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Reviews for Undesirable - COMPLETE

By : slashpervert
  • From Milva on May 30, 2008
    More, more, more :D
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 30, 2008
    Poor Harry! Sooo need chapter 7!!
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  • From ANON - Graballz on May 30, 2008
    Yay, a new story from you!!! *happy dance* I really, really like this so far!! It's great! So far, my favorite scene was when Harry climbed on top of Draco in bed that first night...I love those "awwww" moments that aren't exactly orthodox! (Hope there are more of those!) Great job! I appreciate the flashbacks and Lucius and Voldy need to DIE!!! (Well, by now, they're already dead and I'm glad, but still...)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 29, 2008
    No wonder Harry's so messed up. And that was only the beginning of his torture. Ugh. I feel so much for him.
    Great chapter and you have a great writing style.
    update!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 29, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From vampirekisses on May 29, 2008
    Such great storytelling! I'm glad Harry is becoming more aware.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 29, 2008
    God im addicted to this story! Whenevr I get to the bottom Im like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Thanks for updating!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 29, 2008
    I am so loving this. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - arealdeal on May 28, 2008
    great start, as usual. this looks to be a good one, will watch for more.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on May 28, 2008
    I like this! i can't wait to see where it is going!!
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  • From Toddy on May 28, 2008
    Another two chapters - great!!!!!!!!!!!

    You have the right way of telling about withdrawn characters and how hard it is for a healer to reach them. I look forward to seeing Draco succeed.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From Caldonya on May 27, 2008
    This is a really interesting story. I was wondering if you were going to put more flashbacks in or leave it vague with just glimpses. Keep going, I find it hard to wait.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on May 26, 2008
    Every chapter gets more and more interesting. Please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 26, 2008
    Man, I can tell that this story is going to be good.
    You have a great writing style.
    update!!
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  • From avihenda on May 26, 2008
    I really liked this chapter. :-)
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