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  • From ANON - James Carter on August 27, 2011
    Fantastic! Your work is wonderful. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - GlassSkiin on June 27, 2011
    Truly beautiful thank you for the read
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2011
    As always, LOVE your writing! This was an amazing story - very moving! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on September 26, 2010
    wow! absolutely amazing story especially about such a difficult subject but the execution was splendid. awesome job!
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  • From ANON - polka dot on March 17, 2010
    I'm not a fan of torture fics, so I skipped over the flashbacks, but I loved the happy ending.
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  • From whitewinterlily on May 24, 2009
    oh my god. what a great read. Have to say this intense of read just too good to be true. absolutely love the storyline and just adore the way you wrote it. beond words good. just magnificent.... love it. just love it. thank you so much for such beautiful creation. so far the best I have ever read. thank you!!
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  • From ANON - Michelle Wolf on January 27, 2009
    you're still a bloody git and now you owe me three boxes of tissues. it was terrific, well not the Harry torture bits but you probably know what i mean. too bad you didn't put those children in the story but thats what imaginations were made for. i also like Moonlight Offering just so you know. never thought i would like that kind of thing, but that story was great if alittle odd. *shrug*
    keep writing! ^_^
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  • From ANON - kiwiberry on November 30, 2008
    oh, forgot to finish the sentence.
    this is my first english DH story
    but ive also read about.....lets just say at least 50 DH stories in chinese
    so really, yours is absolutely amazing...
    hmm....maybe i should think of translating it when i have time in the summer.......
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  • From ANON - Kiwiberry on November 30, 2008
    Oh, My, God.
    i can't help but have to admit that this would be one of the best DH stories ive ever seen. (Given that this is the first ENGLISH DH story ive ever read...but
    the development of affection was so natural between them, and i liked the transformation of Draco from the original of him in JKR's words.
    the flashbacks...were...detailed. and a bit scary.
    my heart literally froze when i saw the part with voldemort and harry and how harry thinks that hes in love with him...
    anyways...i actually have more after thoughts, but i gtg now...maybe ill do a second review later.
    thanks for presenting such a great story :D
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  • From ANON - L_perv on November 05, 2008
    i have just now found this story i have read many of your stories before and have enjoyed them all. this one is true to your style. you seem to put your all into your stories and i appreciate all your hard work and greatly enjoy all i have read so far. you bring the characters to life thank you
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  • From ANON - Silverkitten on October 21, 2008
    This is probably my new favorite story. I actually cried at a few parts, it got really intense. it is written beautifully, and it only intensified my desire to bring voldie back from the dead so I could kill him myself. and now my inner fangirl is going to take over and say.... OMG, THAT ENDING WAS SO CUTE!!!!!! lol

    xoxo
    Silverkitten
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  • From ANON - The Queen Anne on October 10, 2008
    Well I started with one of your shorter novel length fics. Oh my god this was great! So sensitive and loving and scary and angsty and sexy and just plain wonderful. I'm such a slow reader that I'm a little intimidated by your epic size fics but I will definitely give them a shot! Your writing is wonderful!
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  • From mikuplantman on August 16, 2008
    This has been an absolute pleasure to read. Thank you and well done. xx
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  • From Amouse on August 14, 2008
    Wow. I must admit that when I first read the summary this story did not appeal to me at all. In fact I had no intention to read it. I went to your author page though (I wanted to reread the Bound Prince series, which I LOVE and am patiently awaiting the next installment for) and realized that you had written it. Like I said, I love your other stories so I thought I'd give it a try. I loved it! It is very well written, the plot moves smoothly, the story doesn't get unnecessarily caught up in different scenarios, dragging things out (that is something that bothers me in stories. Yes, we need things for the characters to overcome but please, unless it's the main problem in the story, ie, Harry's mental issues, then please move on! This is something I think you should be commended on). Again, I really liked it a lot. Are there any plans for an epilogue of some sort, so we can see what happens with those two?
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  • From Leentjef on August 04, 2008
    this was very very good storie
    i really liked it, i liked the storie line but also the way it was writen
    keep writing and post
    bye bye
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