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By : WingsofaDream
  • From ANON - qwerty on March 28, 2009
    Great chapter. I'm glad that cliffhanger was resolved. And we got to see another, more tender side of Fenrir. Nice to see that he's not completely one-dimensional.
    Great job! Keep going!
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  • From Elphaba on March 28, 2009
    Excellent chapter! (Trying to catch up...)
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  • From Rokkis on March 25, 2009
    I actually hope that Harry never gets a working relationship with Black. He really isn't a good role model for Harry, and he wasn't in Cannon either. Despite being innocent he still spent over a decade in the prison and was not given any psychological help afterwards. Not to mention he keeps calling Harry, James in cannon. Feel free to let Harry choose Snape over sirius! Would suit the black bastard right:D

    Cheers!
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  • From reesecravenfic on March 20, 2009
    As much as I love this story, one thing you consistently do is driving me nuts. It's Lycanthropy. Not Lycanthopsy. No 's'. Thanks. :D
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  • From kati on March 19, 2009
    Ah, but I can't stand reading PWP, because then you don't care about Harry, the relation ship doesn't mean anything and I can't bring myself to be bothered reading them; so you stick to the good stuff, 'kay? AWESOME chapter by the way. That was totally unexpected! What has Harry done? Did he suck the Dark Mark right outta Severus's arm? I know he's gonna be okay, he's gotta be okay, he's the protaganist! (deep breaths, deep, calming breaths) Anyhoo, thank you for the Draco Development (yes, such things have titles). It was very cute. They are cute, aren't they? Little sweey boys... *sigh* but where's our big manly Fenny, eh? I miss him already... He will be sooooooo pissed when he comes back to find his mate coughing up blood. So pissed. (I am obviously looking forward to that. lol)

    Great chapter!

    ~Kati-chan
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  • From Kuromei on March 15, 2009
    O_________O WTF!?!?!?!? DDDX How did Harry do that? I know this is a Dream story, but you've gone and made me worry, anyway. T__T

    As for the tensions between Sirius, Remus and Fenrir... They've got themselves a nice little loveless triangle, don't they? X3 Oh, wait, I forgot Severus... A loveless square, then. ^____^;; The previous is sleepy geometry, at it's best. XP

    Anyhoo, I'd normally writhe and moan in cliffhanger-induced agony until the next update, but I don't think my boss would appreciate me missing work like that. X3 *hugz ya*
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on March 15, 2009
    Oh, now that's just wrong! I know it's a reaction to taking the magic of the Dark Mark into him when he... kissed? sucked? inhaled? it from Severus' arm, but now he's coughing up congealed, black blood? Wow. That IS a twist I NEVER saw coming. And do you know how hard it is for me to be surprised like that? My friends call me to tell me their big news... and I already know it because I'm expecting it happen. Wow. I'm... I'm blown away. I'm so excited to see where this goes! Sirius is a jerk, but he's not hopeless. He sees that he's hurting his godson and he feels guilty for that, but that's what he's always done so he just can't stop doing it cold turkey. It's normal for him. And after twelve years in Azkaban, he needs normalcy. Severus... I want to know what happened with Voldemort. Was he found out as a spy, or was it just a bad day for Voldemort? Fenrir needs to come back. Hogwarts is in an uproar and Harry is hurt now. Or something. Dumbledore is getting more annoying by the minute. He's using everyone, and waits until the last second to step in for whatever reason. Remus... I love him. He's a good person, trying to be human and repress his werewolf, but he still has a backbone every now and then. You've got their characters perfectly written. I almost can't wait two weeks to find out what's happening to Harry! ~dpa06~
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  • From GrouchyDaughter on March 14, 2009
    Ooh! I'm so excited to see where this ends up going! :D
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  • From toads70 on March 14, 2009
    that chapter was so good! i love that sev doesn't have the darkmark anymore. i was wondering if fenrir bit harry, could he turn him into a complete werewolf? and sev should be one too and then they could start their own pack :D lol just an idea. i hope nothing is wrong with harry now :(
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  • From vaire on March 14, 2009
    That was such an evil way to end the chapter. A cliff-hanger like that and so far between updates. Im going to spend the next two weeks thinking about it non-stop when i should be doing uni work. I can't wait to see Fenrir's reaction when he gets back. Gone for three days and comes back to find harry having coughed up congealed blood. Great chapter.
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  • From MiriuOniaya on March 13, 2009
    I'm too giddy/sleepy/flaily to make a very long, babbly AND coherent review, so I shall be brief ; I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS FIC, LIKE, SO SO SO MUCH. You are amazing and I love you to death for writing it. I am so horribly hooked on this fic now, addicted and loving it. I love how you write, your lemons are delicious, I love how you've portrayed Greyback and Harry, and the whole storyline/plot, how it follows the books, but on a totally different level & in a totally different way. I love how Dumbledore and the others seem like bad jerks who are trying to seperate Harry and Fen and make them do as they want. I totally love Harry being so faithful to his Alpha and Fen having Alphaness/affectionate/lovey/protectiveness towards Harry. And the way you've brought Ron, Draco, Sirius, Snape and Remus into it, with their different reactions and opinions and they way they think and act, different, but so awesome. I am all for Harry & Fen and them being happy werewolves and not allowing the aurors and Dumbledore to change them or control their lives. This is such an awesome fic, I love you and it! Please please continue to update.
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  • From Rokkis on March 03, 2009
    Fenrir really has a good point. And what is all this rubbish about deciding what's best for Harry. None of them knows what he's lived through. None of the others can really truly understand, and Remus is the only one he even comes close! Hope Fenrir puts Albus in his place soon 'cause frankly this is getting annoying!

    Cheers!
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  • From kati on March 03, 2009
    Awwww! Poor Sirius! I can completely understand Harry's reaction, but it seems so cruel to lovely Sirius whose had all this bad luck to get a little more doled out to him. Poor baby. *sniffle* I really liked this chapter, it had a really good pace and all the little scenes worked very well. I'm sure I've said this before, but I'm very excited to see more of Draco and his little crush on Harry!
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  • From Elphaba on March 03, 2009
    Great Chapter! Would write more internet up and down
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  • From toads70 on March 03, 2009
    awesome chapter as usual! i don't think you made sirius to unstable or emotional..i mean look where he was for 12 years! i think you wrote him really well! and i'm glad to hear that harry won't leave fenrir :D
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