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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : WingsofaDream
  • From Ladyroo88 on August 30, 2008
    I love it! O.O maybe harry can get some help with his eye sight!! Fenrir and harry work so well together!!! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on August 18, 2008
    I know! My little sister is fourteen and she asked me what rimming was when she visited me two weeks ago. Rimming! Come on, that's not something she should have even heard about. I didn't even know what it was before I was introduced to the wonderful world of fanfiction! *sigh* Anyways. I loved this chapter. So much happened without being rushed, AND another element was added to it. Harry had his first heat. Poor guy. I can only imagine what that must feel like. Luckily, Fenrir and he found a way to temporarily take care of things. And Fenrir is doing really well with Harry. I'm sad that 'boy' still upsets Harry so and sets him back to that time at the Dursleys'. But, again, Fenrir is doing well with the pup. Lucius, Severus, and whoever the other Death Eater was are going to be problems. Lucius suspected something, and Severus knows who the boy is. He'd know Lily's eyes anywhere and only two people that we know of have those eyes. I hope it's not too much of a problem, but we all know it will be. I'm excited for all the developments going on. Keep it up! ~dpa06~
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  • From jddammann on August 17, 2008
    Hey babe, still extremely good!


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  • From alma on August 17, 2008
    Good chapter. I wonder if Snape will put 2 and 2 together.
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  • From Jan on August 17, 2008
    Yay! I Love it!!! I can't wait to see what's Harry reaction and his decision after hearing about his parents and Voldemort and whom he really is!

    Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From on August 17, 2008
    As always, I love the this fic and all the chapters you create.
    That was hot and steaming for more action.
    Again...cant wait to read more.
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  • From Ladyroo88 on August 16, 2008
    I love it! I have read quite a few fenrir/harry storiesand this one is soo different than all the others! I really enjoy it! I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Hajime on August 16, 2008
    ooh. ....getting interesting already! ^^ great chapter dude! i simply squealed when i saw how long it was. (wiggles eyebrows) i also liked the way you made harry a beta rather than a submissive. while sub harry is fun, a change is refreshing ^^
    great job luv!
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  • From anniea on August 10, 2008
    ahhh i love this story, please update soon *kisses*
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  • From on August 07, 2008
    Hooray...they are together...and wow waht a kiss.
    Im pleasantly happy...
    What communication problems again??...nooooo!!!....oh, the trifles loved souls have to go through.
    Again...cant wait to read more.
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  • From LadyDraculea on August 06, 2008
    I love Fenrir/Harry stories, but unfortunately the grand majority of them involved rape and other such unpleasantness. I'm so very glad to have found your story that doesn't contain non-consent; the fact that it's well-written is just a bonus! I think you're doing a marvellous job of portraying Fenrir, his wildness and role as an alpha included. Bravo!

    Smile,
    Lady D
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  • From Lina03 on August 04, 2008
    Wow, what I wonderful story! I specially liked that you kept Fenrir in character and only changing him when it comes to his interactions with Harry. I have always loved stories where the big, bad, and psychotic have just the one weakness/exception to their usual ways. I can't wait for when Harry & Fenrir mate, for now Fenrir is protective and all, but once they mate I imagine his possessiveness and other werewolf instincts will become all the more earnest. Thank you for posting your work and I shall be awaiting your next update with anticipation!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on August 03, 2008
    I am sad the farmer, the farmer's wife, and the two policemen died. I am SO happy that Fenrir went and got Harry, and that Harry didn't drown himself in the bathtub. I was so worried the policemen would use guns on Fenrir or something. And I loved the way you described Harry while Fenrir was carrying out his quadruple murder. I remember feeling like that when my sister beat up a couple of people for me. You don't really see the violence, you don't see what they're doing. You only see that they're helping you, that they've come for you, that they're doing what you can't do yourself. I think of it as a tunnel vision kinda thing. And the kiss afterwards was perfect! I am so happy that Fenrir was so caught up in the moment... Harry too, for throwing himself at Fenrir like that. I would have. I loved the sex/mating conversation. I have to keep reminding myself that Harry has no clue. And after what Isaac's told him... I wanted to laugh when I read that part. But I am glad that Fenrir was up front: they will mate eventually, after Fenrir tells him what all mating entails. And he'll let Harry kiss him again! Yeah! I loved it. OMG, you're an amazing writer. ~dpa06~
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  • From jddammann on August 03, 2008
    Excellent chapter!

    Morgana
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on August 03, 2008
    Holy shite! No! They're separated! How long do they stay separated though? I mean, obviously they get back together, but Harry's with the farmer now. What's going to happen? And what about Fenrir? I mean, does he get out of the trap? Does he bust Harry out of the farmer's house? Does he steal Harry away? And OMG he slapped Harry! I tend to think of it as an open fist for Fenrir, because slapping just sounds so girly. And Fenrir, girly? Didn't think so. Oh man, this chapter was SO amazing! I was thinking about the plot and character development, and then I realized that this was only chapter 5!! Wow! So much in so short a time, but I feel like I'm at least 20 chapters in. It's so perfect. I don't mind the 'OMG you're hot and I'm going to screw you now' fics. But I love the drawn out ones so much more sometimes. And this is just amazing. Please, keep up the good work. And wow, this chapter. Harry's 13, he's kinda got the hots for Fenrir, and he's been 'taken prisoner' by a farmer with no Alpha for help or protection (kind of). Fenrir's an arse because he's got the hots for Harry, and now he's trapped in a bear trap without Harry. Oh, I can't wait for more! ~dpa06~
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