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Reviews for Time Changes All Things: Now Complete

By : ssdawn
  • From ANON - Mistress Dark Side on June 26, 2013
    Hey again! I loved the last couple chapters. Great hob with keeping them from choosing peter as SK! And nice outfit for Hermione ;) haha I seriously think it would be hilarious to have her and Bella get in a duel, or cat fight or whatever. Anyways, I love the way you set things up, and I'm very interested to see what you come up with next! ;D Great writing!
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  • From ANON - Barbie on June 26, 2013
    Keep updating! This fic is ADDICTIVE, and absolutely amazing :) you're a GREAT writer! Keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Morgan on June 18, 2013
    Dang I read this all in a day and now I have to wait like everyone else /: oh well it'll be worth the wait! I love this Hermione/Sirius thing and I'm glad Wormtail won't be the secret keeper anymore.. Hoping that Hermione makes more positive changes for the future!!:)
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 04, 2013
    FINISH THIS STORY!!!! I MUST KNOW HOW IT ENDS!!!!!!!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on April 29, 2013
    RE: chapter 29

    'Looking at the clock it was 12:45 a.m.'
    How can it be 12:45 a.m. when Hermione looks at the clock in her room, which is after Tom left, when they had spent hours in the RoR having sex as stated in chapter 28? UGH!

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    How far along is Hermione in her current pregnancy for her to be feeling the baby already? You do know that she would be four months into it before she would be able to feel the baby, right?

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    Love the story - keep up the good work.
    :)
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on April 29, 2013
    I absolutely adore this story. I can see how it would be possible for the prophecy to be interpreted as Tom ruling the world (wizarding or otherwise) via evil means. As in I believe that the majority of people would accept that that is how it is to be read. I, on the other hand, believe that it is meant to be taken in the least assumed way... via the power of light, and that it never even crossed Tom's or anybody else's mind that it may be so.

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    RE: chapter 28

    I found a consistency error.
    Tom and Hermione were to meet the Grey Lady in the RoR at midnight - they did and then they spent several hours in there having sex, 'When Tom and Hermione finally emerged, several hours later, from the Room of Requirement, ...'
    ... they go back to the Slytherin common room where Tom fails to say something and ends up making Hermione angry. He then goes to her to talk things out and they make love again.

    With all of the sex that they have been having since midnight, how is it that when he leaves Hermione's room and goes to speak to Abraxas, it is only 1:00 AM?

    I thought that I ought to point that out to you.

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    Well done - keep up the good work.
    :)
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  • From ANON - Gamma on March 29, 2013
    I'm absolutely in love with this story! I really hope Hermione and Tom/Voldermort get to meet again soon! Please keep writing! :D
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  • From ANON - Mistress Dark Side on March 28, 2013
    Hey this story is AMAZING!!! i've read PLENTY of time travel fics, and even more hermione x tom riddle/volde, and this one is actually quite believable. Great touch with the evil dumbles btw! You have a LOT of room to work with his character, conspiracies and secrets plots and all that. If you want my honest opinion, I think you should keep the potters alive, I think it'll give this story an exceptional AU twist on things, plus maybe hermione SHOULD tell volde about the future, and why she was so scared of him and whatever else. Anyways, thats just MY suggestion, no reason to follow so don't feel you have to or anything! I'll keep reading this no matter what! :D

    Again, GREAT story so far! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on March 21, 2013
    I've read all this fic again today. All the 42 chapters. And... well, I just can't understand why haven't she gone to Voldemort as soon as she recovered from delivering. Stay with order members is too dangerous. Or does she trust Dumbledore after what he did? Never! And what about the Goddess? Has she forgot that she could lose all her power/magic if she doesn't help Voldemort? The best thing to do now is go to Volodemort and talk with him about the prophecy, about what is gonna happen to him if he tries to kill Harry. She is falling miserably at her mission. And I dont understand why the Goddess haven't interfered when she was send thru time. Sorry about the grammar, I'm not an english speaker. By the way, wonderful fic. Kisses.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2013
    Another great chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Gamma on March 16, 2013
    I have absolutely loved this story.. I REALLY hope you finish it and also I hope Hermione and Lord Voldemort can still be together with Thomas! Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2013
    I'm really enjoying this story. I started it yesterday and have not been able to put it down. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please pst another chapter soon!!!
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  • From Love_Snape on August 26, 2012
    I read all the chapters before review and you have an extremely well written story with a plot and climax. I love how you portrayed all of your characters. I truely hope that you update again and soon. Its one hell of an amazing story
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  • From ANON - Gabby0515 on August 13, 2012
    I hadn't came back to this story since the chapter that they were starting out in the forest at. This is getting amazing! I hope Hermione goes back to Tom. As odd as that sounds lol. They belong together in this story! I hope you can update again soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Grace on August 10, 2012
    I've just read the entire story. It's amazing, please update soon! I love Tom!
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