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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : WingsofaDream
  • From darkpyroangel06 on July 07, 2008
    My reviews tend ot be long because I don't think anything is truly said when someone writes "OMG that was amazing!" or "Update soon!". I mean, I get the jist of the message, obviously, but there's nothing else there. Plus, the 'update soon' ones just annoy me. But that's not what I'm supposed to be writing about. This chapter! It was amazing, truly. I love the play of emotions going on between this pair. I mean, Fenrir is still a cold hearted bastard, as he should be. But there's something more now, because of Harry. He cares for him and protects him, but he also cares /about him. And poor, naive Harry. "I thought I was your wife?" I almost fell off my bed laughing! I loved that. I almost thougt Harry was going to freak a bit when Fenrir was talking about the bitch who was presenting and the mate he fought and whatever, but Harry doesn't understand any of that. And why should he? It's not like anyone's explained it. Hell, Isaac and Fenrir make Harry climb a tree for three days a year so they won't be even tempted to rut with him. Noble of them, by the way. I just love the details and all the intricacies involved in your writing. It is truly amazing, and I love it. Keep up the amazing work. ~dpa06~
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  • From amazingZ on July 07, 2008
    awwh.. i'm so in love with this story. i really love the relationship of f/h. i hope it has a happy ending.
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  • From alma on July 06, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From on July 06, 2008
    I'm so glad that this is continuing and I absolutely love it.
    I'm always having this feeling of sadness that Dumble or Voldie is going to ruin this pair.
    I just don't want it to go there...I'd be surely crushed.
    Its also killing me that Fenrir is not communicating more with Harry... The boy got to know everything.
    Not knowing is whats going to be the downfall for those 2...
    I'm dying for those 2 step further into their relationship.

    Cant wait to read more...
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  • From Articwolf8556 on July 05, 2008
    This is a great story, I love the Harry Fenrir interaction. I'll be sad to seeHarry's childhood go but can't wait to see what happens as he grows.
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  • From Extraho on July 05, 2008
    aaaw! "to nuzzle the flat stomach, to tickle, to play, to, dare he even think it, cuddle" i could almost feel him shuddering at the thought! *giggles* so cute!!! i love it!!
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  • From Ladyroo88 on July 05, 2008
    Very interesting!! i love it!! Can't wait for two weeks from now!!!
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  • From lonelyreverance on July 05, 2008
    Living the way harry is it's not too farfetched for hime to grow up a little faster then one would in civilized society. i loved the assumption that harry made as to being fenrir's wife... and technically it's close, he's on the right track... which is the most amusing part! Can't wait to see more!
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  • From amysds on July 01, 2008
    i love it. there just aren't enough fenrir stories out where he isn't some psycho. He's acting like a father figure in this fic, I like how protective he is. Do you post anywhere else? Like somewhere that sends update alerts? amysds@hotmail.com
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  • From Lucifoy on June 27, 2008
    i lo0ve how Fenrir is all "love" for Harry, i want to see what happends with Dumbles and Hogwarts, uhh, dont take too long please!
    do you have a mailing list? i wish to know whenever a new chapter is up, if you have then my mail is zer0one_oz@yahoo.com, if you dont well then you have one more e-mail to write to when bored!

    bye!!
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  • From alma on June 24, 2008
    good chapter.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on June 23, 2008
    I like the time changes. I like that although you're moving the time along quickly, you're not moving the characters along quickly. I mean, Harry has grown more used to Fenrir (and Fenrir to Harry, obviously), and Harry accepts Fenrir as his Alpha way more easily, but it's not like they're making goo-goo eyes at each other already. I do like the bit about April being their heat month, even if it's only for three days. I liked that Harry didn't really know about it, although he did expect Fenrir to leave and/or tell him to climb a tree for a while. The owls is interesting though. I thought Harry was younger than eleven, but I guess leaving the Dursleys at age 6 and staying with Isaac for 4 years would make him right about the correct age to be gettin' Hogwarts letters. And Hagrid was a nice touch. Granted, Fenrir's little threat won't keep him off the trail for long. Dumbledore will still think something's up. I would too. Anywho, it was a great chapter. I love the character development. Keep it up. This is fantastic. ~dpa06~
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on June 23, 2008
    It may have taken me forever to review, but I did like this chapter. I love the play between the two of them. I mean, Fenrir took Harry with him to honour the request of Isaac even though he expected nothing from Harry except for him to be a burden. Just now, as Harry was climbing back down the tree, he realized that Harry might not be such a burden. Yes, he was Harry Potter. And yes, he is mostly human. But there's a survival technique to him, things that Isaac taught him so he could survive when Fenrir took him in. And that, the fact that Isaac knew Fenrir would appear and take Harry in... I liked it. ~dpa06~
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  • From Jan on June 22, 2008
    Very Interesting Story! Greatly written, love how slow and un rushed their relationship is developing ^_^
    Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Is Dumbledore going to be a problem? I can't seem to grasp a Dumbledore whom won't fight to have his weapon under his thump to do with as he pleases. Will they turn to Voldemort in the long run?

    Please update chapter 4 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From Articwolf8556 on June 22, 2008
    Great story and chapter, I wonder what could happen next and can't wait till the next chapter. I really like how the relationship is developing, but what about Harry's accedintal magic?
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