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Reviews for Undesirable - COMPLETE

By : slashpervert
  • From Milva on June 23, 2008
    I became quite addicted to this story :P Every Monday, Wednesday and Friday I can't wait to 11 A.M.! (is about this time at mine when new chapter is upload)
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  • From char6785 on June 23, 2008
    OMG i just love this story !!!!!, can't wait for hopefully harry to get a bit better, but then again i'm not the author and cant say whats gonna happen lol, keep up the great work :)
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  • From ANON - Madame Feu Cheveux on June 23, 2008
    Woah, well first off I feel the need to apologise, because basically I have read this for weeks, and forgotten to reveiw, and I hate it when people do that XD
    However, your story is amazing, you have the right balance going. Its mature, and a little disturbing at times, and then completely heartwarming. I love it. You are an amazing writer. And please, keep updating! ^w^

    oooh, also, you update so quickly, basically, I love you xD

    enamoured,
    Madame.

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  • From vampirekisses on June 23, 2008
    Oh wow. That was great!
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  • From feltonslover on June 21, 2008
    OMG! I am taken with this story. It is very well written but is very disturbing. Please keep writting/.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on June 20, 2008
    i love it please more!!
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  • From Rosei on June 20, 2008
    Chapter 16

    Wow!!! Yuck!!!! Poor HP!!!!!
    That poor chick!!!!!!!! Yuck!!!!!!!!!

    Thanks!
    R
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  • From Leentjef on June 20, 2008
    omg the last part was horribel, i feel so sorry for them
    and the first par was very nice and sweet
    keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ilke on June 20, 2008
    Ewwww, that was gruesome! Love, love, loved that "it all came out" - or rather, the nuts and bolts of it, when Harry told Draco. What happened to Draco? Are we going to get to know that? I love the tenderness between them. Seems like Harry is getting better. I have to say that my fragile imagination likes it better when you end on a happy note. I had to read the last paragraph "uncarefully" and just sort of skim my eyes over it. Maybe I'm just a weakling that way. Anyway, I do adore your story. I was happy to see that there are 31 total chapters and we're only on 16. We still have so much time together! Yeah!
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  • From arsenicLace on June 20, 2008
    So sad :( Hope McLaggen comes to a very very nasty end.
    beautifully written, as always.
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  • From vampirekisses on June 20, 2008
    How gruesome was that?! I am so glad Harry is safe now. It's no small wonder his mind was messed up! I'm glad Draco understands him.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on June 18, 2008
    Awww! that was sweet!!! i love it! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - Sumire on June 18, 2008
    Hey, this is one of the most beautiful stories i've ever read.
    Please write more soon, I'm looking forward to read more of Harry and Draco!
    I love your way describing their feelings!
    Sum
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  • From Leentjef on June 18, 2008
    wow very very good chapter
    keep up the graet work
    and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Harryslover on June 18, 2008
    Oh, this is very sweet. I'm a little worried about how the intercourse is going to effect Harry. I hope he isn't going to go into a crazy spell. I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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