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Reviews for Make a Wish

By : NormanCharles
  • From DarQuing on September 07, 2008
    I'm liking the story so far. So far there's a reason for almost everything you've talked about, and what doesn't appear to have a reason will likely be explained at a later date. :)

    I do think there should be a spanking scene with Harry and Minerva, though. Just to remind him that she's still his professor. ;)
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  • From voraciousreader on September 06, 2008
    Intersting. I like the 'phasing' idea, much more convenient than Apparition. I also like the fact that the erotica is part of the story rather than a distraction; I love a good plot!
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  • From schmanski1 on September 01, 2008
    I really like your story so far. It is well written, imaginative,and hot. Is there a way to recieve updates when this story is updated? Im new here, I actually signed up so that I could review this story.
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  • From on August 30, 2008
    Well, Here goes my two cents worth.

    I love that Harry and Myrtle are having a baby!!!!!!!
    Another great chapter and I can not wait for more.
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  • From on August 25, 2008
    I just love this story!!!

    what can I say but great work!
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on August 23, 2008
    Astarte looked at the tired, frustrated old man and sighed.
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  • From on August 16, 2008
    What can I say I just love this story!!!!!!!!!

    this is another great chapter and it has me wanting more!!!!!!
    update soon.
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  • From defiant1981 on August 10, 2008
    love it definetly the most believable minerva/harry i have read

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  • From ladydeathfaerie on August 09, 2008
    hmmm. very interesting chapter. i love that
    McGonagall has gotten the better of Umbitch. and
    with Rita Skeeter's help, no less. wonderful!

    why do i get the feeling you've got a thing for
    red-heads?

    excellent work! keep it up!

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From on August 09, 2008
    I JUST LOVE THIS FIC AND WOULD LIKE UPDATES ON IT AT POOHNATION74@YAHOO.COM.

    I LOVE HOW YOU GAVE HARRY, SO MANY WOMEN WHO LOVE HIM AND HE DIDN'T HAVE TO BE WITH DURSLEYS, AND YOU GAVE WOMEN WHO ARE STRONG AND SMART TO HELP HIM KILL VOLDIE!!!!!!
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  • From DarQuing on August 02, 2008
    This is turning out to be very hot with a pretty good plot. The second prophecy idea is kind of cliche, but that's because it works. :)

    Keep up the good work and post again soon! :)
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  • From on August 02, 2008
    Like the story waiting for more keep up the good work


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  • From ladydeathfaerie on July 25, 2008
    i got quite the chuckle out of you A/Ns.

    and i enjoyed the chapter, too. as well as the
    last one. i figured i should maybe wait and see
    if anyone else would leave you a review.

    *sighs*

    anyhow, always looking forward to the next part.

    has anyone every told you you're a dirty older man?
    *grins*
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  • From pfeil on July 11, 2008
    Little tiny goddess? Cool.
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  • From ladydeathfaerie on July 11, 2008
    another fine chapter. it was lovely to wake up to this.

    i love how the goblin got screwed. when will they learn
    that one shouldn't mess with women?

    as always, looking forward to more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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