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By : WingsofaDream
  • From Coobs on January 17, 2009
    love it :P update soon!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 16, 2009
    You have NO IDEA how badly I needed this chapter. I've had a week from hell, and this just makes everything a little bit better.

    Love that they're in the Forest again, free to be wolves. Well, werewolves anyways. Love the idea of Severus taking Harry out for his birthday even if I was a little worried about the full moon thing. It turned out okay though. At least it wasn't April... I loved the Sweeney Todd play (and I'd love to see the actual play in real life); the movie was excellent and I loved the references to the actors/characters. It made me laugh. When my friends I went to go see it in theatres, we were almost kicked out because one of my friends yelled out "It's Snape!" when we first saw him, and I said it was Bellatrix when I first saw her, and another friend laughed when she heard/saw Pettigrew. We referred to them as Snape/Bellatrix/Pettigrew rather than Judge Turpin/Mrs. Lovett/whatever his name was. It was great. I was a little scared about the sharing beds part. I was sure Fenrir would smell Severus on Harry and kill him. He came close the last time, when Severus magically prepared Harry for Fenrir in April. But I still liked it. I understand it, and I got the comforting aspect of it completely. The shoes thing made me laugh. Remus! My God, Remus scared me at first. I thought there was a rogue werewolf or someone on Voldemort's side that had tracked them down. But it was just Remus. I want to see where this goes. And Sirius! Severus has already started on the "Sirius-is-innocent!" thing. I can't wait to see where this goes... Keep it up; you're amazing.

    I just need to keep my mind open. That's why I'm willing to read Harry/Harry, even though I'd rather you wrote another Fenrir/Harry. I don't do fem-slash though. I just can't. If it's simple (like just the relationship aspects) but not detailed sex scenes, that's okay. I can handle that. Same goes for Severus/Hermione. I can handle it in passing, but not in detail. ~dpa06~
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  • From Kuromei on January 07, 2009
    *giggle* Bye-bye, Barty! XD Have a nice trip back to Azkaban! *evil smile*

    Moving on, I'm glad the snake from the previous chapter is okay. ^////^ And, though I'm still worried about what'll happen in the future of the story, I'll be staying tuned for as long as it takes. =3 Just don't be surprised if I don't/can't review every chapter. I work a lot. XP *waits for the next chapter*
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  • From toads70 on January 03, 2009
    awesome chapter :) when the bludger hit harry i winced from the pain i'm sure he felt :P and then hitting his head again twice after that ouch! can't wait for the next chapter :D hope your new years was good!
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  • From kati on January 03, 2009
    A Harry/Harry? Very interesting! It would be nice to see another F/H from such a talented author, but I have to admit to being very curious about how such a pairing would work. Poor Harry! He's always getting into trouble! And I don't bash Drarry, I just find that there are so many people who write it that it is difficult to sift through the crap to find the good stuff. I'm gonna go and have a look at your stuff though, from this I'm sure it'll be great! I liked how Fenrir licked Harry's wound clean; it was so sweet.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 03, 2009
    LOLz! Most probably. And please, take the challenge if that's what the final vote is int he end. I never thought I'd like Lucius/Harry, and that's one of my favourite pairings. Or BDSM or other squicks. I must say, someone has to broaden my horizons, or I'll never read anything beyond what I like right now. Of course, it was one friend who got me into fanfiction and another who got me into slash fanfiction, so write what you will. I'll read anything of yours at this point in HP Fandom.

    This chapter was brill! I loved- no, I actually hated that 'Moody' tried to kidnap Harry. I know it was Barty Crouch Jr., but I still wanted to kill the bastard. And Fenrir! How dare he leave Harry unattended?! I can understand, but still! Ron getting Snape was interesting, and Snape getting Fenrir to not kill Crouch was pretty good too. I loved the reactions to the Aurors, both Harry's and Fenrir's. And I loved Fenrir cleaning Harry's head wound. I mean, that's just natural. I LOVE that they're going back to the Forest for the summer. Much more preferable to the castle, I think. *sigh* It's amazing, your writing. Keep it up. I love this fic! ~dpa06~
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  • From Rokkis on January 03, 2009
    Good chapter! Am sooo glad that they finally caught Moody. Must admit that it's fun to see Fenrir's reputation becoming less fierce:D

    Cheers! And a Happy New Year!
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  • From xRishax on January 02, 2009
    please please please please please please put up a new chapter...maybe as many chapters as I have 'please's in this review....which would be seven if you took the time to count them all =]
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on January 01, 2009
    Yeah! I love Severus! I'd hug him and kiss him, but he'd probably hex me. So I put together this little goodie basket for thanks instead: potions ingredients, vials, shrunken cauldrons, stirring rods, special gloves and masks, hard-to-find things, etc. Do you think he'll like it? Goddess, to let Harry go to Fenrir like that... Thank goodness he went to check on him, yeah? And prepared him! It's a great thing he thought about that too. Because Fenrir would have literally torn him to pieces. And Fenrir's reaction a day or so later was completely expected, but I still loved it. I'm not sure of I would have questioned Severus; I might have just killed him. Moody is interesting. I love the way you're tying things together, and yet I'm still not completely sure where you're going with it all! I love it! The ball that was flying at him, a bludger I'm assuming?, was awesome. I loved that Harry stopped it. I hated that Severus distracted him enough to cancel the shield/freezing spell. I'm excited to see what happens now. I mean, will Fenrir blame Severus? Will Severus not tell Fenrir right away? Will they realize he has magic now and make him attend Hogwarts like a regular student? Or will there be tutors? I'm so excited!!!

    Also, I vote for another Harry/Fenrir. I can't usually stand a character pair with themselves. I liked one Severus/Harry/Severus I read once, but it's rare for me to enjoy anything like that. So, I vot for another FG/HP. ~dpa06~
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  • From on December 30, 2008
    Fenrir/Harry
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  • From Kuromei on December 29, 2008
    No freaking way! I was right? Owo;;; *wants to faint* That almost never happens when I guess something about someone else's story. X3

    Anyway, it's sweet how Severus helped out Harry. ^w^ And Fenrir, though he'd probably never think of it that way. X3 And "Mad Eye's" creepiness has gone up several notches, at least. I hope the snake made it out okay. X3

    I'd think of more to say, or even give you some constructive criticism if I was any good at doing either. XP But I can say that I look forawrd to the next chapter. ^w^
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  • From dannylover934 on December 23, 2008
    I would love to see another Harry/Fenrir story as i don't think there are enough in this world. I enjoy your writing very much and can't wait to read the next part.
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  • From Guderian on December 22, 2008
    I would like to see your take on Harry/Harry. You write well and I believe you could easily write that plot.
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  • From Rockme221 on December 21, 2008
    This is still (I've been reading it since it started) my favorite story of all time. I love this story so much and I hope you continue to write and update. 10/10!!!
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  • From toads70 on December 21, 2008
    awesome chapter! nice cliffie, can't wait to see what happens!
    i've never read a Harry/Harry fic before, could be interesting! though Harry/Fenrir is my fav :D
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