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By : slashpervert
  • From vampirekisses on May 21, 2008
    Oh, poor Harry.
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  • From ANON - jldcat on May 21, 2008
    This is exactly what I've been looking for. Very well written with just enough information to leave the reader wanting more. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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  • From alleycat88 on May 21, 2008
    Harry is so depressingly cute! And Draco is sweet. I loved this chapter! I cant wait for more!
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  • From Toddy on May 21, 2008
    A Good start. Nice to have Draco as the good one. I wonder what Draco will think of Grimmauld Place. I imagine it will be dirty and very unnapealing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Alle on May 20, 2008
    YES! a new story!
    I can't wait to see what happens! I know it will be good if you're writing it! -Alle
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  • From bananasforyou on May 20, 2008
    poor harry. i like it though!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 19, 2008
    Thanks for having a schefule of updates Ill always check for them and write reviews. Thanx for writing this sounds good.
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  • From Ellanath on May 19, 2008
    *cheers* I am a fan of your writing. Everything that you have written I have at least read 2-3 times. I was so thrilled to see a new story posted here. I could vividly see Harry in his room, rocking, chanting, mumbling. I could see Draco standing there hoping Harry would not respond, and so now I wonder how he will help heal Harry. I am not a big fan of having Harry 'suffer' with Draco as the strong character. I am curious to see how this pans out.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From CassieBlack on May 19, 2008
    Oh, i really like this story so far. I love one's where Draco is the strong one, helping vulnerable Harry.
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  • From ANON - Jay FicLover on May 19, 2008
    Mhm, is he in a permanent state of hallucination? May be Voldemort cursed him into that state before he died?

    I hope we see more soon!
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  • From Caldonya on May 19, 2008
    Wow.Interesting beginning with Draco. And the scean with Lucius and Voldomort was quite powerful. I'm happy to see you found a way for wizards to whip with the wand.
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  • From Leentjef on May 19, 2008
    wow very good beginning keep going
    and post soooooooooooooooooooon :)
    bye bye
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  • From Lunatichero on May 19, 2008
    I caught this story right after it got put up, just by chance, I was running over to catch up on a Lomonaaeren update, and I am so glad I was here! Your portrayal of insanity is rather spot on, very realistic. I am eager to see where this story goes. If you form a mailing list, I would like to be added to it, my email address is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
    Thank you,
    Lunatic with a Hero Complex
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 19, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 19, 2008
    OMG! Another story from you! And this one sounds sooooooooo good! I cant wait for more!!
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