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Reviews for Make a Wish

By : NormanCharles
  • From GeminiSoul on October 26, 2008
    All I gotta say is Dayum! Harry is one lucky orphan. To be shagging 21 different ladies..wow.
    Can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From Merlinius on October 26, 2008
    Do you have a visual reference for young Minerva? Hot chapter, not too complex but not a sloppy PWP
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  • From on October 26, 2008
    Chapter 4, another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and on how you work Myrtle into the story, I think you're the only one that I know of that do Harry/Myrtle story and for that I thank you for doing this.

    I like that Harry is going to get a coven of woman, lucky bastard.
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on October 26, 2008
    Ah, good, delicious, lemony, smut. Ya can't beat that. Of course that means there will be more plot developments next chapter. This Mewtwo will be waiting on the next chapter.
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  • From Vilkath on October 26, 2008
    This story is way better then most HP sex based fanfiction I have read. The story has a plot, more then most stories can claim and it raises a lot of intersting idea's like Harry's cloak giving a ghost body. The bellatrix and Narcissa body double idea isn't to bad either, even if this author wasn't the first to use it. The idea of rejuvinations, at the cost of the persons magic is a great idea to, way better then the all to common youth potions lot of fics use.

    Sex scenes are both varied in location and what hte characters do, the actual act of sex maybe a little bland but at least it is not 'stick it in and jiggle it around' instant satisfaction like a lot of fics do.

    In the end while the story isn't perfect I can't wait for the next chapter. So very few adult HP fics out there of any quality that are not yaoi.

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  • From on October 25, 2008
    I really love this story!

    Another great chapter!
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on October 22, 2008
    OH! Love it
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  • From vannilla on October 21, 2008
    YAY
    IM SOOOO GLAD THE NEXT CHAPTER IS HERE!!!!!!!


    so draco and narcissa are at snapes house,well their safe.
    draco is such a lil prat,he would take that path lol

    wow...thats a different version of snow white,although i must agree with harry,she went through labor but woke up from breast feeding??!!!
    lol
    awww he was her first kiss
    the sex between him and the sisters was hot!!!!
    yay their awake
    hahaha voldys impotent ,i guess resurrection has its drawbacks
    narcissa's little bit at the end was very good

    write more please,this story is way too good!!!!!
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  • From on October 19, 2008
    Another great chapter and I always knew there was a better version of the snow white story!
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on October 19, 2008
    Let's see, which choice did he make...,number 2 of course. That's simple enough.

    Hmmm, the older versions of the sisters can feel what their younger selves feel while coupling with Harry.

    Two more witches added to the coven, and Snape's turning against Sir Snakeface.

    This Mewtwo will be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From KaelHyun on October 18, 2008
    Vary interesting Harry is distracting the DE by keeping one of there Lieutenants(sp) busy and stopping Narcassesa(sp) from helping the hell spawn that is Draco Malfoy
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  • From Merlinius on October 18, 2008
    A little confused Are the clones still linked to the original women, and is Harry gonna break it eventually? Great stuff none the less.
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  • From Yamizenchou on October 18, 2008
    I imagine it would be very confusing for someone to be subjected to a chain of orgasms for seemingly no reason at all. Well done.
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on October 16, 2008
    Ah, another chapter, and yet the plot thickens. Who are the real Black sisters? And how will the pain in the asp react losing his precious Bella? This Mewtwo shall be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From on October 16, 2008
    An absolutely AWESOME story thus far. The thing about the older Bellatrix and Narcissa being homonculi is a good thing, though homunculi are NOT soulless... they have a soul, but it is but a silver of the one in the real person's body in most cases, according to the old religions.
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