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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - qwerty on September 10, 2008
    I love Hugo! And of course he's precocious with Hermione as his mother! Although, I think there is also something a little bit special with Hugo beyond just good genes. There's just something about him that pulls you in.
    Great chapter!
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  • From Leentjef on September 10, 2008
    very good chapter
    keep up the good work
    post
    bye bye
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  • From cravedom on September 10, 2008
    A promise...

    A promise can be such a wonderful thing, it brings hopes and dreams and can even make one feel youthful and content. However when a promise if broken the heart ache makes one wish that the promise had never been uttered in the first place. I find promises scarry but in this case it does seem like a good thing.


    I would like to hear more about the cockatrice, it is nice that they have this project in common,that gives them something to do other than thinking obsessively about the bond.


    Will we get to see Albus at some point? Is he really afraid of Harry or is this in Harry's head? Sometimes adults have conversations around children that are overheard and we know there is a lot of things Harry did that were scarry. I do hope that his relationship with his kid get better over time.
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  • From cravedom on September 10, 2008
    A promise...

    A promise can be such a wonderful thing, it brings hopes and dreams and can even make one feel youthful and content. However when a promise if broken the heart ache makes one wish that the promise had never been uttered in the first place. I find promises scarry but in this case it does seem like a good thing.


    I would like to hear more about the cockatrice, it is nice that they have this project in common,that gives them something to do other than thinking obsessively about the bond.


    Will we get to see Albus at some point? Is he really afraid of Harry or is this in Harry's head? Sometimes adults have conversations around children that are overheard and we know there is a lot of things Harry did that were scarry. I do hope that his relationship with his kid get better over time.
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  • From ANON - whitehound on September 10, 2008
    Severus being a bit of a biting puzzle himself, of course....

    It's a very good point that Harry and Severus each feel, of the other, "I did something terrible but so long as he's survived, the situation isn't beyond hope."
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  • From Menecarkawan on September 09, 2008
    Wow... that was really sad at the end there. Poor Harry. How will he live with hiimself?
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  • From Menecarkawan on September 09, 2008
    Oooo... Ballsy
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  • From Menecarkawan on September 09, 2008
    Okay, I'm big enough to admit when I'm wrong. In my defense, though, it was a good theory.
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  • From Menecarkawan on September 09, 2008
    And here I thought Hermione was smart. What do they all have in common? They all love Harry in some way shape or form. Duh... I had that figured out two chapters ago.
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  • From Leentjef on September 01, 2008
    very very good chapter keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From callistianstar on August 31, 2008
    oOoh. I really liked that. The conditions were well set, and I like the whole zone of freedom and independence Severus will DEFINITELY have now. Neville is good, and he was already the Secret Keeper for Ginny, so awesomeness. This way we might see how he is doing? And Luna too? In any case I really like how you approached the part where Harry didn't ask for anything, and Snape got upset over that. Nice job with this chapter.
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  • From ANON - whitehound on August 31, 2008
    I foresee a point at which Harry is going to have to break that Covenant and trace Severus's brand in order to save his life....

    His sense of inadequacy, his fear that the least thing is a slight, is very well drawn but I'm not sure I believe in the last bit, in him saying he would ask to be leashed or to have his wings clipped. That doesn't seem to go with the rest of it, or of him, at all.

    You've got a possible if minor Britpick. In Britain, and especially afaik in the north of England which is where Severus probably comes from, "pet" is a general form of comfortably affectionate address, similar to "honey" in the US. "Hello pet, did you have a good day at school?" "Come on pet, don't get upset" - that sort of thing. It's *possible* I suppose that Severus might tell Harry not to call him pet because he was thinking only of the literal meaning and had a forgotten the affectionate one - probably not that many people in his life have addressed him affectionately after all - but it does feel a little odd coming from a northerner.

    [FYI, there are actually some areas in the north of England where people you are well-disposed towards - even if they are strangers - may be addressed as "lover" or "my lover".]
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  • From ANON - JB on August 30, 2008
    I'm finding this very interesting -- enough so that I spent the last few hours reading it from beginning to end. I just hope they are all allowed some respite in the end, including Neville. Also, I like your Hermione and Ron, sometimes they are handled quite badly in fanfic but they feel right together in your story.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 30, 2008
    This Covenant could have went so many ways, I like that they came to a gentle understanding that benefits Sev in every way. It was really sad to read that Sev's automatic response to Harry not wanting anything was to think he had nothing to offer. I'm glad Harry picked up on his gaffe, even though we all knew why he said that. Although I understand why Sev doesn't want to be tracked, I think in an emergency it's a blessing to be marked, but of course I'm not bound in slavery the way he is...I hope that little clause doesn't backfire. Harry's reaction to Hermione' being the Guardian was understandable but a little disheartening, I mean his comment especially about her inability to protect Sev the first time. That wasn't really fair considering who he was the first time around. But I am glad it will be Neville, although I wonder how Neville will react to the covenant, being morally opposed to what it stands for considering what he saw in the first book. I can't wait to see how they live with it and if it serves it purpose or poses other unforseen constraints. I guess this means that Harry can never really whip Severus, even in passion? Pity : D
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on August 30, 2008
    Wow chapter 52 was surely something else. I felt something change between them although I am not sure about it. I just feel like that covenant was a big turning point for the both of them
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