Click Here!

Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 22, 2008
    OK, I LOVE Hugo, one of the most adorable and smartest OC kids ever...and I'm so glad they got Al outta there, even though Al kinda creeps me out, he's still Harry's kid. lol Damn Sev, he almost get out OK...wringing hands...Great chapter Emily. The action is intense and I can't wait to see what happens next. You better not kill Sev or Harry::shaking fists at you:::
    Report Review

  • From jddammann on November 22, 2008
    I am so stressed! Which is what I'm sure you wanted. :-) Great chapter, when is the next? Just leave me with this horrible worry for Severus! :-)

    Looking forward to the next chapter as always.
    Report Review

  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 22, 2008
    @ Last Words: OH NO!!! Poor Sev having to lie to Harry like that. Plushie Harry....haven't you put Harry through enough woman!! I demand them to shag ASAP! I hope this plan works, even with Sev's detailed letter, I'm still a bit nervous. And I hope Harry understands why he had to do what he did afterwards. Geez.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - moma on November 22, 2008
    .... Simply without words...
    Report Review

  • From cravedom on November 20, 2008
    The last words? That is a worrisome tittle.

    Everything made sense once explained. Well OK Percy is an idiot and he does not make sense but at least we know what happend, how and why and the explaination was logical. Is it wrong that I mourn the house-elf more that Ginny?
    Report Review

  • From Leentjef on November 20, 2008
    very very good chapter keep up th egraet work
    and post sooner bye bye
    Report Review

  • From jddammann on November 18, 2008
    Wonderful, and leaving me wanting more as always.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on November 18, 2008
    Awesome chapter. Well worth the wait (even thought I was starting to think that you had dropped off the earth there for a little while!)
    The way Severus can orchestra his plans is still really incredible. I wonder, will he ever get a rest chance to rest?
    Keep going!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - theseachange on November 18, 2008
    This does seem like the kind of thing Snape would do, especially if he felt there were practical reasons for others to stay clear of the worst of the risks. I loved Chap 62. You did a great job of showing Snape the spy being entirely convincing to Percy, gaining his trust and manipulating him, all for a completely different set of motives than Percy assumes.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - isadax on November 18, 2008
    You aren't going to kill severus, are you ? No, please , no no no no.....
    I know i am pathetic.

    Report Review

  • From ANON - whitehound on November 18, 2008
    PS I think that's a fair assessment of Albus. He *was* fond of Severus and he *did* see him as a friend, but he saw him as a tool first. He saw everybody that way, especially Harry. And since he also saw himself as a tool first - so much so that his immediate reaction to his own impending death was "How can I use this to further the cause?" - that was fair enough.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - whitehound on November 18, 2008
    Good - he's not being a martyr. He can track the cockatrice, and he knows Harry can if necessary track *him*.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - anon on November 18, 2008
    wonderful
    Report Review

  • From callistianstar on November 18, 2008
    Well, I'm super glad he wrote that letter. Seriously. This might be an odd comment: but knowing Hermione and later Ron and Harry, they'll probably be happy to have such step-by-step instructions, if I remember the last events of Book 1 correctly. Very nostalgic parting with Harry and Severus. I really hope that the "battlefield" will not be the last time the two meet. It is nice to have Severus' thoughts on Al and the dust. Even as a reader, he holds a reassuring presence for a fictional character. Wonderful job, and I look forward to the next few chapters, peeking through my fingers, and praying things end happily. I'm not asking for a "neat tie with a bow," but happy! ...lol ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Black Nightshade on November 18, 2008
    that's so sad, don't let him be killed...I hope he will survive
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!