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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - qwerty on October 22, 2008
    Damn. Percy bending so easily to the group's demands did seem a little suspicious... Severus' spying days serve him well here. Though wouldn't it better to wait till morning when everyone has a fresh start to confront Percy? Then he could have the gang's support. I'm eager to see what Percy has up his sleeve.
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - PenguinASM on October 22, 2008
    Oooooh, I always KNEW Percy was an ass... Breathlessly anticipating another fabulous installment!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on October 22, 2008
    Woo-hoo, a update..and boy what an update. I can see all the pressure that Ron and Hermione have been under. they both deserve a break after all they've been through. I can't wait until this mess with the kids is over...and yay! for hot Sev/Harry sexytime. : D And that damn puzzle, I knew it was no good...Percy always was a git, no surprise there, can't wait to see his full role in all of this...yay for smart Sev!! And Death? I wonder who you're gonna off? You evil woman you... *smirk*
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  • From callistianstar on October 22, 2008
    Holy fuck. -_- Seriously Ms. Waters? I spend all this time, believing that things could only be going on this uphill work for Book 2. Not that I wasn't fascinated in my own way of the disgusting nature of Book 1. I was. But now, Character death? And probably without the pretty lights of limbo? Frankly this has me on edge. That was the first thing I read before starting this chapter, and I was wide eyed, scanning but reading the material awaiting bad news. To be honest I can't really recall Percy's involvement in this story at all, but it didn't unplesantly surprise me that he was behind at least some of this horrid twist. I do wish that Severus would be smart enough to note that companionship is a good thing and to involve the others in the Percy-cornering manuever would be a smart thing to do. Since it is not Neville, probably (at all), it does worry me that the children are in Percy's hand, as I don't believe that he'd be quite so kind to the children. Wonderful job for almost causing my heart to stop from panic. lol I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Black Nightshade7 on October 22, 2008
    Wow, the last chapters are great, hope you'll update soon. I saw that another warning was added. ...Death...I just hope it will not be Severus or Harry and that they will have a Happy End together...they would deserve that after all the things they have been through..
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on October 22, 2008
    Wow that was rather unexpected from Percy, I wonder why he bugged that puzzle piece. This is getting more complicated than I thought
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  • From ANON - Ginnyvere on October 22, 2008
    wuuuuah, it's getting enthralling again :D Great you haven't written to long about Severus' recovery :)

    I'm really excited what will happen next. Thank you for this superb story! (:


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  • From jddammann on October 18, 2008
    I would like to comment about Ron or Hernione or their reltionship, but they are your charcters and not mine. You are playing everyone beautifully for this story as always, but at some point after the angst and drama there will be a happy ending for Severus and Harry.? Loving the drama with everyone else, but you would never let anyone else pay for what they havn't done especially after all they (and we) have been through.
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  • From lilpotter on October 09, 2008
    i don't care neville.i hope harry is good guy please.i love harry/snape.
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  • From ANON - KillingProphet on October 09, 2008
    Sorry to lazy to log in.

    Is it just me or does Ron seem like he has the sprinkling of dust on him?
    KP
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  • From kawaiiyashie on October 06, 2008
    tisk tisk Ronald. well that was a nice chapter please do update soon.
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  • From ANON - ladyedgecombe on October 06, 2008
    That is so typical of the Ron character that showed throughout the books. His temper always alienates people until he calms down and then it takes alot to make him see the other side of things. I always thought this was a very selfish part of his character. Poor Neville, and the children, I hope things workout for them.
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  • From ANON - Seraphiccandy on October 06, 2008
    Great story, wow you just keep coming up with new twists in the plot :)!!! So does it have any significance that the covenant is broken? I mean is Harry going to do anything bad O.o? Hope not...they're doing so well right now...
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  • From ANON - qwerty on October 05, 2008
    Holy crap! I can see where Ron is coming from but damn! That was one explosive ending to a chapter!
    I like how you are keeping Ron in character because he always cracks under extreme pressure, and then flips out.
    Really awesome chapter! Great job!

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  • From Leentjef on October 05, 2008
    omg he can't do that
    keep going and post sooooooooooooon
    bye bye
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