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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Man Who Lived

By : davehjonez
  • From tamarack1pines on June 10, 2008
    This is an Amazing yarn you have weaved here! I COULDN'T stop reading it! ^-^ I DO hope you will continue! Cause this is TOO good to gather dust! ^^


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  • From Leentjef on June 05, 2008
    VERY VERY GOOD STORY
    I REALY LIKED IT KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 02, 2008
    Awwww...that was so sweet. More please...I think it would be funny to see Narcissa, Draco, or Lucius' reaction when they find Severus and Harry in bed together. More please...this is really good so far and i can't wait for the next chapter to be updated.
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  • From katecooley on June 02, 2008
    ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! Very nice. Smutty AND sweet! Two great tastes...

    LOL

    This is really very good. I like how Harry's having issues with this. Though not very many. XD
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  • From dominique1 on June 02, 2008
    sorry to hear about that i hope your okay a may god keep you safe love the chapter thank you
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  • From DarkGothic on June 02, 2008
    I'm sorry for your loss my condolences

    On another note, that was a nice chapter. I was very well written. I hope Harry doesn't get in trouble with the weasley's
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  • From voldemortsgrl on June 01, 2008
    NOOO!!!!!! more please...
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  • From tigra9969 on May 23, 2008
    Hello again! Liked the latest update by the way. Anyway in regards to the next chapter, you could always go with the classic Harry examining his feelings and a certain no-it-all helping everything along. Ummm...there is also the option of Harry and Snapples (love the nickname by the way) getting to know one another and add in a little smut to spice it up. That's all my ideas, I'm trying to write my own fic right now so the brain isn't exactly oiled up yet.
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  • From katecooley on May 23, 2008
    Awww! *sniff*

    What next? oooh. Hmm. I guess it would depend on how long you want this to go on. Harry could do with some "figuring out" time, since he's so mixed up, I'd venture.

    And why when I review do I always sound like Waffle from Catscratch? "SPLEE! SMUT FOR ME!" LOL
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  • From dominique1 on May 23, 2008
    i like what you've written so far i think that sev should eat and harry she have some alone time like the night and realize that he loves sev to but i think they should move in together like yesterday so they can work on their bond
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  • From DarkGothic on May 23, 2008
    gah i simply love your story, it's awesome though a part of me thought harry would confess to sev that he almost died without him (literaly) ooo oo maybe in the next chap you could put lemon! and confrontations harry did afterall bardge into the manor plus he abandoned the weasley's
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  • From Jilliane on May 23, 2008


    Oh, darn......I really hate to have to say this, but.......I liked this story and was really enjoying it, right down to the very last line of Chapter 5....and then came your author's note. I'm sorry, and don't take this as a flame, it's not meant to be, but I have to say, I was terribly disappointed that you didn't have an ending to the story. An ending of your own. You shouldn't have posted the story if you didn't have an ending, and I think it's unfair of you to expect your readers to come up with ideas for you. At the very least, you should have left it as a WIP until you came up with an ending of your own design, rather than relying on your readers to supply one for you. Really, this story had such promise, it had a good start, and except for a few misspellings and typos, it was well written. Perhaps you should have warned us you didn't have a conclusion, although I would think you probably wouldn't have gotten very many hits if you had. Sadly, all I can say now is.....very disappointing.

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  • From Jilliane on May 23, 2008

    Awesome! I just found this story and read the first four chapters all in one go, and was wishing there were more! Lo and behold, wish granted, you updated while I was reading! Yay! This is my kind of story, my favourite pairing (if only Hermione were absent, but oh well...)and I love your premise of Harry and Severus being Bonded. It's my favourite reason for them to be together. On to Chapter 5...yay!
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  • From soloflamelady on May 22, 2008
    this is just to adorable I like the bond update soon
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  • From katecooley on May 21, 2008
    OOh, lovely smut for MEEE!

    And I'm laughing my ass off at 'Sir Shag-a-lot'. Not to mention Ron's version of what's going to happen when Harry and Snape get in the same room together. LOL!!!

    Very good. I like. More please!
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