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Reviews for Soar on Delicate Wings

By : deadlyfatedangel
  • From erospandora on May 16, 2008
    Yes, it helped a lot lol i'm glad you put it in ^^
    ron is just a butt-head alot so :-p to him lol

    Keep up the writing

    ~Eros
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  • From bananasforyou on May 15, 2008
    ooh okay. i loved this chap so much.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From alma on May 15, 2008
    good start.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 15, 2008
    Sooo gotta have chapter 4! Oh they are sooo cute together!!! Sooo who is dominate?
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  • From bananasforyou on May 14, 2008
    oooh i love it and need more. what about 'twisted illsion'? i love that one also.
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  • From Silverdragon21 on May 14, 2008
    great start, really peeked my interest, can't wait to see what you di wuth the next chapter

    oneor two little spelling errors, nothing major that can't wait
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 14, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 3! What a way to find out you're someone's mate! What is Harry's animagus?
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  • From erospandora on May 14, 2008
    Um its good so far the second chapter needs a beta....
    However harry seems to be a lot more level minded and he didn't even tell his best friends about his fae-ness thats kindda' odd
    Also i'd suggest more of a description of himself honestly if i suddenly sprouted wings I'd want to look at them, wouldn't you? so maybe add a part in here where he looks at them? I mean cause they're obviously visable or something cause everyone knew what it was when they looked at his back...


    anyway good luck, write on
    ~Eros
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