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By : NormanCharles

From KaelHyun on October 15, 2008
Vary good story I realy cant wate to read more
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
NOOOO!!!!
WHY WHY LEAVE IT HERE?!!
I CURSE CLIFF HANGERS!!!!
GRRRRRRR
**sighs**
alas i digress the snow white bit was nice
aww Helena is pregnant!!!
why have we not heard from myrtle?
aww they both felt it!!!
i think they are the copies,the grown women i mean
bell is crazy
awww young Bell and Cissy are so beautiful
im still upset you ended it here do email me when you update!!!!!!!

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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
OH MY LORD!!!
narcissa and bellatrix??
wow
thats definetly...wow
umm..oh
sex scenes as always are marvelous!!!!!!!!
um righ ima keep reading now!
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
i love the steamy sex with helena
and got a good laugh at her mothers teachings
severus' way of informing the class was spectacular
i like how he and Harry came together
the bit with baxtor and the runes was once again expertly placed and enthralling
who are the girls?
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!
ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS**TEARS***
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
i still wish parsel tounge existed!!
oh no!!!
voldemorts a crack head!!!!
i hope snape survives!!
yay narcissa and Draco escape...hopefully
that house is creepy as hell
and what is in those sarcophagi???
people?
god TWO Harry's are you kidding me?!
oh what i wouldn't give to be a character in this story!!!!!!!
bath tub was hot
breakfast was fun!!!
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
ive known that bit about mr.capone for some time now
my father attended a prep school in tijuana mexico which used to be a casino and was laden with underground tunnels,that mr.capone was known to do "buisness" through...ironic no?
his fate that is
mightier than the wand indeed
put that in yout juice box and suck on it voldemort!!!!
muahahahaha
anyways
severus is so sweet ,the love he feels for lily is so touching
yay hes gonna help harry
awwwwwwww theyre married!!!!!!!!!
that ceremony was amazing
his mom was a goddess?!!!
patil is a very naughty and well taught girl!!!
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
yay helena lives!!
the trial was perfect
lucius' reaction had me laughing out loud!!
the percy bit did too
the time turner was placed perfectly just as every other thing in this story!!!!
awwwww poor ginny is so jealous
lol

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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
better and better
sex scenes are nothing short of tantalizing
myrtle being preggers is oh so amazing!!
and so sweet
haha harry's speech about his part in it and his pleasure was halarious!!!!!
oh i do hope lady helena pulls through
nice ending by the way
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
omg
cliff hanger again
you naughty naught author!!!!!
your chapter seem to get more and more interesting as this story continues!!!!
ok duel was awesome
harry revealing himself wizardgamot rocked
the scene at the infirmary so touching
how astarte returned voldy's pain to him was amazing
and the end is omg ....ok ive wasted enough time BACK TO THE STORY!!!!!!!
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
wow so much happend
the chat
the sacking of umbrige and fudge
the slytherin sacking(my fave)
that was so hot the way he came in to the dungeons and demanded all attention!!!!!!!!
hahahaa take that snape and suck on it!
oh minervas wardrobe!!
millcents firt time!
so sweet!
ok next chapter now!!
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From vannilla on October 14, 2008
i LOVE THIS CHAPTER
the sex is steamy
and if thats not a cliff hanger i dont know what is!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From vannilla on October 13, 2008
lol
lol
that joke was truly delish!!!!!!!
back to the chapter i liked the coven ceremony
i love the dream
again!!!!details were amazing!!!!!!!!
you know i cant stop thinking about that parsel tounge!!!
too bad guys cant do that eh?
haha
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From vannilla on October 13, 2008
wow minerva is going through alot!!!!!
this will indeed be interesting,not that it all ready is not;)
i again will congratulate you on your impressive way of placing information
its so smooth and just flows directly into the page truly effortless!!!!
millcent was a surprize but i like it!!!!!
aww harry is so sweet
so caring
so powerful
i love the jokes about the way he will react
it so great they know him so well
this is all very canon by the way!!!!!!!!
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From vannilla on October 13, 2008
i was so engrossed by your story i forgot to review each chapter as i read along
i really love this!!!:D
its sooo well written so smart
and funny
and so so sexy!!!!
i love the plot
and how you go about explaining everything
the scenes seem to flow together
gosh ok i must read on!!!!!
chapter 8 here i come!!!
oh myrtle becoming corporal was genius
i like the deathly hallows reference
all the other details are placed in spectacularly!!!!
harry becoming lord
the coven
the little attention to detail you place
in the girls,the rooms,the ghosts,the history!!!!!
god its all so perfect!!!
ok im once again getting carried away
oh love the silk hermione wears her first time truly awe inspiring!!!!
oh the goddess that comes from the mirror realm....amazing!!!!
ok ok i cannot wait any longer
on to chapter 8!!!

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From 12snowman on October 13, 2008
Good work.
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