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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on July 30, 2008
    Snicker--they both see the parallel (one reason both of them got along so well with Hagrid, I suppose). Cockatrice(s), Snape, and at times, Harry--they _should_ get along quite nicely! Won't breed in captivity, interpret magical barriers as a prison--I love the extra frills you throw in there to hammer the point home. Great chapter.
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  • From sweetciel on July 30, 2008
    So harry is that sensitive? SEXY!
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  • From ANON - Fairner on July 30, 2008
    Ch 45:
    lolz all sev's fault =P
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  • From callistianstar on July 30, 2008
    Although I wasn't expecting that from Severus, I'm happy to see him at his amused self. :D That was simply wonderful. lol Wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 30, 2008
    I love the banter between Snape and Harry. It so adorable!
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  • From ANON - whitehound on July 30, 2008
    Yes - it would be a sensible move for Harry to let Severus do the seducing and be the one who is leading in a sexual situation, until he's settled down and built up enough good associations with Harry's body not to be continually freaked out by the bad ones. It's much less threatening for Severus, and much less guilt-inducing for Harry, to have Severus be in command at this point and Harry being, or appearing to be, the needy one.

    Couple of Britpicks in this one. Severus is probably much too dignified and of too old a generation to use an Americanism like "Sure" to mean "Yes, go ahead" - he would say "Fine". And he would not think of a chocolate frog as "children's candy" but as "a child's sweet". The word "candy" here in Britain is used for only a very narrow range of sweets, which do not include chocolate.

    I was pleased to see you didn't follow the annoying and rather sadistic fanon habit of making chocolate frogs animate, btw. In the books it was only peppermint toads which moved, and then only after you'd swallowed them.
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 30, 2008
    Mmmmm. That was delicious. Splendid chapter with just the right amount of fluff and smut. Please udpate again soon.
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  • From ANON - wicca2star11 on July 30, 2008
    >///< This is hilarious! in a good way, im not making fun of your writing. Its magnificent actually ^_^ I just think the encounter very funny. And its cute how they're getting comfortable around each other. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 30, 2008
    Wow that was just sexy. I loved it. Totally and utter sensual, the way Severus touched Harry and made him come.
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on July 29, 2008
    It's interesting how much differently Harry reacts to the slave bond without Voldemort's Dust than Dumbledore did on his end--makes you wonder if Albus _could_ love _anyone_ if he could treat Snape the way he did without the excuse of Moldy Oldy on the brain. Snape is also clearly much happier than he ever was under the Headmaster's thumb, though he obviously doubts it's going to last very long--in his experience, kindness is fleeting, while numbness is the best one can hope for during the rest of it. Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - moma on July 29, 2008
    1 of the things I love about your work is that no matter how much I try to guess where is everything heading to,I NEVER NEVER can.Poor Severus,I really believe he needs some shoulder to cry on,aknowledge Harry's and his own feelings , and pretty fast i would say.Otherwise, he will never be able to accept the love he is being oferred as a genuine thing.Please go on with this awsome story....for all our sakes!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sam on July 28, 2008
    all i can say is wow! this story is absolutely beautiful. its soooo touching and i can hardly wait to read the rest. keep up the hard work and thanks for sharing this story with us.
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  • From on July 28, 2008
    Congrats on such incredible work!!!
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  • From ANON - whitehound on July 28, 2008
    Very good, and very, very difficult - giving him the affection he needs without undermining his dignity and making him feel pathetic will require an emotional and social finesse Harry probably doesn't have, although asking him to stay because Harry needs him is a good start.

    Good creepy moment with the hair-braiding thing. As a wizard, he's used to the idea that people may be compelled to act against their natures by Imperius so he probably finds it easier to think and really beleive "It wasn't really him that hurt me" than a Muggle would find it. At the same time, he may know intellectually that it wasn't Harry who abused him, but it was still Harry's body and the event is in Harry's memory as well as his, so he's still going to associate having his hair handled by these hands with forced submission and being suddenly struck.

    And he wants, really, to be stroked like a cat and be able to relax and enjoy it like a cat, but because Tom-in-Harry stroked him as well as struck him, the very thing that should relax him has become associated with shame and danger, and makes him tense up.
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  • From ANON - Black Nightshade7 on July 28, 2008
    I liked this chapter:-), it totally fits, I don't think it's too early that Severus stays close to Harry and wants to be touched. I think you described it perfectly.
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