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Reviews for Whispers

By : SilverEyedPhoenix
  • From ElisabethWay on June 05, 2008
    lol, I love how you know all the little facts XP
    Another uber awesome special chapter!
    Yay!
    ^.^
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  • From ElisabethWay on June 05, 2008
    Awwss, yay for first kisses! ^.^
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  • From Camryn31 on June 05, 2008
    hehehe nice one
    i love stupid arsehole rons *g*
    are hermione and draco boyfriend/girlsfriend or not yet?! not exactly sure...
    anyway.. i love stories where their relationshp is out in the open.. so .. yeah..
    updaaaaate soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2008
    "Hermione couldn't help but squeak like a preteen girl at a a boy band concert." LMAO - Loved that line. :) And Hermione being 'his' Gryffindor Princess to boot.

    Don't stress over any mistakes, we all make them. (please, I've lost count of mine) LOL Frankly as long as I can understand where the sentence is going I don't give a toss whether a word is mispelt or there's been a typo or the punctuation is off. Just get in there and have some fun writing and I'll have fun reading. :)
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  • From Fairycat on May 23, 2008
    Hmmmm this story is getting hot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From myangeldraco on May 21, 2008
    This story is excellent and I'm only on the first chapter!!!!
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  • From ElisabethWay on May 16, 2008
    Yay for you second chapter!! ^.^ Keep it up, maybe one day I'll update too XP
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  • From luvhp on May 15, 2008
    ooh, you little tease! For your first story you are doing quite well. :)
    The confusion seems very believable :) Blaise is too cute.
    Keep it up, I'll be here to review :)
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  • From miakitty on May 15, 2008
    wow,,this is amazing. You should write longer,and i think i know what will happend in R.O.R,but i'll keep it in my head,and wait for the next chapter.
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  • From luvhp on May 14, 2008
    Bring it on, sounds fun!
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  • From Camryn31 on May 14, 2008
    woow i like the stoy... soo cute
    it needs a spelling check (Harry not harry)
    and its a bit weird that Draco Malfoy knows what a camera is....but oh well
    other than that its reaaally good!!!!! i like the storyline
    update SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!
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  • From ElisabethWay on May 14, 2008
    *shakes head* what have I done to you XP
    *glomps* its was good! XP
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  • From amyfeddy on May 14, 2008
    Ohh, this has much promise, I like it so far. Keep going, make the next chapter longer if you can. I know this was a setup, but I would like to read more.
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  • From distinctlyME on May 14, 2008
    Well Congratulations on your first fic. Isn't it the most nerve wracking thing in the world? I know when I wrote mine I was checking my e-mail over and over again, about every five minutes to see if I had reviews. hehe.


    I just want to say I like where this is going, it was a bit of a shaky start. You might want to look into getting a Beta. I know I'm glad I've found one. My spelling and grammar is atrocious.
    It's just a suggestion though.

    Also I'm a little confused. Why did Draco call Hermione a mudblood and then seconds later offer her his hand? Was it in front of people? Because that would be really OOC of him.

    So I think you should continue. I want to know why he wants to use his camera in the room of requirement ;)
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  • From bananasforyou on May 13, 2008
    ooooh it was fanntasttic!
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