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  • From ANON - xXVatesXx on June 18, 2008
    *ish too lazy to log in*

    Wow... I'm quite impressed! I am really loving what your doing with this, and the only thing I can see wrong are a few grammar mistakes. Interesting plot and I can't wait to see what happens. please update soon! I haven't been this intrigued in a HP fic for a looooong time ^^
    Cheers
    Crmy
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  • From ANON - JKG on June 18, 2008
    Hi! I have just recently read your Bound Prince Series and now I have found this. I love the way you write. Both stories are so very different. This one has a touch of bitterness, sadness and you have succeeded in making me shed a few tears. Oh yes...this has a happy ending right? I just cannot bear unhappy endings. I'm looking forward to the next chapter for this story and the newest story for the Bound Prince Series.
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  • From avihenda on June 18, 2008
    good
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  • From alleycat88 on June 18, 2008
    Lovely chapter. I just love the way Draco was so patient and caring with Harry. It was sweet...and hot. Thanks for updating!
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  • From Milva on June 18, 2008
    hot :D Now nothing can't stop them :)
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  • From ilke on June 18, 2008
    So, maybe Draco can get his Sex Healer's license (eek, the song 'Sexual Healing' keeps running though my head). God damn I fucking love this story. I read soooo many stories and this is at the very top, number one spot, even above all my beloved Dramiones. Seriously rockin!
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  • From vampirekisses on June 18, 2008
    That was such a sweet chapter! I am so glad Draco was so gentle and understanding.
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  • From ANON - redheadwizard on June 18, 2008
    omggggggggggggg soooooooo adorable!!!!!!!!!! that was so cute, even for oral sex!
    love it!!!!! pleease update sooner! i cant stand this mon. wed. fri. thing, it drives me insane!
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  • From Rosei on June 17, 2008
    Chapter 14

    Love the kissing! Love the intimacy!!!
    Excellent writing and absolutely love the feelings
    between the two of them!!!!

    Thanks,
    R
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  • From Harryslover on June 17, 2008
    That is very sweet. I'm glad that Harry is slowly getting better, and that they are going to be going very slowly. Great job on the pace of the story, it is going great
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  • From feltonslover on June 17, 2008
    Wow! This is just such an amazing story. I am really getting into it and I am actually seeing it happen and getting very attatched to the way these charcters are acting, probably almost as much as I had when reading the real HP series by JK> I can't wait for another update. Please keep writting, you are a very believeable writer.
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  • From ANON - KendraLee on June 17, 2008
    Update faster dammit! And by that I mean the story's refreshing and tantalizing.
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  • From ilke on June 16, 2008
    K, I am totally freaking out and SOOOO worried for Draco! I love the line where he had made his decision, but, GAH! What if Ron finds out and accuses him and Harry can't defend him because he is still too sick and then Draco is fired or in jail and then Harry gets a new and ineffective healer and he has to go back to the hospital and god, I hope I'm not right. I hope they have time so the healing can happen. * deep breath * Okay, you are still doing wonderfully and I wiggle excitedly everytime I see that you've updated! Thanks!
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  • From avihenda on June 16, 2008
    sweet chapter.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on June 16, 2008
    Nice!! I loved that! More please!! this story is awesome! It keeps me guessing! That is good!
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