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Reviews for Sacrifice

By : WingsofaDream
  • From kyuubifreak on June 21, 2008
    i love thos story!!! i hope he will not go to that school
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  • From Madhater on June 21, 2008
    yep doing a wonderful job with the story its just awesome. keep up the good work and i hope to see and update soon. ^_^
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  • From Rosei on June 10, 2008
    A fine start!!! Lots of good detail!!!
    Like the way their relationship is starting out!!

    Thanks,
    R
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  • From KagetsuAsame on June 07, 2008
    Wonderful, keep it up!
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  • From Bonecollector on June 07, 2008
    Love this story. very well written, his emotions are well thought out on your part. very good. love this chapter.
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  • From applesaucensoysauce on June 07, 2008
    I do love this chapter as I did the last/first one.
    Wonderfully written...and I'm hooked.
    Its so smooth, flowing and captivating.
    I so cant wait to read more.
    I cant wait to see where this relationship will go.

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  • From Madhater on June 07, 2008
    Yay an update and a wonderful one at that it was very good, i like the whole Fenrir struggle with being nice thing its kind of funny.
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  • From akume on May 30, 2008
    Those few sentences were truly moving and heartfelt. Anyhow, I can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on May 27, 2008
    Awww, that was sad but I look forward to the next part, keep it up!
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  • From Eldorna on May 26, 2008
    That was really good. :) I was a little misty eyed at the end of the chapter. I hope you will continue.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on May 26, 2008
    Amazing! I loved it! This was perfect, and so new and fresh. I like the idea of Harry being raised as 'Pup' by this Isaac werewolf, only to be passed on to Fenrir. I like this Harry, though I haven't seen much of him. I seem to want to think that there's a fire beneath his submissive demeanor, one that Fenrir is going to find very shortly. I don't mind OCs, as long as they're not main characters. While Isaac is essential, he's not Harry or Fenrir or Dumbledore. Ya know what I'm sayin'? I'm excited for more, excited to see what Fenrir does and where they go and how he handles Harry. And, in return, I'm excited to see how Harry handles Fenrir. Fenrir and Isaac are very different, and Harry's used to Isaac. This is going to be great. And longer chapters? I'm all over that like white on rice! Keep it up! You're doing GREAT! ~dpa06~
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  • From tinkita on May 26, 2008
    Great chapter! I am looking forward to the update!!!
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  • From Felinity on May 25, 2008
    Good start, sounds like its going to be a good story :)
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  • From WesterlySama on May 25, 2008
    Hello ! This is an interesting beginning. The premises are original. Quiet and mature Harry is lovely. I find it really interesting that despite being bitten he hasn't transformed into a wolf. My guess is that it has something to do with the prophecy. Say he can't have anything incapacitate him until Voldemort is dead...well it did sound a good idea until I wrote it down hum...Anyway, gruff Fenrir is good too. I know he's kind of a psycho in HP but hey, a bit of OOCness sometimes doesn't hurt. It's sad that they lose Isaacs he seemed like a good man. I can already see Fenrir's reaction when he'll really realise what he's got himself into.
    thank you for sharing, I'll look forward to reading the next chapter ! Until then !
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  • From Bonecollector on May 25, 2008
    very good beginning

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