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Reviews for Ashes of Armageddon

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - qwerty on July 17, 2008
    Wow. You would think that Severus would be missing Harry more than Harry missing Severus... or could be that Severus is stubborn as hell (which he is) and that Harry feels so much for others (which he does).
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - whitehound on July 17, 2008
    Lovely bit of business with the hippogriff - if anyone deserves to be bowed to by a hippogriff, it's Snape.

    Can't agree with the characterization of Ginny, though - canon Ginny is a hard-boiled little piece who would probably welcome a monster under the bed as something to practise her hexes on. She was the one who thought it was a shame Harry didn't kill Draco with Sectumsempra, iirc.

    Ferrets aren't rodents, btw - they're mustelids.
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on July 17, 2008
    This chapter is really poignant Emily. You had me tearing up, literally. I loved how mature, wise, and grounded Harry seems after all he's been through. His honesty and depth of feeling for Severus is so overwhelming, I'm not sure how Sev didn't just melt right there, especially when he touched him like that. I LOVED the way you put them in the backdrop of the colony and how Severus was totally caught off guard...I have a feeling that will happen again and again as their relationship changes. I'm so glad 'the Ginny' is out of the way and they can maybe now get to the business of getting closer in whatever way they can after all they've been through : )
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  • From EventualDawn on July 17, 2008
    I love this story, Emily. Kudos.
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  • From emilywaters on July 15, 2008
    theseachange: Re: Finding the story (Gifts of the Magi) - I've thought about sending Snape to a Muggle library (and for all I knew, Hermione might have expected him to go to one); but decided to take it easy on him and let him get lucky in a book shop. After all, many book shops already have internet connections, even if the shop owner didn't know the story, she could have googled it. I find it a little less likely that she'd have the book so conveniently HANDY to be purchased but, I figure, a smart shop owner might have ordered a couple of copies of the story just for Christmas. Oh well, now Hermione has the book she'd already read, and Severus is going to annoy Harry at work : )
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on July 15, 2008
    Very nicely done Hermoine. That was such a smart thing to do and I knew Harry was staying away because Severus told him so. I love how Hermoine knows how Severus will react, it amuses me
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  • From ANON - theseachange on July 15, 2008
    Good chapter, with one slight concern. The story of "The Gift of the Magi" works very well, except that it is such a very American story, by the *very* American author, O. Henry. I can easily imagine Hermione having read it, given that it was written close to the start of the 20th century, but it seems less likely that she'd expect Snape to find out about the story without a visit to a muggle library (or internet access).
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  • From lilpotter on July 15, 2008
    neville and snape.no no no.if neville fallen in love snape and snape with be neville iam stop reading.i want snape and harry scenes.and i want they are becoming happy couple.please
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  • From ANON - moma on July 15, 2008
    You amaze me, my Lady!!!!!Each new chapter is more beautiful than te previous one!Are they meeting finally?Severus needs to believe,really believe,that he is loved...I'm looking forward to read that scene...
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  • From ANON - Jean Lamb on July 14, 2008
    At last, a chapter with some hope. Harry may have meant well indeed, believing his presence was a blight upon the land to Snape, and given what happened, it's a very reasonable supposition. But Harry is not the sort to do any research on slave bonds, nor would he be especially inclined to listen to Hermione on them as long as Snape stayed away.

    Yet...Harry owes Severus any heart's-ease that Snape wants. Slavery changes the master as well as the slave, and I suspect there may be a dank feeling of reciprocity owed that's been bothering him, too--but given Snape's silence (and near-death from that silence), I'm sure he didn't want to presume. Not after how much he, and Tom _did_ presume, after all.

    Looking forward to move. Oh, and I adore Hugo!
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  • From Leentjef on July 14, 2008
    VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTERS
    KEEP UPTHE GREAT WORK AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 14, 2008
    @Gifts. YES! Ingenious Hermione comes through again. LOVED the gift, the story....I vaguely remember it...how haunting. And I love that Hermione knew he was coming over and that Snape always had access to their wards. I also loved Hugo playing with Severus's wand way before the age he should be handling one..he's gonna be a real smart one..and that he offered it back, what a sweet child. I wonder where Harry works...very far away? Can't wait to see what happens when Severus shows up to see him!!! Update soon : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 14, 2008
    @guises of the mind. OH GOD. How do you do this....you sink me right down in the depths of despair and misery along with Severus. What suffering! And to think that he can actually rationalize every bit of it, whether out of regret, remorse, guilt, or the obligation to 'please' his Master, it's all so terribly romantic and just plain terrible at once. No one deserves to live like this! I hope Harry seeks him out...and forget Ginny, please DISRUPT!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 14, 2008
    @Guest Room....aww., poor Neville. he really has been through some shit, no? I'm still a little mad at harry, even though I know it was really dust, that torture/rape thing still makes me shudder. I agree with Ron that Neville saved George when he did what he did, but at what price? I'm glad that Severus heard all of that. Maybe he could reach out to Neville or at least began to work on his own healing by talking about what happened with him? I'm so glad hermione honored her word and didn't say anything, Neville as well. It's gonna be a long road to recovery for all of them : (
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 14, 2008
    @Moments of mercy. Gasp....that was so painful to hear. Severus cracing those rare moments. How awful for him....I LOVE Hugo in this tale...he's so needed and I'm glad he's bringing light into all of their lives...Severus with his stubbon, solitary ways. Thank goodness for Hermione as well. in fact, I love how you're treating all of the *side* characters in a way that it underscores the importance of having family and connections to others....I wonder how they will deal with this unpleasant aspect of the bond?
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