!!
    Report Review

  • From LadyBlueEyes on June 01, 2008
    This was a fantastic emotional chapter! We get to see the lucius thats hidden underneath. "that was sweet." "Slytherins aren't sweet" *snorts" now where did that come from? LOL "No one ever smiles. really smiles for me." oh that made my heart constrict and want to hug lucius. A beautiful, tender, SWEET, scene! Now what about something a bit more voyueristic?
    Report Review

  • From luvhp on May 30, 2008
    Okay, so, who gave you my diary and said you could write about my poorly sex life before finally understanding it was OKAY to move during sex!!! LOL
    And yes, I found my 'Lucius' to be quite exhausting as Hermione has *snicker*
    Although, 19 yrs and 3 kids later it's much more subdued, so thank you SO much for writing this lovely story, it brings back such wonderful memories! XD
    Especially the 'public' chapter. And we all need a friend like Ginny.
    ITA about those who enter before knocking! If they don't wanna see it, don't ENTER!
    Good for Lucius rubbing it in. Maybe next time he'll think twice about inviting someone to his room when he's had too much to drink!!!

    I LOVE IT and can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From kitty08 on May 30, 2008
    your story ist really goood! did you already thought about a threesome? i mean with lucius and hermione here? and probably with Snape? and maybe a bit more Dom from Lucius side? but these are only suggestions. feel free to ignore them and write a story you like. ^^
    Report Review

  • From nonentity on May 30, 2008
    I forgot Draco had a bit of a drinking problem in college until Lucius cut him off at one glass. The stone fireplace sounds uncomfortable, but the position on the couch sounds fun--I'll have to try that. I was wondering how you were going to continue putting Ginny/Hermione conversations in.
    Lucius is an arse--a sexy arse, but still an arse. Well, Draco's arrogance had to come from somewhere. Do Hermione and Lucius have much of a relationship outside the bedroom? It's not entirely clear. They went out to dinner at least once and they're working together on a project.
    Report Review

  • From JaceDamian23 on May 29, 2008
    hun i love this story. very hot
    mind emailing me when you write more, please?








    Report Review

  • From ANON - akasha2411 on May 29, 2008
    waow thats hot stuff!
    I love your kinky Ginny!
    And Draco... hilarious!
    I wonder what they will do next...

    Report Review

  • From daytimedrama on May 29, 2008
    ooh I loved this chapter!! Very hot, The phone call with Ginny and I loved that Hermione was too wiped out to even be upset that Draco walked in. Usually I only read Sirius/Hermione but I'm really liking Lucius/Hermione now, ::trots off to go find some more::
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!