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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - athenakt from Live/Insanejournal on September 26, 2008
    Aigh! This is a wonderfully frustrating and agonizing fic thus far. One thought: Snape never identified himself by name to Dumbledore's portrait. That might have been a good idea as sometimes phrases or words might be keyed to undo or to do something...

    On to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 26, 2008
    Wow, its so nice that everyone is slowly starting to accept Harry and his relationship with Severus. I wonder what Al ang Ginny will say when they find out about Severus
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  • From callistianstar on September 25, 2008
    The mirror scene was very touching. :) I'm a bit wary about the next chapter, and surprised that Snape didn't remember to think of the excuse that Al ran away from him. Although Harry's admission of "permanent" may have distracted him, I suppose. I'm worried about Albus's reaction, but I hope it goes well. I can't imagine Ginny will be a stellar character here. I really hope that Luna and Neville can be together. It is too bad that seeing Harry and Severus heal, and being reassured that he wasn't bad for watching out allow him the motivation once again to start over (with Luna), but I hope that this dynamic changes. Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - Black Nightshade7 on September 25, 2008
    Severus is healing. That's wonderful.:-) I really love chapters with so much harmony.

    But I think there is still something wrong, I can't define what it is, but Albus reacted kind of strange when he saw Severus last time.., so perhaps this meeting with Severus, Albus and Harry won't be positiv...and you said something about a major crisis and all the other reviewers thought it could happen something to Severus and Harry when there're out with the cockatrices...but that would be too easy??
    I'm not sure, but could there be a crisis after this meeting??

    Soo I cant't wait to read the next chapter:-)
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  • From ANON - whitehound on September 25, 2008
    Very nice that now he has places where he is welcomed and belongs, and he's realised it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 25, 2008
    Severus is healing! And even Neville acknowledge that! *happy dance*
    I love how the Cockatrice are following Severus around; too cute!
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - saraphiccandy on September 25, 2008
    wow. that was amazing. After hours of reading I thought I was nearing the end and it seems like theres still unfinished bussiness to write about. I think your writing style is really well developed and the way you have portrayed all the characters is really believable. A lot of other authors tend to make Severus into this self-assured sex god. you have succeeded in making him so much more human and so much more believable as a person while keeping him completly in character.Also, I appreciate the fact that they still havn't had actual sex yet. I thought I would mind and get annoyed but I havn't. Really its quite starteling to me as I usually only read porn without a plot type storys.lol. But this story really captured my imagination and I hope you continue writing so that I can continue reading :)
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on September 21, 2008
    Wow just wow. I love how Harry is being so patient with severus and really showing him that he actually cares.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 20, 2008
    What a warm, fluffy scene amid all the strife that Severus had to put up with!
    Lovely chapter! Great job!
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  • From SuzieGeorge on September 20, 2008
    '"There's no such thing as too much information," he said gravely. "All date is valuble."'

    Genius... just... genius! ^_^ ROFLMAO
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  • From callistianstar on September 19, 2008
    Very sweet. There was no little amount of "aww"ing coming from me with this chapter. Besides that one "Ooo" during the obvious scene. But seriously, nice. I love the comment about the range of Snape's eyes' emotions from Severus. :)
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  • From jddammann on September 19, 2008
    Still wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on September 19, 2008
    You know, I don't think anyone's ever asked to love Severus before. I'm sure he's more than a little frightened by it--but in this case the slave bond is actually helping him to lie back and enjoy it.
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  • From ANON - whitehound on September 19, 2008
    I suppose it's a matter of nomenclature but I wouldn't call that submission, and I wouldn't have thought Harry would - it's more like relaxing and going with the flow. It would probably be good for Severus, anyway - letting him know that it's possible to let his guard down and not be hurt as a result. But it would take months at least, probably years, to build up his self-confidence.
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  • From ANON - Black Nightshade 7 on September 19, 2008
    Hey Emily,

    sorry I didn't review the last chapters. I'm have final exam, and a lot of stress and not much time left for other things.
    This chapter was just great. I think this is my most favourite chapter so far. They are so great together. Finally Severus beginns to trust and to relax.
    Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    :-)

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