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By : WingsofaDream
  • From ANON - Spiros on June 22, 2009
    I'm very sorry about your rabbit Cyanide... I'm still in awe of your talented writing skills.
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  • From ANON - AngelMary89 on June 22, 2009
    Good story so far. How come Harry isn't showing any of his magical powers? Or is he not a wizard in this fic and just another boy?
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  • From ANON - LALA on June 22, 2009
    Wow! I absolutely love the Sirius scene and Harry's battle with the basilisk makes sense considering he doesn't use his magic. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 21, 2009
    Oh, no! Your poor little bunny! ;_____; I wish I could send you some flowers, but you'll just have to have some virtual hugs of comfort, instead. *huggles*

    Moving on, hooray for the slaying of the basilisk! XD ..... Why can't I think of anything else to say??? O___o;; Maybe I'm still grieving for little Cyanide. Yeah, that's it. TT___TT *huggles you again*

    I will say this, though; great job on yet another awesome chapter. ^w^ Can't wait for the fallout, though. lol X3 *hugs Dream-sama one last time*
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  • From ANON - TAB on June 20, 2009
    I continue to really enjoy this story! Keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 20, 2009
    First of all, I'm very sorry about the loss of your rabbit. It's very hard when a pet dies, even more so when it happens before their time (I know, my first kitten died when he was 11 months old).

    On to the story, great chapter! I cannot wait for Fenrir to wake up. I wonder how old Dumbles and Severus will react to hearing Harry speak Parseltongue. Keep going!
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on June 15, 2009
    Sorry it took me so long to read and review, and sorry this is so short. I'll probably come back later tomorrow or later this week to review again. I'm just too damn tired right to write that much. Details will follow later, I promise.

    This was amazing. Love the scene with the spiders, and I love how they got away. I'm happy Harry found out, from Hermione (*grin*), what it is that's terrorizing the school. I'm saddened that Ginny's being driven to do all these things, including rampage through Harry and Fenrir's rooms. I hope things turn upwards for her like they did in the real HP book. I'm sad the journal's gone, but maybe Harry will tell Severus about the note from Hermione and his trashed rooms and the journal. He needs to explain it to Fenrir too, because Fenrir just thinks he had the journal because he wanted it or something, I'm sure. He doesn't understand that Harry doesn't really understand it. Anyways, great chapter. ~dpa06~
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 15, 2009
    Eeeeeee~! I can see this and that, and this and that from canon and I loves it! XD The only question that remains is who will Harry ask for help? Who will help him whether he wants it or not? I'm sure I'll see soon enough. ;3 *hugs Dream-sama*
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  • From ANON - kati-chan on June 14, 2009
    OOOOHH! BAD GINNY! *teehee*

    Now, you know how much I love you, but I've got something negative to say. (Sorry.)

    It's just that, well, isn't this just a re-telling of the original story? I mean, the first "arc", if you will, when Harry and Fenrir were in the forest together, that was original. But most of the stuff that has happened in the school is just the same adventures under different circumstances, y'know? Maybe you could just kinda give a recap of sorts of what has happened that maybe you don't need to go into too much detail about, eg. the trip into the forest, and then move on to more original events. Cause you could read this story without having read the Harry Potter series and would still understand everything that's happening. But everyone reading the fic has read Harry Potter, so, I dunno, you could maybe take that into account.

    But yeah. There you go. I still love the story, that's just something you could maybe try to improve.

    ~kati-chan
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 13, 2009
    Dum dum dum!
    Nice solution to the spider dilemma. I was wondering how you were going to pull that off without the flying car coming to the rescue.
    Interesting to see Draco and Ron putting up with one another for Harry's sake (even though they still make snide comments to one another...)
    Great chapter! keep going!
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 13, 2009
    *cues eerie music* And so the plot thickens!
    Sweet...can't wait for the up and coming....
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  • From danawarner on June 13, 2009
    Slight flaw in your story. How did Ginny even get IN Harry's rooms. Very few people know the password and the Weasleys aren't any of those people.
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  • From darkpyroangel06 on June 08, 2009
    Yes! You're horrible! I want to know what this big turn of events is. I MUST know. Tell me. Tell me now, or I will sick my Goa'ulds and Jaffas on you! They'll hurt you too, they don't like Terrans... And chocolate cake is only bested by... No. There is no besting.

    As for the review - I loved this fic as well. I totally saw Fenrir being petrified. I knew it would upset Harry. But, wow, I /feel like I want to cry myself! I mean, at least Fenrir kinda figured it out, right before he was petrified. I want to think this is what will motivate Harry to find out what's really happening. Does Ginny still get taken? I mean, she's acting weird and all. But she doesn't have the diary. Hmmm... I'm kinda glad and kinda not glad that Harry and Sirius have made nice again. I mean, he was a right bastard. But he's there for Harry when Harry needs him most. *sigh* So complicated! I do /love that he went to Severus though. I saw that coming as soon as he left his rooms after the nightmare, but I'm okay with pegging that one. I like that Severus is there for Harry like that. I'm just worried about them smelling like one another when Fenrir is un-petrified. That could prove dangerous. Then again, maybe not. Fenrir's become more and more used to Severus being around and "on" Harry (his scent, I mean). I'm excited to see where this goes, as always. But remember, if it's not good, I'm sicking the Goa'uld on you. Prepare to be hosted. *grin* *evil laughter* *choke* *wheeze* ~dpa06~
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  • From ANON - Kuromei on June 07, 2009
    ;_______;

    At least Fenrir saw the snake's eyes through a ghost. It wasn't Nearly-Headless Nick, was it? Oh well, I suppose it doesn't really matter in the end. What matters is that Fenrir's Petrified and Harry needs to do something about it! .... With help, of course. X3 *hugs Dream-sama*
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  • From ANON - Spiros on June 06, 2009
    ...I think I was gonna have a heart attack or something cause I thought Fenrir died. Poor Harry's being a ball of angst lately. XD
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