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Reviews for A Dark Scenario

By : Ms_Figg
  • From lemonade8 on January 21, 2010
    lol, I'm a teacher of young children. Even with them, you have to own your authority. When you command, it has to be said with the full belief that your instructions will be followed. You have to believe, even in a room full of chaos and experience that tells you otherwise. They will plow you under otherwise. Hermione has certainly taken this and expanded on it. I'm glad I didn't have her for an instructor.
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  • From ANON - Mia on January 21, 2010
    My goodness, I feel like cackling with glee. That was traumatisingly beautiful. I can see her getting in some trouble for the imperio. Kind of. After all, these are children who had to deal with Death Eaters in their school last year. (Unless that wasn't the case in your fic.)A parent could argue that their children have the right to feel safe in the presence of their teachers. If this weren't fanfic, I'd agree. But since it is, I'd love to see Hermione reeming anyone who took her to task for that.
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  • From ANON - Mamutvert on January 21, 2010
    It's just... "
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  • From wickedisthereader on January 21, 2010
    Thank you! I'm so happy you updated as I really like this story. I love how you made Hermione assert herself with the students. It adds another dimension to the story as it shows that going back to Hogwarts was not easy for Hermione either. Can't wait for another update.
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  • From AngeliqueML on January 21, 2010
    Chapter 12 is so true. I'm a college professor who is on the younger side. About a tenth of my students are even older than me. Sometimes you really need to them to fear you. My largest lecture is 115 students. If you don't have control your sunk.
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  • From sevsheart on January 21, 2010
    As always, you never fail to please
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  • From ANON - ismene5 on January 21, 2010
    Its a good chapter. I like them quarelling.
    You are such a wonderful writer.Hope your muse will soon come
    back and you can enjoy the writing process again.
    Thank you so much!
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  • From Mmoirai on January 20, 2010
    Ch.11 - Well I thought it was just right. Severus teaming with anger and guilt. Trying to find some sense of "normalcy", even if it is darkness and lonliness that he is acustomed to.

    I would very much like to see more on his motives for saving her, offering her the option that he did. Would he have done the same for any other girl? Why, or why not? Is that part of what is eating at him? Also, what of Hermione? She obviously sees him as her savior and of course I'm in this genre because I want the two to "get together". How does Hermione feel about Sev's pity party? She isn't in love with him yet, and there is no lust there yet. I would almost see some kind of further tragedy occurring that throws the two together, or a projet , or there would have to be strong feelings of jelousy perhaps that awakens feelings that have previously been unrealized. What happens once term begins? How does he conduct himself as an istructor? Are there any new teachers? Perhaps female?

    Anyway...I am waaaayyyy too hooked on this story and your writing style. I check this silly site every few hours looking for updates. I hope your muse has a cup of Earl Grey and perks up soon.
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  • From apkblack on January 20, 2010
    For a chapter that you wrote "museless," it's pretty damned good. As a matter of fact, it was great. And for me was the most satisfying chapter of the story so far.

    So maybe your muse is just hiding under a disillusionment cloak of its own and playing hard-to-get or some such.

    :-)
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on January 20, 2010
    Sorry to hear the muse is AWOL. Thanks for updating anyway; it's very much appreciated! I hope you find a good way to get these two together.
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  • From ANON - Trish on January 20, 2010
    This was as complicated and raw as I would expect from a confrontation of this kind. I can't wait to see how you resolve it. Although, given Severus' temperment, it will probably take a death, a pregnancy, or the rise of some evil to drag him out of his dungeon. **giggle**
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  • From ANON - Kitty on January 20, 2010
    Even museless, it was well-written and keeps us wondering how they'll get together. I am most interested to see who pursues who. If Hermione won't take no for an answer or if Snape decides to reclaim his life and happiness, or maybe both or maybe neither. Either way, I can't wait :)
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  • From slygriff21 on January 19, 2010
    Wow! Okay, I'm hooked on this one. Like all your stories. lol. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    your fan,
    tiffany
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  • From AngeliqueML on January 15, 2010
    Oh please write soon the cliff is keeping me on edge.
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 14, 2010
    I like it. Please update soon.

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