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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : WingsofaDream
  • From Kuromei on December 19, 2008
    I've been reading this story for a while now, but just now had the time to leave a review. XP Anyway, I'm liking it, though I've just started trying to analyze the Snape/Harry thing. Is it that Snape sees Harry as the child he never had with Lily? Or is Harry the last remaining bit of Lily that he can love, even if not romatically?

    I've never been good at looking too deep into things, so forgive me if I'm completely missing the point. XP But what I do understand is that he (Snape) cares for Harry, and will protect him as much as Fenrir will allow. =3

    Anyway, great story, and I look forward to the next chapter. ^w^
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  • From kati on December 18, 2008
    This chapter was really yummy! *blush* I really like both Severus and Draco in this fic; and, I am loath to admit this mind you, I kinda want Draco and Harry to kiss or something... Oh dear, I really shouldn't admit that (as a vehement Drarry-basher and FH worshipper), but he's just so cute and lovely in this.
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  • From sanda on December 16, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Rockme221 on December 09, 2008
    i love this story so much! Its gotta be one of my favorites. Keep updating!
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  • From CanadianGinger on December 07, 2008
    Great chapter.
    I think you cleared quite a bit up in terms of Harry/Severus.
    Soooo, you're not a failure as an author. ;)
    Update soon.
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  • From Febreezer on December 07, 2008
    This story is so amazing! I love the relationship Harry and Snape have! You're such a great writer!
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  • From jddammann on December 07, 2008
    I'm still enjoying the story very much!!!

    I guess their are sexual overtones to Harry and Severus, at least I feel them, but that doesn't mean that they are overt, or that anything would ever happen. Maybe its Harry finding the qualities in Snape that he loves in Fenrir, but without the problems. Maybe its Harry's innocence about straddlling another man's lap and kissing him. Who knows, maybe its just that we are all Severus, Harry, and Fenrir fans and its hard to read about either of the men with Harry and not think something is going on. :-)

    No matter what anyone is thinking about the relationship I trust you to tell your story as you dreamed it and I know I will enjoy it immensely!!!!!!!
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  • From toads70 on December 06, 2008
    i really do love this story, can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From kawaiiyashie on December 06, 2008
    i'm glad that you got this posted i'm trying to read all my updates before i do my school work hehe. well i'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From dolphindreamer on December 06, 2008
    That was a lovely long chapter, loved the scenes with harry and Snape could just imagine him hiding cutely behind his professor. Love this story, keep it up!
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  • From kati on December 03, 2008
    This is really good! I binged on it for two days, and when I got to the end of chapter 14 I thought my heart might break. XD When you say that Harry wants Snape's and his relationship to become "more", do you mean sexually? Because I thought I spotted some shyness on Snape's part; does he "like" Harry? :O I love how sweet Fenrir is being. I can't believe you're so well organised! I wish I was half as good as you... T_T Great stuff!
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  • From Darkless on November 27, 2008
    Well, I am incredibly impressed with the overall impact of this story. You've taken an AU approach with bits of canon, like a major 'what if' plotline, the characters are represented very credibly, excelent diologue and 'thought' processes, no gaping holes in the information given, and you even have minimal typos and a good grasp of diction.

    I'm glad you aren't outright bashing anyone, I'm intrigued with where the story is going, and thrilled that you are chapters ahead and seemed determined to complete the story. I think thats a mistake many amateur authors make; starting a story, often a with an excellent start because they got an idea in their heads, then never finishing it because they never had an ending to begin with. If you start with an ending, all you have to do is fill in the blanks between to get the story there.

    Smashing job and I look forward to the next chapter. Glad I found this fic.
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  • From kawaiiyashie on November 24, 2008
    yes kill him and make us happy. well i loved the chapter it was so sweet and adorable well i can't wait for the next one. don't take too long in updating it!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on November 23, 2008
    Ah, not even a little hint? Just a little one? Meh, why am I even bothering? You ain't gonna tell me anything. And I respect you for that. Authors who give in and tell people everything are weak. I love how you set everything up and put little details here and there that mean little at the time, but a LOT later on. Like the dancing with Draco thing. I think that'll mean something later on. I loved the idea of potions lessons. It would have brought Severus and Harry closer together, and brought Harry more into the Wizarding world. But not so much as DADA or Charms or Transfiguration. I mean, even CoMC wouldn't be as much of an intrusion in my opinion. But now? I LOVE the idea of music lessons. It just seems to hypnotize Harry, it entrances him. I love the idea of Harry being raised by werewolves and being almost half-wolf himself, learning about music from someone as "refined" and "educated" as Severus. Not being sarcastic, just stressing how self-important Severus usually makes himself out to be. I mean, he made Harry swear he'd tell Fenrir it was his (Harry's) idea and all that stuff. I'm just excited for what comes next, especially with the music and Draco. ~dpa06~
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  • From TheSiner on November 23, 2008

    Was a nice chapter. I am wondering what is with Snape blushing, but not making any guesses in hope that you might surprise me. Nevertheless, I am afraid that somewhat doting, adorably submissive Harry is turning Sev on a bit too much.
    I would like to see more of Draco, but leaving it completely up to you.
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